kia
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Post by kia on Aug 19, 2007 2:47:58 GMT 10
This fic is my version of the whole Ames situation. I've written it after having read the spoilers. Hope you like it. This is rated for language, be warned.
1.LUKA
Luka can’t believe it is happening to him. Again. S**t, s**t, s**t. “At the light, turn to left” Quick glance in the rear mirror. Ames’s eyes are cold and distant. Luka knows he has to play right. Ames is not kidding. F**k, f**k, f**k. “Stop the car, here we are” Luka observes the house in front of him. It’s closed, all windows obscured with wood boards. Abandoned house. Luka frowns. He’s a little scared now. “Get out, now!” Ames is pointing a gun at him. Luka opens the car door and walks, his back at Ames. No escape, then. “This was my house. Where we used to be happy” “Ames…” “Shut up! I don’t need to listen to you. Walk fast and open the door” Luka tries to open it, but it’s blocked. He hesitates, his hand still brushing the doorknob. He’d like to say something, but he doesn’t dare. Ames is a dark shadow behind him. He can feel his hot breathe on his neck. Luka gulps trying to remain as calm as possible. He thinks at Abby and Joe: at least they’re safe. “Don’t tell me that a built and healthy man like you isn’t able to open a blocked door” Luka eyes Ames. “Crack it. we must go in. No discussion. Listen, you’ll better do whatever I’ll say, ok?” Luka feels the gun barrel against his back. He sighs deeply. This isn’t going to end well.
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Post by karo on Aug 19, 2007 7:59:14 GMT 10
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Post by becca on Aug 19, 2007 22:55:39 GMT 10
Oh no, poor Luka. Amazing start, update soon please!
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Post by Rach :) on Aug 20, 2007 6:27:30 GMT 10
i havent read it yet, does it have spoilers?
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Post by smile90 on Aug 20, 2007 7:23:52 GMT 10
interesting!!
I think it's not the story that happend in TV but I think it contains some spoilers.. don't know if kia has the same opinion...
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kia
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Post by kia on Aug 20, 2007 7:57:57 GMT 10
i havent read it yet, does it have spoilers? There are no spoilers. I have given a bad introduction, sorry. This is only Ames/Luka/Abby, my version of it. I used the word "spoilers" because this story was written before the episode aired, and in order to write it I took a look at the spolers concerning "Murmurs of the heart". I hope it's clearer now.
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Post by Rach :) on Aug 20, 2007 8:02:13 GMT 10
okay kewl!
i have read it now and i love it!!
i cant wait for an update!
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Post by kia on Aug 22, 2007 2:09:16 GMT 10
Chapter 2 is here. Hope you like it. And thanks for the comments.
2.ABBY
She’s screaming in the phone. Panicked. “Frank, please! He got Luka!” The desk clerk is trying to understand her words. Never witnessed a so hysterical Abby. She always seems so controlled. “Who’s on the phone?” “Dr Lockhart. She’s saying something about Dr Kovac. I can’t understand. Really” Neela takes the phone resolutely. “Abby?” “Neela? Oh Neela…”, she’s sobbing now, in despair. Joe is crying too, his little head buried on her neck. He can feel her fear. He’s sharing her fear. “Abby? What’s happened?” “He got him!” “Who? Abby, what are you saying?” “Ames! He…took…took…Luka…oh my…”, she’s stumbling at her words. She can’t recall a moment when she has been so scared and helpless. “Neela, please, let me talk to Frank. He has friends among cops” Neela reflects, numb. Pratt in jail and Luka being kidnapped. How is that possible? “Honey, I’m coming there. You shouldn’t be alone” “I should be with Luka” “Call the police. It’s all you can do” Abby falls silent. Neela waits. She knows what her friend’s going to say. “I can’t. Ames said he will…he will...hurt Luka if I call the police. Neela…I can’t, I can’t”, Abby is starting to hyperventilate. Joe is still whimpering against her ear. “Abby, take a deep breath. I’ll be there as soon as possible. Stay calm. We’re going to find a solution, ok?” “I’m scared” “I know” Silence again. Abby hangs up. The house is still, lifeless. Joe seems quieter now. He’s sucking his thumb, his big eyes fixed on Abby, studying her face. Abby sits on the couch. She looks at the watch. Only forty-five minutes have passed since Ames disappeared with Luka. Forty-five minutes. It seems a lifetime to her. She sighs. She’s feeling a little angry now. Her Luka. They belong together. She wants him back. Now.
