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Post by jacobsmommy on Aug 20, 2007 22:43:34 GMT 10
Just read your story. I love it.
Please update soon
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Post by hannaviola on Aug 20, 2007 23:48:54 GMT 10
Really good sory! Please update soon, I have to know what's going to happen.
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Post by Rach :) on Aug 21, 2007 0:23:12 GMT 10
argh!!! i wanna know what happened please update!!
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Post by rangooner on Aug 21, 2007 1:00:21 GMT 10
oooh! intense.. can't wait to know what happens next, update really really soon!!!
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Post by becca on Aug 21, 2007 1:14:12 GMT 10
Ohhh nooo, poor Abby. I wonder what happened 6 weeks ago Glad Luka's there for her though! Great update, update soon pleaseeee.
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Post by lubbylover1 on Aug 21, 2007 2:02:11 GMT 10
Great Come back soon, please ...
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Post by smile90 on Aug 21, 2007 2:20:39 GMT 10
wow.. you're a great writer.. I'm completly drifting away while reading! awesome story!!!
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jehkovac
Marquise of Luby
Jessica Kovac Andrade de Oliveira
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Post by jehkovac on Aug 21, 2007 2:25:20 GMT 10
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
I need to know!!!!! I'm late for school but i had to reply this first!!
What hapnned 6 weeks ago???
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Great update
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Post by charlie on Aug 21, 2007 3:31:42 GMT 10
noooo i need 2 know what happened !!! Update Very Soon!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 21, 2007 4:13:48 GMT 10
Great update Wonder what happened 6 weeks ago... natalie xx
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Post by karo on Aug 21, 2007 5:00:51 GMT 10
what happened?!?! ?! great update!!!!!!!!
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Post by ERFanRach on Aug 21, 2007 7:43:39 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
Update Soon!!!!!
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Post by lockhart on Aug 21, 2007 9:15:47 GMT 10
ahhhhh who's the father??? I wanna know...
amazing story , different!
upsate ASAP!
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Post by manu on Aug 21, 2007 18:07:19 GMT 10
So, here's the next chapter, bringing a little light in the whole situation. Hope you like it!!
Chapter 2: Pain
Some days later, Luka picked Abby up from the hospital. He decided it would be the best if she stayed with him. He didn’t knew if it was okay for her. Of course he had asked her, but she wasn’t speaking that much since that night. Barely a word was caming from her. Her eyes were so sad, she was just laying in her bed, staring at the ceiling.
Luka stood in front of her hospital room door, knocking. No answer, so he stepped in. She was laying in her bed, on her side, looking to the window. Abby was wearing some sweet trousers and a pullover.
“Good morning.”, he said and Abby got up, sitting on the bed. A weak smile on her face. “Ready to go?”, he asked and she just nodded. “I already talked to your doctors.”
“Okay.”, she said and stood up, reaching for her bag. “I already packed.”, she explained.
“You know, I have this extra room in my apartment. With a bed and a wardrobe. I prepared it for you.”, he said and she nodded.
“Thank you.”, she said and grabbed her coat.
Half an hour later they were at his apartment, they stepped into the elevator. She has been here so many times, has used the elevator always. She looked at Luka, holding her bag. She was grateful that she had him. And she was also grateful, that she could live with him. It was a good idea of him.
“You want something to eat?”, he asked her as they entered his apartment. She shook her head. “But you have to. The nurses told me that you didn’t have eaten that much in the last days. I can make you whatever you want. It would be better for you … and the baby.”, he explained, leaning against the kitchen counter. She sat on the couch and gave him a look. She didn’t wanted to hear something about a baby. She pulled her legs to her stomach, embracing them and resting her head on her knees. “Maybe a tea?”, he asked.
“Luka stop it. I’m not worth it.”, she said and looked over to him.
“Then you don’t see what I see.”, he said and made some hot water for a tea. Abby kept staring at him. He was wonderful. But she thought, that she doesn’t deserved all of this. Some minutes later Luka reached her a hot cup of tea.
“Thanks.”, she said and welcomed the cup in her hands, taking a sip.
“I’m going to bring your bag up.”, he said and left her. She placed her tea to the table and stood up, walking over to the window. It was snowing outside and she watched the snow flakes falling to the ground. It was so peaceful, everything. But not inside her. Her mind was racing, thinking, searching for an solution. She closed her eyes, trying to press her tears away.
“I can’t believe all of this.”, she whispered to herself.
“If you need something from your apartment, just say it. We can go there, whenever you want.”, Luka said as he walked the steps down. Then he saw Abby, standing near the window and crying. “Abby?”, he said and got closer to her. She turned to him, looking in his eyes for a second. Then she just walked away, upstairs.
“I unpack my bag.”, she said, a knot in her throat. Luka looked after her until she disappeared in her room.
In the afternoon she came back downstairs. Luka was sitting on his couch, watching TV. Abby moved towards him, standing close to the couch. He noticed her and turned the TV off. She embraced herself.
“I need some more clothes … and a toothbrush and more like that.”, she explained and he nodded.
“Okay, than let’s go.”, he explained and both grabbed their coats, leaving the apartment.
They took his car on the way to her apartment, Luka felt like he needed to talk. He couldn’t endure this silence anymore.
“Do you want to have this baby?”, he asked. He couldn’t think of a better question, but as soon as he had asked, he regreted it. Abby didn’t answered, she kept staring outside. She was uncomfortable with this whole baby situation.
Until they reached her apartment, silence filled his car. Then they stepped out, walking upstairs. She grabbed her keys and opened the door. The blinds were still down, the room was dark. He sat down to a chair, waiting until she was ready to leave again. Abby walked into her bedroom, picking some clothes. Then she moved to the bathroom and looked at the ground. There she was laying, he founded her here. The bottle of Whiskey still laid in her sink. The Diphenhydramine was still on the counter. She stared at both the bottle and the little packet. She shook her head and grabbed her toothbrush, cremes and more things she needed. Then she walked back into the living room.
“We can go.”, she said and he stood up.
“Okay.”, he said. “Do you want to grab something to eat? Pizza, Chinese?”, he asked.
“Maybe some Pizza.”, she said quietly.
When they finally reached his apartment again, they sat down to eat. They bought a pizza from his favorite Italian restaurant. But Abby just ate half a piece and soon went to her room for sleeping. Two hours later Luka went to bed too. Before entering his room, he carefully opened the door to Abby’s room. She was sleeping soundly, laying on her side. She looked like an angel. Then Luka laid down to his bed, difting to sleep.
It was in the middle of the night, when he woke up by Abby’s screaming. He needed some seconds to realise what was going on. But then he quickly got up and ran to her room. He opened the door and Abby was sitting in her bed, crying and breathing hard.
“Abby.”, he said and tried to touch her hand. But she pulled back again, quickly standing up and leaving the room. Luka followed her down to the living room. She was standing near a window. “Abby, what is wrong?”, he asked her. He got closer to her, but not to close. “I want to understand all of this. I want to help you,”, he explained. “But you need to let me.”, he whispered. He didn’t wanted to push her, all he wanted was to help her. She turned to face him. Tears were rolling down her cheeks.
“I got raped.”
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Post by jacobsmommy on Aug 21, 2007 21:09:43 GMT 10
OH WOW!!!!!!!!. WHO COULD DO SUCH A THING TO ABBY GLAD LUKA IS THERE TO BE WITH HER. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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