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Post by Noora on Apr 12, 2006 22:34:36 GMT 10
I liked it too!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Apr 13, 2006 7:46:51 GMT 10
Thanks I'll update later tonight!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Apr 13, 2006 11:51:34 GMT 10
Here's the update!
Abby walked into the room. She stopped when she saw Luka praying. She waited a moment before clearing her thought to signal that she was back. Luka leaned back in his chair and smiled at her. She walked over to him and handed him the coffee. "Thanks." He held her hand a moment before taking the cup from her. "Kerry says hi." "When did you see her?" "Just now. She was cafeteria. She said we could take as much time as we needed." Abby took a sip of her coffee.
Abby slept with her head on Luka's chest. Luka had his head back against the wall. His hand up by his face. It was quiet in the room except for the occasional beep from the heart monitor. The alarm on the machine started to beep. Abby woke up abruptly waking Luka as well. Her face filled with fear as she looked at the monitor. Gabrijel's heart rate dropped dramatically. "Luka, go get Dr. Nolan." Luka jumped out of his chair and ran out of the room. Abby leaned over Gab pleading with him. "It's okay sweetie, mommy's here." Luka came back into the room with Dr. Nolan right behind him. A nurse came in a minute later. "What's wrong?" "I don't know. Everything seemed fine." "Help him." Abby cried. Luka grabbed her and held her close. He looked up towards the ceiling. The sounds of the machine, and Abby crying, and the doctor talking slowed as he pleaded with God for help.
Can you hear me? Can you see him? Please...don’t leave him. He’s my son.
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Post by cheryl on Apr 13, 2006 20:01:18 GMT 10
Very ,very good.I hope he is going to be okay!!Please update ASAP!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Apr 13, 2006 21:32:12 GMT 10
Really good update, can't wait for the next one.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Apr 14, 2006 4:40:20 GMT 10
Here's the latest update.
Luka had Abby in his arms as he watched the doctors trying to save their son. The nurses pumped in medicine into his IV's as the doctors gave him CPR. Abby cried into Luka's chest. It seemed like hours before the monitor stopped beating erratically and it went back to it's normal beating. "Heart rate is going up." One of the nurses said as she looked at the monitor. Abby looked up with tears in her eyes and her eyes red and puffy. She watched as the numbers went up. "He's going to be okay." The doctor turned towards them. Abby looked up at Luka. He looked into her eyes for a moment before he kissed her on the lips then on the forehead. He let go of her and she walked over to the bed. She took Gab's hand in hers and gently rubbed it with her thumb. "Gab, sweetie, can you open your eyes." She whispered into his ear. "Sweetie, it's mommy. Can you open your eyes for me?" Gab slowly opened his eyes. "Mommy?" He said in quiet voice. "Hi baby." Abby said as tears welled up in her eyes again. "Mommy, my chest hurts." Gab said almost in tears. "I know sweetie." Abby said kissing him on the check. Luka walked over to them and put his arm around Abby. "Hi daddy." A tear rolled down his face. "Hi, buddy." He said giving him a smile. He reached over and wiped the tear from his cheek. "Mommy, can I go home?" "You have to stay here a little while longer, okay?" "Okay." "Where's Blanket?" Abby reached into her bag by the chair and pulled out Gab's stuffed blue dog. She smiled as his face lit up when he saw it. He squeezed it tight as he smiled up at Abby.
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Apr 14, 2006 5:18:27 GMT 10
Great update! I loved it.
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Post by zelda on Apr 14, 2006 8:46:33 GMT 10
Meg, you write beautifully.We feel for Abby, Luka and this amazingly strong little boy who fights for his life and tries to hide how afraid he is.It's really hearbreaking,and we can only hope that this struggle won't last too long and he'll be able soon to live a better life.But the love and solidarity betwen Abby and Luka, their strength as a couple is very emotional for us. We live this ordeal through your writing.Thank you.
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Post by cheryl on Apr 14, 2006 9:09:47 GMT 10
Great update! I enjoyed reading it. Update again soon.. And woohoo! 200 posts!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Apr 14, 2006 9:19:37 GMT 10
Thanks guys for all the wonderful comments. I'm glad you like it. I'll update soon.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Apr 14, 2006 13:56:55 GMT 10
I decided to update tonight. I hope you like it.
