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Post by dancergurl18 on Mar 16, 2006 12:39:00 GMT 10
I'll be waiting.
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Post by Real Dream on Mar 16, 2006 14:50:21 GMT 10
LOVE IT!! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!!!
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Post by lulu on Mar 17, 2006 2:19:43 GMT 10
Don't worry bout it. we all love it and can wait...
Abi*Lulu
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Julianna (juscully)
Duchess of Luby
"I don't want to be alone, I want to be left alone.? Audrey Hepburn
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Post by Julianna (juscully) on Mar 18, 2006 4:37:10 GMT 10
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Post by lubbybaby on Mar 22, 2006 11:40:47 GMT 10
Yes!!!! Finally chap 4 is up!
Sorry for the delay guys! Really crazy week!!
No way in
“15 year old crashed with skateboard coming in, in 2” Haley shouted out to Luka playing with Lukas at the front desk. Luka searched the room trying to find Abby, but she was nowhere to be found, probably still in the trauma. Great, whom should he leave Lukas with; again he looked around the room trying to find a trusted face. Susan was in with Abby, so she was out of the picture, leaving him with Morris? Not if hell froze out! Clemente? Nope! Who than? Ray? Luky would come out pierced and with tattoos. Carter!
“Hey, Carter can you look after him, I have a rape victim coming in, here, thanks” Luka handed Luky to Carter who stood staring at Luky with a puzzled look on his face. Luky looked at him and pouted, a sad looking taking over his sparkling eyes, and he stretched out his tiny arm in his father’s direction. “Buáá” The tears ran down his eyes and the baby screamed out loud.
“Oh, no, ok, ok, you have a lot of toys in the lounge, right? Let’s go figure something out. I mean if I want, … … … … we should get along, right”
Carter opened the door to the lounge and walked to the couch where a bunch of baby toys lay around, he took a fuzzy elephant and squeaked it for Lukas, but Lukas’ arms were stretched out directed to the door.
Carter kept squeaking the elephant but Lukas slapped the toy with his hand throwing it to the floor. Carter took a different toy and another and another but the result was always the same and the cry louder and louder by the second.
At the trauma Susan and Abby exchanged looks, Abby was sweating horribly, her heart was beating louder and louder with every heard cry.
“Abby focus” Susan called out.
In the next room Luka couldn’t concentrate. Intubating was usually such an easy task for him.
“Dr Kovac” Dubenko called
“I know” Luka greeted his teeth. What the f**k was going on?
“LUKA!!! Who’s with him?” Abby screamed out loud as she asked Sam to hold the door that separated the two rooms opened.
“Carter”
“I’m in” Luka screamed. “Dubenko he’s all yours” Luka screamed racing out of the trauma room straight into the Lounge.
“What’s going on”
“I don’t think he likes me” Carter handed Lukas to Luka.
“Oh, my baby it’s ok. Tata is right here my love” Lukas stopped crying just as Abby made it to the lounge.
“What happened?”
“He’s just not used to Carter, that’s all”
Abby held a hand on Luky’s back as the baby laid his head on Luka’s chest and focused his eyes on his mother’s.
Carter watched the scene and shook his head. Did he still have a shot with Abby or was he just a card out of the deck?
Carter entered the coffee shop to find Abby sitting at a table. Baby asleep in the stroller.
“Hey” he smiled wide.
“Hey” She smiled back.
“Sleeping tight, hum?” Carter pointed at Lukas.
“Yup, he was beaten”
“Yeah, he wore me out to… … … … by the way, I’m … … I’m sorry”
“Sorry?”
“For the whole thing this morning”
“Don’t worry. He’s not used to you yet, he’ll be ok in a little while”
“May I take a seat?”
Abby thought for a minute “Sure, I’m just waiting for Luka”
“Can I … … … Abby… … …”
“What?” She smiled
“What happened to us?”
