er02
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Post by er02 on Aug 24, 2006 14:43:17 GMT 10
I started this story on another board and wanted to try it here. This is my my first fic so I hope yall like it. It is a Luby but takes place in a different way. This is partly based on the situation that I'm in. Basically I'm using Luka and Abby in place of the guy who is my friend and I. So I get to write a Luby story and what I hope happens to me. Enjoy!!
Backstory: Although Abby was born in Minnesota but she grew up in Chicago. She met Richard in college and they got married a year later. They then moved to New Orleans and finished college and their residency there. So Abby is a doctor. They got divorced when Abby caught Richard cheating, but instead of moving back to Chicago she stayed in New Orleans because she liked it there. Then on August 29, 2005 Hurricane Katrina struck. Although she stayed there to help out for some time she decided to go back to Chicago. Susan and Abby have been friends since childhood. No matter what they stayed in touch. Abby was even Susan maid of honor. When she returned to Chicago she stayed with Susan until she is got back on her feet. Susan also helped out by getting her a job at County. On Abby's first day at County she met Luka. Luka had just gotten out of a relationship with Sam so he was still hurting from that. They were engaged to get married but Luka found out Sam was cheating on him. Sam along with Alex and her new boyfriend moved out of Chicago. Luka and Abby became instant friends and hang out quite often. The year is now 2006. Luka and Abby have known each for a year now but to them it has felt like a lifetime. Although they both have feeling for each other they are afraid of getting together and ruining their friendship. Abby and Luka are both 30. The first 3 chapters are to show Luby’s friendship but things will start to pick up in chapter 4.
Chap. 1- At The Hospital
Abby is at the admit desk waiting on Luka to come in so they discuss their plans for the evening. For them hanging out is something that they don’t have to set in advance, they already know that they are going to do something unless one of them has the nightshift. As Luka walks in he spots Abby at the admit desk and goes straight to her. “Hey Abby sorry I’m late traffic was terrible. “Hey Luka its no problem we’ve been slow anyway.
They both walk into the lounge where they see Susan doing paperwork. Susan looks up and says, “hey Luka you’re late but it’s a good thing we have been slow.” “Hey Susan, traffic was terrible and Abby already told me things were slow.” “So Abby, Luka you guys got plans for tonight?” “Yea we just haven’t decided anything yet. You and Chuck are welcome to join us.” “I’ll talk to Chuck but I’m sure we can. We just have to find a sitter for Cosmo.” “That’ll be great,” says Luka.
As Susan walks out Abby and Luka go back to talking. “So what do you want to do tonight?” Luka asked. Abby suggest that they go to the movies and then get something to eat afterwards. Luka agrees and they leave out the lounge and get to work.
I know its short but let me know what you think. I welcome all comments.
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Post by rorygilmore on Aug 24, 2006 14:50:50 GMT 10
but Luka found out Sam was cheating on him. Sam along with Alex and her new boyfriend moved out of Chicago... Bad Sam...glad you kicked her out of the story that way, simply awesome ... Liked the beginning hope to read more soon.
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Aug 24, 2006 21:56:52 GMT 10
Great start!
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Post by steffi1986 on Aug 26, 2006 6:05:21 GMT 10
I already read your story on the other board and as well as I found it there really great I found it here too so please update soon
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Post by larue on Aug 26, 2006 22:25:30 GMT 10
Where else is this story posted? There is SO much in the back story that would be interesting actually IN the story. Does this happen later?
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Post by strizzy on Aug 27, 2006 0:18:08 GMT 10
Where else is this story posted? It's on ERHQ
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Post by jadestar on Aug 28, 2006 23:57:55 GMT 10
yep I like it - so keep going
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er02
Luby Lover
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Post by er02 on Aug 29, 2006 16:39:42 GMT 10
This chapter is really short, but I'm using it as a setup for whats to come later. Chapter 3 will be longer and I'll try and post it later today. Enjoy!!
