Post by Mrs. Zebra (aka Roosje) on Jan 13, 2007 3:25:25 GMT 10
WOOPS I posted this in the ER fic forum instead of the Luby fic forum. Sorry for that, I PM'ed you about it, Maggie.
This fic has been up and running for a little more than a month now on a Dutch ER forum, I decided to post it in here too. I'm going to paste every chapter one by one, without double posting.
Summary: Luby and Abby broke up 2 years ago but start dating again. Abby has got memories of her past that don't make her happy.
WARNING: It may contain sex sometimes.
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FIRST CHAPTER (I refer to sexual kinds of things):
It was just a normal day. Abby had treated a patient with complaints in the abdomen, and Luka a patient with a huge headache. Luka was just waiting on the labs of his patient, when he saw Abby Lockhart walking down the hallways of the ER. He had dated her before, but he was still in love with her. He hoped it was mutual. Luka and Abby were still friends, because everybody says “Could we still be friends”, when they break up. Abby smiled at Luka and Luka smiled back at Abby. She was so pretty, he really loved her hair. It was so blonde and shiny, he just loved it.
Luka secretly fantasized about Abby and him having sex every night. It had become a ritual. He smiled everytime he thought of those dreams. I’m such a horny person, he thought.
He wanted to ask her out, but he just couldn’t do it. He was afraid of her rejecting him. He was afraid of her pretty lips saying: “I already have plans for tonight, sorry” or: “Maybe next time”.
Jerry woke him up out of his daydreams, he said the labs were back. Luka was curious, he wanted to know what was wrong with the young lady. She had been complaining about bad vision, so she needed some painkillers. Luka didn’t trust the woman. But he decided to run the tests anyway, to make sure. But when he took a look at the paper, he knew it. His patient was just a freak-o.
He went to see the patient, she was sitting on a blue chair, the chair where Luka once sat, while Abby kissed him. The patient smiled innocently. Luka started to dislike the woman. But he was a doctor, so he had to treat her respectfully. “There seems to be nothing wrong with your head”, Luka said.
Meanwhile, Abby was treating her patient. The patient was very nice, so she talked with him. He had a nice smile, and his eyes were.. mysterious. She liked him. Was she in love? She didn’t know. It was a patient of hers, she couldn’t go out with him...
The woman looked at Luka, in anger. “THERE IS SOMETHING WRONG WITH MY HEAD”, she shouted. She got up from the chair and she started to beat Luka. The woman was pretty tough. Luka called the security and they came. They cuffed her.
Abby heard all the noises in the room next to her so she excused herself, and went to the other room. She looked around. The room was empty. But then there was Luka, crying in the corner.
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SECOND CHAPTER (Kissing involved)
Abby wanted to comfort him. She wanted to hug him very tightly, so she did. She didn’t know what was wrong, but she just wanted to take the pain away. She felt his cold body shivering against hers. She rubbed his hair. "Shh, Luka, what happened?". Luka did not cry very fast. But he did cry now. He told her about the patient, who attacked him, and that she reminded him of his mother. Abby felt so sorry for Luka. She kissed him on the cheek and she smiled. She cried herself. "It’s going to be alright", she said, while wiping a tear away.
Luka smiled back. He loved her.
Luka didn’t know whether to kiss her or not. She just kissed him on the cheek, but that was more a symbol of friendship, wasn’t it? He couldn’t resist it. He bent forward and his lips touched hers. He felt her soft lips touching his, she answered the kiss. He closed his eyes and opened his mouth. Abby opened her mouth too and she felt Luka’s tongue inside her mouth. She had missed him. Strange, isn’t it? How you fall in love with a patient on one moment, and on the other moment you kiss a colleague slash friend.
Abby pushed her thoughts aside and enjoyed the kiss. She felt his tongue turning around in her mouth, she shivered. He was such a hot guy.
Luka broke the kiss and looked into Abby’s eyes. Abby looked into Luka’s eyes. She smiled and he smiled back. They were so similar, yet so vulnerable. Abby touched his lips again.
Five minutes later, Susan came in. She saw Abby lying in Luka’s arms, and she smiled. "Guys, stop the romance, we have a trauma coming in." Abby looked behind her and saw Susan standing in the room. "We’ll be there in a minute", Abby smiled. Susan left the room with a huge grin on her face. She had always wanted Luka and Abby to be together. Jerry noticed the grin on Susan’s face. "What’s wrong, Susan?", he asked.
"Oh, it’s nothing", Susan said, trying to think of a way to keep Jerry away from finding the truth. Strangely, Jerry believed Susan and he continued doing his job.
Meanwhile, Luka and Abby had stopped kissing. They sat next to each other and they didn’t do anything but smiling. "Finally", Luka said. "What?", Abby asked. Luka laughed. "Finally, we kissed."
