xsophx
Junior Luby
"some people won't settle for anything less than butterflies"
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Post by xsophx on Jun 15, 2006 21:18:54 GMT 10
Hi guys this is my first fanfic so be kind! Set a couple of years in the future, Abby and Luka got married in Croatia, Abby did not have a hysterectomy ;-) Here goes ....
Luka was surrounded by darkness as he arrived home from the night shift at county, he knew his family wouldn't be up yet so he slowly entered his bedroom where he caught his first glimpse of her. Luka smiled and let out a little sigh, this is what he came home to everyday and he still couldn't quite believe how lucky he felt to have finally settled into family life with Abby, the woman he had loved for countless years. As Luka approached the bed he noticed the way the streetlight from outside showered Abby in a warm glow, he never could get over how beautiful she was. She stirred with a slight groan, "Luka?" She questioned into darkness. Luka gently stroked hair away from her cheek, "Ssh, I'm home, go back to sleep." After carefully getting undressed so he didn't wake his wife, Luka climbed into bed next to her and after watching her peacefully, finally gave into sleep.
What do you think? should i carry on?
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Post by Luby14 on Jun 15, 2006 21:32:11 GMT 10
yes carry on!! please! it's a great start!
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Post by Ergirl on Jun 15, 2006 21:43:11 GMT 10
Yup...keep going...i like it!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jun 16, 2006 0:33:00 GMT 10
Great start!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 16, 2006 0:44:00 GMT 10
Great start!
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Post by chief8abug on Jun 16, 2006 1:15:13 GMT 10
Ohew, I like! :(More please!
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Post by anna982 on Jun 16, 2006 1:50:38 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Do carry on. Great start.[/glow]
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Post by megan on Jun 16, 2006 2:16:58 GMT 10
that was nice...please continue!
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xsophx
Junior Luby
"some people won't settle for anything less than butterflies"
Posts: 43
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Post by xsophx on Jun 16, 2006 5:34:18 GMT 10
thanx guys i was scared itd be rubbish! okidoke il update tomorrow
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Post by rorygilmore on Jun 16, 2006 11:52:28 GMT 10
Abby did not have a hysterectomy ;-) Ah, God bless ya , and definitely carry on, please
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xsophx
Junior Luby
"some people won't settle for anything less than butterflies"
Posts: 43
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Post by xsophx on Jun 16, 2006 21:14:19 GMT 10
thanks for being nice! here's the 2nd part:
Abby was in the kitchen making coffee when the phone rang, breaking her thoughts, "Shit" she muttered trying to grab the phone before it woke Luka, but it was too late, the ringing stopped as she heard him grumble an answer in the bedroom. "mm hmm, sure i'll just get her" Abby heard Luka say as she walked into the room, she looked at Luka questioningly, "Your mother" he mouthed handing over the phone. Abby took the phone whilst rolling her eyes and made her way back to the kitchen.
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As Abby hung up still in daze over the conversation, little Joe walked into the room in his pj's, teddy in one arm, rubbing his eyes with the other and with a slightly confused expression on his adorable face. Abby smiled to herself, Joe may be the spitting image of Luka but he was just like her in a morning, "Mommy? i heard the phone" "I'm sorry baby" Abby replied scooping him up into her arms, "What would you like for breakfast this morning?" "Pizza!!" Joe replied with his cheeky grin Abby chuckled, shaking her head, "How about we have pancakes instead?" She looked at her son who seemed to be taking the question very seriously, "Yeah ok" he replied, "Daddy!" he yelled excitedly Luka came into the kitchen, and kissed Abby good morning as she handed over their son. "Hey buddy" "Daddy we're having pancakes for breakfast" "Really? well i don't think you deserve pancakes mr" Luka replied starting a tickling game with Joe, who laughed and giggled in delight.
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As the three settled at the table Abby could feel Luka watching her, "So...?" Luka questioned Continuing to look at her food and only glancing at Luka, Abby replied, "So?" "Abby come on" The tone of his calm and soothing voice made Abby look up, "Your mother called, there must be a reason?" Abby took a deep breath and looked away again, "Erm...it's my dad," she began, "He spoke to Maggie...he wants to see me." Abby looked back at Luka who was watching her closely, she waved her hand, "It's no big deal, i don't think i'm going to bother." Luka looked deep into her, "You sure?" Shrugging her shoulders, Abby replied, "Yeah.. i mean, i've gone this long without him, i don't need him." Sounding as though she was trying to convince herself, Abby and Luka looked at each other for a moment, then she busied herself with Joe, Luka didn't press her further, he knew she could make her own decisions, and he'd just be there if she needed him.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 16, 2006 22:10:07 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jun 16, 2006 22:52:09 GMT 10
Loved the update!
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Post by anna982 on Jun 17, 2006 1:30:45 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![/glow]
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Post by lubyfan on Jun 17, 2006 5:34:02 GMT 10
Update soon !
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