Chapter 2- After Abby’s Shift
Abby has finished her shift and is waiting for Luka to finish with a patient. When he comes out of the exam room he sees her waiting and comes over to talk to her. “You finished?” “Yea, how much longer do you have?” Luka looks at his watch and says “About an hour and a half.” “Good that gives me enough time to go home, take a shower, and put on some fresh clothes. Do you have extra clothes here or do you have to go home?” Thinking about it Luka remembers that he has some clothes in his locker, “yea I have some, but I’ll just take a shower at your place.” “That’s fine with me. See you later.” "See You later." As Abby is walking out she turns around and says “Susan and Chuck are gonna meet us at the movies but we are on our own for dinner.” Luka just nods and walks off to finish up with his last few patients.
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Post by jadestar on Aug 29, 2006 17:10:27 GMT 10
nice update - but way too short!!! so please update again soon
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Post by er02 on Aug 30, 2006 6:53:59 GMT 10
Here is the update like I promised. I hope you like it. Enjoy!!Chapter 3- At Abby’s ApartmentAbout an hour later Abby hears Luka coming into her apartment. What nobody at the hospital knows is that Luka has a key for Abby’s apartment and Abby has one for his. Abby comes out of her room in jeans and a semi dressy shirt and sees Luka putting his stuff down. “What happened I thought you would be on for another 30 minutes?” “Well I finished up with my patients and paperwork and it was also slow so Kerry let me go.” “That was nice of her.” “Yea it was.” They are now sitting on the sofa when Abby says “the shower is free so go ahead and use it whenever you’re ready.” “Ok. You know I ended up stopping by my place anyway cause I didn’t like want to wear the shirt that was in my locker.” Holding up the shirt he says, “what do you think?” Looking at it she says, “Isn’t that the shirt I got for you. I’ve got good taste.” He looks at her almost in shock then he proceeds to start tickling her. “No Luka you know I’m ticklish.” Not listening to what she says and still tickling her he asks her “so what are you saying Abby I don’t have good taste in clothes?” Laughing uncontrollable she says, “Yes.” “I’m not going to stop unless you say ‘Luka has the best the best clothes in and is the best friend anyone can have.’” “I don’t know about that last part.” When he starts to tickle her harder she says, “Ok ok Luka has the best taste in clothes and is the best friend anybody could have.” When he stops his body is hovering over hers and Abby thinks Luka is about to kiss her but looking into her eyes he only says, “Now was that so hard?” Pushing him of her she looks at her shirt and says, “Yes it was. You see what you have done to my shirt now it’s all wrinkled. Since you got it wrinkled you have to iron it and hurry cause we lost some time with your tickling episode.” With a devilish smile he says, “Ok I’ll iron it but after I take my shower so that means your going to have to walk around topless.” “You would love that wouldn’t you? I think I’ll just change my shirt. Now go get in the shower we only have an half an hour before we have to go.” Laughing and walking towards the bathroom he says, “I’ll go but you got to admit you were really close to doing it.” Abby just laughs and throws a pillow at him. Susan’s PlaceMeanwhile as Susan and Chuck are getting dress Chuck looks at Susan and asks “so what is going on between Abby and Luka?” “I don’t know but I wish they just get together already. Everybody knows that they like each other, the only ones that don’t seem to know it is Abby and Luka.” “Has she said anything to you about liking him?” “ No but I’ll ask her tonight.” Ok so how was it? What will Abby's reaction be to what Susan has to say? Well find out in the next chapter.
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Post by hollygirl on Aug 30, 2006 7:46:13 GMT 10
great update! update again verrrrry soon!
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Post by Little Amy on Aug 30, 2006 9:01:24 GMT 10
Great fanfic! Update soon!