"Hey buddy, how are you doing?" Luka said walking into Gab's room. "Good." He smiled up at Luka. One of the nurses was sitting next to him talking. "Where's mommy?" "She's still working. She'll be up later." "Nurse Alice said that I can go home tomorrow. Can I?" "Yup." "Yeah." Luka walked over to him. "I'll be back later." Alice said with a smile. "Bye, Nurse Alice." "Bye, Gab. See you later." "Okay." He waved goodbye to her. "Daddy, can I go see mommy?" "You want to see mommy?" "Yeah." "I guess we can go see mom." Luka walked over to the corner of the room and grabbed the wheelchair. He helped Gab in. "Let's go see mom." Luka pushed Gab down the hall to the elevator. Abby stood over a patient in exam 3. "Malik, start a saline drip. I'll be back to check on you in a little while, Mr. James." Abby walked out of the room over to the admit desk. She put the chart down and picked up another one. She looked at the board and wrote her name next to the patients and walked over to exam 1. Luka pushed Gab down the hall. Susan walked out of trauma 2 and stopped to talk to them. "Hi Gab. How are you?" "Hi Aunt Susan. I'm good. I get to go home tomorrow." "You must be happy." "Yeah." "We came to see mommy." "I think she's in exam 2." "Thanks." "See you later." "Bye." "Bye." Susan smiled as they walked past her. They walked over to exam 1. Malik walked out. "Hey Malik. Is Abby in there?" "No she left about ten minutes ago." "Thanks." "High five." Malik held out his hand and Gab slapped it. "See you around." "Bye." "Hey Frank, do you know where Abby is?" Luka called to him. "I think she's in exam 1." "Thanks." Luka pushed Gab over to exam 1. Luka looked through the door window. Abby was standing by the bed writing on the chart. He knocked on the door and Abby looked over at him. He waved and pointed down to Gab. She gave him a smile and shook her head. She finished talking to the patient and walked towards the door. Luka pulled Gab out of the way as Abby opened the door. "Hi mommy." Gab beamed when he saw her. "Hi baby. What are you doing down here?" Abby said more to Luka then to him. "I wanted to see you." "You did?" "Yeah." "Well let's go to the lounge."
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Apr 14, 2006 14:29:40 GMT 10
Nice update. I loved it.
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Post by lubyfan on Apr 15, 2006 1:11:04 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Apr 16, 2006 12:39:13 GMT 10
Here's a new update.
Gab sat in the seat next to his bed clinging to his stuffed dog. He watched as Abby stuffed the rest of his things into the duffel bag. Luka came into the room with the doctor behind him. "You ready to go home?" The doctor asked Gab. "Yeah." "I'll see you in a few weeks, okay?" "Okay." Luka walked over to him and picked him up. He rested his head on his shoulder. "Thank you so much." Abby said shaking the doctor's hand. "You're welcome." "Thank you." Luka gave him a smile and a hand shake. "Gab can you say thank you." Abby said putting her hand on his back. "Thank you." "You're very welcome." The doctor smiled at him. "I'll see you in a few weeks." "Bye." "Bye." Luka opened the door to the apartment, still holding Gabrijel in his arms. "Are you happy to be home?" "Yeah." Gab said as Luka let him down. "I'm going to play in my room." "Okay." Abby said giving him a smile. "I have to get back to work." "Alright." Abby said giving him a kiss. "I'll call you later." "Love you." "I love you too." Luka smiled. "Gabrijel come say bye to dad." Gab came running back in the room.. "Bye daddy." "Bye, buddy. I love you." "I love you to daddy." Gab ran back into his room. "Maybe we could tell him tonight?" "Yeah." Luka said putting a loving hand on her stomach. "Bye." He said giving her another kiss. "Bye." She watched as Luka left. "Mommy." "Coming." She said smiling to herself.
I'm not sure if I should end it there or not.
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Apr 16, 2006 12:42:16 GMT 10
Well, if you end it there than you have to do another fic that continues on from this one.
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