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Post by manu on Apr 16, 2008 3:35:18 GMT 10
Yes, I know it's been a while. And I'm so sorry I haven't updated yet, I feel really bad about it! I'm trying my best! But I'm so glad you all like my FF THANKS!!!
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Post by candya6446 on Apr 16, 2008 19:04:44 GMT 10
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marie
Countess of Luby
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Post by marie on Apr 22, 2008 7:44:26 GMT 10
me too ! it's so cool... I can't barely wait !!!
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Post by Bah on Apr 22, 2008 11:09:26 GMT 10
Manuu!!!! Where are you? Please! Update
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Post by manu on Apr 22, 2008 23:31:08 GMT 10
I just started writing I hope to update very soon!!
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Post by britneyluby on Apr 23, 2008 1:13:15 GMT 10
YAY!! Can't wait
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marie
Countess of Luby
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Post by marie on Apr 23, 2008 1:57:16 GMT 10
I can't wait either !!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on May 13, 2008 4:46:22 GMT 10
Update!!!! I Love Your Story I can't wait to the next chapter!!
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Post by silverbells on May 17, 2008 7:14:13 GMT 10
Beautiful update manu Update when you get time.
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on May 18, 2008 19:48:56 GMT 10
Where are you??
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marie
Countess of Luby
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Post by marie on May 18, 2008 21:24:57 GMT 10
Manu, come back ! please !!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on May 20, 2008 0:33:52 GMT 10
manu!! Where are you?? Sorry but I love this story
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Post by manu on May 31, 2008 21:52:28 GMT 10
Sorry, sorry, sorry, SORRY!!!!!
My Internet didn't worked the last weeks. And I haven't got time to write on the FF, I'm so sorry!!! I'll try my best!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Jun 10, 2008 0:20:44 GMT 10
ok but hurry!! I read this story like 10 times now and I still love it :' You sould start so write a book about luby ! I love it keep writing Can't wait
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Post by manu on Jun 17, 2008 0:06:50 GMT 10
FINALLY I have an update for you!!!!!!! I'm sorry again for taking so long!! Hope you like it!
Chapter 17: Lose control
It was Abby’s day off, but she woke up early this morning. She wanted to make some breakfast and soon recognized that she was out of milk. Throwing a bathrobe around her, she quickly opened the door and knocked at Luka’s. He opened his door quickly, speaking into his phone. He signaled her to come in.
“Hey Jodie, this is Luka. I really need a babysitter immediately. Are you avaiable this morning?”, he asked, walking in his kitchen up and down. “Oh, I understand. I’ll find someone else, thank you.”, he said and hung up. He placed the phone on the table and looked up, into Abby’s eyes. “Good morning.”, he said, smiling a bit.
“Everything okay?”, she asked, getting closer to him.
“Izzie’s ill and I have no babysitter, but there’s an important meeting this noon … so I have to call ill today.”, he said, picking up the phone again.
“No, I could watch after her.”, Abby suggested.
“But it’s your day off, you really don’t need to.”, he explained but she only shook her head.
“That’s really okay. I would love to help you.”, she said and he nodded.
“Okay, thank you.”, he said. “I’ll just look after her again, before I leave.”, he explained, walking upstairs. Abby boiled some water to make a tea, when he came down again.
“Is she awake?”, she asked.
“Yes, she is. Thanks again, Abby.”, he said, getting closer to her and kissing her forehead. Abby smiled at him.
“Have a nice day.”, she whispered and he just nodded. Seconds later he left the apartment and Abby walked upstairs to look after Isabella. “Hey sweetie, how are you.”, she asked when she opened the door carefully. Izzie tried to smile, but she was too tired. Abby got closer to her bed, sitting down next to her. “I made you some tea.”, she explained.
“Thanks.”, Izzie whispered, taking a little sip. Abby placed the cup on the night stand, then she caressed over the girl’s little head …
Three days later Izzie felt a lot better, she was ready to go to day care again. Like every day, when Abby and Luka had the same shift, he knocked on her door for picking her up. Izzie was next to him, her puppy in her arms. It took Abby some minutes to open the door. This morning she was the one who was ill.
“Morning.”, she said, coughing. She was very pale, big bags under her eyes.