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Post by jadestar on Aug 30, 2006 17:56:31 GMT 10
want MOOOOORRRREEEE!!!!!!! it's great
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Post by charlieluby on Aug 30, 2006 17:56:37 GMT 10
great update! x
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er02
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Post by er02 on Jun 10, 2009 14:24:05 GMT 10
I got a request to update this story. So I took a look at it and I didn't realize how long it's been since I've updated. What I have written now is up to chap 10. So for those who are interested I will put those chapters up over the next few days to a week or as I get time and then I'll do an epoligue. Because it has been a while since I've posted the timeframe of their friendship has changed. It should be easy to pick up.
I don't think I posted this with the other chapters but each 1 is based on a song. So I will put the song title and artist next to the chapter number. So here is the next chapter:
Chapter 4 (Citizen Cope- Sideways)- At The Movies
45 minutes later Abby and Luka met Susan and Chuck at the movies. They decided to see Star Trek. After the movie was over Abby and Susan decided to go to the restroom. Susan figured this was a good time to talk to Abby about her relationship with Luka. “Abby you mind if I ask you something?” “No what is it?” “What going on between you and Luka?” “What do you mean? Luka and I are just friends.” “Come on Abby you can’t tell me you don’t like Luka as more than a friend and that you haven’t thought about hooking up.” “Susan of course I’ve thought about it but our friendship is important to me. Besides I don’t think he feels the same way.” “Oh come on Abby stop being so blind. Everybody can see that Luka is interested in you as more than a friend. Haven't you ever nocticed he changes the subject every time you talk about another guy? Or the fact that he stares at you and hangs on to your every word. The guy is in love with you.” “I never paid attention to it but now that you mention it he does doesn’t he?” “Yes he does and so do you.” “I do? I never realized I do that.” “So what are you gonna do about it?” “I don’t know Susan but I don’t want to lose our friendship, that is really important to me.” “Well you know what they say ‘friends make the best lovers’” Susan says with a smile on her face. “Shut up Susan” Abby says laughing. “What it’s the truth and I say you do something about it quick cause you never know what might happen.” “Thanks for pointing that out Susan.” “You're welcome” says Susan. “I've got to figure out how I’m gonna approach this subject with him.” “That’s easy just go to him and say Luka you have been a great friend to me since these past couple years and over that time I’ve fallen in love with you.” “That actually sounded pretty good I just might use that or something along those lines.” “Don’t go stealing my speech” Susan says laughing. “Well you shouldn’t have said it” Abby says laughing along with Susan. They finish up in the restroom and go back to meet the guys. “Hey what took you two so long?” asks Luka looking at Abby. Looking back at him she simply says “girl talk.” Susan speaks up next letting Abby and Luka know that she and Chuck have to back home so the sitter can leave. “Ok well I’ll talk to later. Bye Chuck” Abby says kissing Chuck on the cheek. “Bye Abby.” “Bye Sus” Abby says giving Susan a hug as well. As they hug Susan whispers in Abby’s ear “bye Abby and don’t forget what we talked about.” Abby in turns she won’t. Luka shakes Chuck’s hand and kisses Susan on the cheek telling them both bye. As they walk off Luka turns to Abby and says ”so where do you want to get something to eat?” “We could go to Ike’s.” “Ok let’s go.”
At Ike’s
As they finished eating they sat in a comfortable silence that Luka decided to break. “So you care to tell what you and Susan were really talking about.” “I want to but not here, not now.” “So when do you want to talk about it because for some strange reason I got a feeling it was about me.” “First Chuck was acting stranger then usual, second you and Susan were gone for a long time, and third you were acting cryptic when you and Susan came back from the restroom.” “Well aren’t you just Mr. Observant tonight? Well you are right part of it was about you but it’s not anything bad. But like I said earlier can we not talk about this here?” “Ok where do you want to talk about it?” “We could go to the park on the way to my place.” “Ok let me go pay the bill and then we can go. After the paying the bill Luka came back to the table, “are you ready?” “Yea lets go.”
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