Abby stared at him for long silent minutes, before clearing her throat and trying “Hum, … … You broke up with me through a letter”
“Is that it? Is that why you married Luka and… … …”
“Oh, hold it… … I married Luka because I love him”
“Oh, come on Abby you and I both know we didn’t get a second chance because you were mad at me”
Abby took a deep breath in and forced herself to keep calm.
“Carter you were card out of the deck since we started. … … … I love Luka, I have always loved him … … and all the time you and I spent together just helped me realize it, though the second I really knew, the moment that brought me to confess it to myself was the moment I thought he was dead. … … …”
“So, I meant nothing to you?” He couldn’t believe how much this hurt.
“Well, not romantically now, but you’re a friend, and I’ll never forget everything you did for me and Luka and I won’t let my son forget this.
“So that’s it?!” The angry tone was obvious to her.
“Sorry.”
“So, I came for no reason at all?”
“Well, Susan’s divorced.” Abby suggested with a smile
Carter had to smile. “You’re really happy, hum?”
“I never thought I could confess my love for someone and I did … … … hell yeah, I’m happy! Look, Carter, whatever you might feel for me, please don’t let Luka see it. Your friendship means the world to him and I don’t want it… … …”
He looked at her, how could he destroy her happiness? She had never looked this incredible before. She really did love Luka. It was painfully obvious; he smiled through the pain! “It dies here”
“Thank you”
“So, Susan’s divorced hum? At least I know Cosmo doesn’t cry with me”
“See, better already”
they smiled at each other and Lukas made a sound. staring at Carter with a questioning-angry look
"Hey, I'm far from you, so don't go crying"
"He really scared you. hum?"
"Like father, like son"
Abby had to laugh.
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Julianna (juscully)
Duchess of Luby
"I don't want to be alone, I want to be left alone.? Audrey Hepburn
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Post by Julianna (juscully) on Mar 22, 2006 12:08:31 GMT 10
yay!!! lovely! crying babies scare me too!! lmao
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Mar 22, 2006 13:48:36 GMT 10
love the update!
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Post by lulu on Mar 22, 2006 23:11:18 GMT 10
Really nice stuff! I laughed at the "Susan is divorced" comment!
Abi*Lulu
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Lady_K
Marquise of Luby
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Post by Lady_K on Mar 22, 2006 23:38:03 GMT 10
Great update! Can't wait for the next chapter
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Post by cheryl on Mar 23, 2006 8:51:44 GMT 10
Okay i have to say this is the first fanfic that i've ever come across that i have a major problem with .
Why are you making Abby out to be such a b***h?? Abby is waaay out of character .I know Abby and Carter broke up,but that was years ago and she got over the whole letter thing in Season 10 when Carter came back.
Also although Abby and Carter are just collegaues these days i highly doubt that she would rub her newfound happiness in Carters face especially with the baby considering that she was there for him when he lost his son.
The basics of the fic are all good ,don't get me wrong.I just think that you really need to change the way you are writing Abby because she is totally out of character.
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Post by lubbybaby on Mar 23, 2006 12:31:51 GMT 10
To be honest, she's not supposed to be fully in character, wouldn't make sense since her marriage changed her, now would it?! And the whole thing with Carter, the letter thing came up because in this fic, the guy comes back after a pretty long while to say he's still in love with her o course she needs to rub it in his face that she's happy, or why would he have a reason to stop hitting on her?
That's just my way to see things. My defense. But i anyone else feels like it's bad, please let me know. I'll stop writing!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Mar 23, 2006 12:51:55 GMT 10
Don't stop writing I like it.
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Post by lulu on Mar 24, 2006 0:49:16 GMT 10
I like it too! Don't stop writing cos it's good. Fiction is exactly that: just fiction! It doesn't have to be true to life or in this case true to the ER series.
Abi*Lulu
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Lady_K
Marquise of Luby
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Post by Lady_K on Mar 24, 2006 7:09:54 GMT 10
No don't stop writing. It's a fanfiction and I don't rlly think that Abby is described as a b**ch in this fanfic!
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Post by Noora on Mar 25, 2006 22:03:13 GMT 10
No no, don't stop like writing!! I really like your stuff, this is a very good fic!
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