“How are you feeling, you look like hell.”, he explained.
“Very charming.”, she said. Looked like she didn’t lost her humour after all. She had to laugh but as soon as she did her belly began to hurt again. “Well, I’m really nauseous. I think I catched it from Izzie. I already called ill today.”, she explained.
“I hope you feel better soon. Now go to bed.”, he expained and she nodded.
“Bye.”, she said before closing the door and laying down to her couch again.
“Is Abby ill because of me?”, Izzie asked when she and her daddy were driving to the County. She looked at him with big puppy eyes.
“No, it’s not your fault, sweetie. She’s going to be fine very soon.”, Luka explained,while parking his car in the lot.
“But you do call her today, do you?”, she asked and Luka smiled.
“Of course I will check how she is, don’t worry.”, he said and kissed softly his daughters cheek. “And now it’s time for your day care and for me to work.”
When Luka came down to the ER, he nearly bumped into Susan. “So, how was the night shift?”, he asked.
“Lovely as always.”, Susan explained, smiling. “Oh, and Abby called ill today. She sounded like hell.”
“And she was definetely looking like that too this morning.”, he said.
“Maybe I should check on her on my way home.”, Susan suggested.
“Well, I think she is sleeping. I’ll call her to see if everything’s okay.”, Luka explained and Susan nodded.
“Okay, than have a nice day, Luka.”, Susan said, before leaving into the lounge. Luka was walking over to the counter, picking up the phone for calling Abby. He was a bit worried. Of course he had seen her ill before, but not like that. The phone ringed for half a minute, but nobody anwered it. “Are you calling her?”, Susan asked as she left the lounge again. Luka nodded.
“Yeah, but she’s not answering. She probably sleeps like a stone.”
Two hours later, Luka tried again to reach her. And this time she picked up, but without saying something.
“Abby? Is everything okay? It’s Luka.”, he asked.
“Hey … I don’t know … I … feel weird.”, she explained, her voice was so vulnerable, so quiet.
“I’m coming to check on you, okay?”, he said.
“Yeah, thank you.”, Abby said, leaving the phone on the hanger.
“Frank, I’m going to check on Abby. Something’s wrong.”, he screamed as he run out of the ER.
Not even ten minutes later he opened the door to Abby’s apartment. She was still in bed, even more paler than this morning. Next second she was throwing up into a bucket next to her.
“Oh my …”, he said, sitting down netxt to her on the bed. He softly checked her abdomen, when Abby screamed in pain. “It’s an appendicites, Abby. We need to go to the hospital.”, he explained, caressing over her head. She just nodded …
It was close to 6 pm, when Abby opened her eyes again. She was laying in a hospital room, everything was just a bit blurry around her. She closed her eyes again for some seconds. When she opened them she was viewing Luka, coming closer to her bed and finally sitting down on it.
“You had an operation, Abby. I fortunately found you in time.”, he explained, almost whispering and taking her hand. He looked down at it.
“Well, seems like you saved my life a second time.”, Abby whispered, smiling a bit. Luka looked up at her, softly nodding. “Thank you, Luka.”, she said, squezzing his hand.
“I’m sorry, I have to pick up Izzie now.”, he explained, but still sitting next to her, never losing eye contact to her.
“It’s already this late?”, she asked and he nodded. “Well, could you adjust the head end of the bed a bit higher for me?”.
“Of course.”, he said, looking for the remote.
“Thank you.”, she said. And then there was an almost uncomfortable silence between them. Luka sat on her bed again and they just looked at each other.
“I’ll go now.”, he whispered. But then he leaned forward to kiss her forehead. Gently. His lips were so soft, so she closed her eyes. Some people are saying that a kiss on the forehead tells you more than a thousands words. When she was opening her eyes again, he was just inches away from her face. Eye to eye – they stayed like that for some seconds. And then Luka leaned in again, but this time to kiss her lips. It was a soft and reserved kiss, but it meant something. Both of them could feel this. And so Abby kissed him back, soft and gently too. They parted and Luka stood up quickly, looking a bit confused. He didn’t knew what to say, so did Abby. They were just staring at each other. Luka walked backwards to the door, then he turned and opened it. Then he was gone …
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