"Yes, we did", Abby answered. Luka wondered if Abby had any plans for tonight.
This fic has been up and running for a little more than a month now on a Dutch ER forum, I decided to post it in here too. I'm going to paste every chapter one by one, without double posting.
Summary: Luby and Abby broke up 2 years ago but start dating again. Abby has got memories of her past that don't make her happy.
WARNING: It may contain sex sometimes.
----
FIRST CHAPTER (I refer to sexual kinds of things):
It was just a normal day. Abby had treated a patient with complaints in the abdomen, and Luka a patient with a huge headache. Luka was just waiting on the labs of his patient, when he saw Abby Lockhart walking down the hallways of the ER. He had dated her before, but he was still in love with her. He hoped it was mutual. Luka and Abby were still friends, because everybody says “Could we still be friends”, when they break up. Abby smiled at Luka and Luka smiled back at Abby. She was so pretty, he really loved her hair. It was so blonde and shiny, he just loved it.
Luka secretly fantasized about Abby and him having sex every night. It had become a ritual. He smiled everytime he thought of those dreams. I’m such a horny person, he thought.
He wanted to ask her out, but he just couldn’t do it. He was afraid of her rejecting him. He was afraid of her pretty lips saying: “I already have plans for tonight, sorry” or: “Maybe next time”.
Jerry woke him up out of his daydreams, he said the labs were back. Luka was curious, he wanted to know what was wrong with the young lady. She had been complaining about bad vision, so she needed some painkillers. Luka didn’t trust the woman. But he decided to run the tests anyway, to make sure. But when he took a look at the paper, he knew it. His patient was just a freak-o.
He went to see the patient, she was sitting on a blue chair, the chair where Luka once sat, while Abby kissed him. The patient smiled innocently. Luka started to dislike the woman. But he was a doctor, so he had to treat her respectfully. “There seems to be nothing wrong with your head”, Luka said.
Meanwhile, Abby was treating her patient. The patient was very nice, so she talked with him. He had a nice smile, and his eyes were.. mysterious. She liked him. Was she in love? She didn’t know. It was a patient of hers, she couldn’t go out with him...
The woman looked at Luka, in anger. “THERE IS SOMETHING WRONG WITH MY HEAD”, she shouted. She got up from the chair and she started to beat Luka. The woman was pretty tough. Luka called the security and they came. They cuffed her.
Abby heard all the noises in the room next to her so she excused herself, and went to the other room. She looked around. The room was empty. But then there was Luka, crying in the corner.
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SECOND CHAPTER (Kissing involved)
Abby wanted to comfort him. She wanted to hug him very tightly, so she did. She didn’t know what was wrong, but she just wanted to take the pain away. She felt his cold body shivering against hers. She rubbed his hair. "Shh, Luka, what happened?". Luka did not cry very fast. But he did cry now. He told her about the patient, who attacked him, and that she reminded him of his mother. Abby felt so sorry for Luka. She kissed him on the cheek and she smiled. She cried herself. "It’s going to be alright", she said, while wiping a tear away.
Luka smiled back. He loved her.
Luka didn’t know whether to kiss her or not. She just kissed him on the cheek, but that was more a symbol of friendship, wasn’t it? He couldn’t resist it. He bent forward and his lips touched hers. He felt her soft lips touching his, she answered the kiss. He closed his eyes and opened his mouth. Abby opened her mouth too and she felt Luka’s tongue inside her mouth. She had missed him. Strange, isn’t it? How you fall in love with a patient on one moment, and on the other moment you kiss a colleague slash friend.
Abby pushed her thoughts aside and enjoyed the kiss. She felt his tongue turning around in her mouth, she shivered. He was such a hot guy.
Luka broke the kiss and looked into Abby’s eyes. Abby looked into Luka’s eyes. She smiled and he smiled back. They were so similar, yet so vulnerable. Abby touched his lips again.
Five minutes later, Susan came in. She saw Abby lying in Luka’s arms, and she smiled. "Guys, stop the romance, we have a trauma coming in." Abby looked behind her and saw Susan standing in the room. "We’ll be there in a minute", Abby smiled. Susan left the room with a huge grin on her face. She had always wanted Luka and Abby to be together. Jerry noticed the grin on Susan’s face. "What’s wrong, Susan?", he asked.
"Oh, it’s nothing", Susan said, trying to think of a way to keep Jerry away from finding the truth. Strangely, Jerry believed Susan and he continued doing his job.
Meanwhile, Luka and Abby had stopped kissing. They sat next to each other and they didn’t do anything but smiling. "Finally", Luka said. "What?", Abby asked. Luka laughed. "Finally, we kissed."
"Yes, we did", Abby answered. Luka wondered if Abby had any plans for tonight.
great beginning!!! 