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Post by smile90 on Aug 22, 2007 3:48:21 GMT 10
oh nooo.. how sad..
I hope that they'll be together soon!!
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Post by karo on Aug 22, 2007 7:56:01 GMT 10
ohh!! he can't hurt Luka!! update soon!!
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Post by Rach :) on Aug 23, 2007 1:41:01 GMT 10
loved the update i cant wait for more!
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Post by kia on Aug 28, 2007 4:31:11 GMT 10
Here we are, chapter three. Be still warned for language.
3.LUKA
“Sit there and stay silent. I don’t want to hear a single word coming from your mouth ok?” There’s an old wood chair in the middle of the room. Luka thinks it’s a kinda creepy and known image; something he must have seen in a movie or must have read in a book. He walks slowly, the gun still pointed against his back. His neck is hurting a little, he can feel his muscles stiffen and tired. He sits, not knowing what else to do. Ames turns around him and the gun shines when it’s hit by a ray of light. Luka blinks. He hates weapons. Every single type. They can only hurt people. Ames’s handcuffing Luka. His action makes Luka grimace a little: The handcuffs are too little for his wrists: Luka can barely feel his fingers. “You’re hurting, aren’t you? I know, it’s not good losing the feeling of your own hands. Don’t worry, you’ll learn to survive without using your hands” Luka looks up, his face searching Ames’s eyes: “I’m a doctor” Ames bends quickly in front of Luka. Their faces are almost touching. Luka notices Ames’s pupils are expanded. Too expanded. “Shut up! I can’t stand your voice! Don’t you want to survive?” Luka sighs. In any case, he isn’t too optimistic about his future. He goes on: “What did you take?” Ames’s eyes darts at him. He’s furious, he clearly doesn’t like the fact that Luka isn’t following his orders. He takes the gun again and points it against Luka’s temple. Luka feels cold sweat running down his spine, but he succeeds in staying calm. He doesn’t even flinch. “None of your business! Shut the H*ll up!” Luka feels the cold metal against his skin. He can’t believe this is happening again. He’s tired. How is it possible he finishes always in these dangerous situations? The absurdity of the reversing events of his life makes him chuckle a little. “What? Are you laughing? Do you think this is an amusing moment?” “In a sense. You know, you seem to know me well, but trust me: you can know something, but you’re so far from knowing everything about me and my life” “I don’t think so. I’ve made some researches about you and your past. I know about your dead children…” Luka closes his eyes briefly. He can’t give up now. He opens them again: “Ok, but what do you know about Croatia? And Vukovar? And Bosnia? And Congo? And Abby and me? What do you know about the two of us?” Ames jumps forward very quickly and uses the back of the gun to hit Luka. Luka feels a bruise above his right eyebrow. His blood is warm against his skin. Ames goes away from him, almost startled, as if he didn’t mean to hurt him. He gives his back to Luka. “Seen? You know something about me. But you know what? The things which happened to me are not who I am. They’re part of me, but I’m something more. I’m much more than that” He stops there. He licks away the blood which has just reached his lips. The metallic taste makes his stomach lurch a little. Ames is now looking at him, his eyes wide and maybe scared. He sits down, few meters away from Luka. He puts carefully the gun aside him. Silence fills the room. Luka’s feeling uneasy. “What are we doing now?” “We’ll wait?” “For?” “I don’t know. But we’ll wait” Luka closes his eyes again. He needs to get a permanent contact with Ames or he won’t pull through.
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Post by Rach :) on Aug 28, 2007 5:03:18 GMT 10
loved the update amazing as always! cant wait for more ps. you went from chapter 2 to chapter 4
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Post by britneyluby on Aug 28, 2007 5:10:27 GMT 10
I need you to UPDATE!!
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kia
Duchess of Luby
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Post by kia on Aug 28, 2007 5:20:12 GMT 10
loved the update amazing as always! cant wait for more ps. you went from chapter 2 to chapter 4 OPS! Sorry! This was Chapter 3, of course... Thanks Racho.
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