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Post by lubyfan on Aug 24, 2006 5:09:48 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 24, 2006 7:05:54 GMT 10
Great update!
nataliex
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Post by Caffy on Aug 25, 2006 8:46:46 GMT 10
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Post by Caffy on Aug 25, 2006 8:58:05 GMT 10
[glow=purple,1,300]Sorry. That was probs really annoying as some thought it was an update or whatever. Hmmm. [/glow]
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Post by Andy on Aug 25, 2006 8:59:03 GMT 10
Wow... Congratulations!!!
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Post by hollygirl on Aug 25, 2006 8:59:35 GMT 10
i thought it was an update.....I thought this was an update too......Update Soon!
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Post by Caffy on Aug 25, 2006 9:01:56 GMT 10
[glow=purple,1,300]Thanks Andy
Fweee, I'm verrrry happy as it means I'm getting into the college I want to go to. All is not lost *chuckle*[/glow]
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Post by Andy on Aug 25, 2006 9:15:02 GMT 10
Lol... You're welcome! That's Great! And I'm glad you get to go where you want!!
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Post by Caffy on Aug 25, 2006 9:34:04 GMT 10
Luka felt completely helpless as he stood there holding Abby up, he looked round the apartment and it looked like a tornado had hit it. He had never seen Abby totally loose it before, absolutely never. It did throw him, he just stood there, wrapping his arms around her and moving her to the couch, setting her down and rhythmically rubbing her back to calm her down, much like he had done with his children when they were alive, his heart squeezed tight in his chest at the memory of them. She pulled away.
“Sorry I’m so sorry…” she said quietly looking at the floor, then picking up the crumpled paper on the floor handed it too him without a word, her knees were close together and she folded her arms trying to draw herself in and shading the terrible embarrassment she felt for that uncontrollable display of emotion.
Luka felt confused and read the letter once through, and again, and again and again and again. He could hear his mind firing questions at him, he so badly wished he could make him feel the empathy that he felt towards Abby, the moment she’d opened the door any really needed him.
“What the hell…?” Luka started looking amazed and angry. Abby nodded solemnly. Things were silent for what seemed like an age, the tension felt sharp and hard against their chests, both afraid that what they may have to say would just be too much to deal with. Abby sighed wearily and rested her head in her hands.
“What am I going to do?” she asked to no one in particular, Abby had depended on escapes all her life, so what happened when she needed to escape her getaway? She shook her head trying to block out thoughts.
“What am I going to do?” she repeated blankly.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------ [glow=purple,1,300] Sorry it's short but I'm really giddy, I'll do the next parts soonish, and stuff, I'd greatly appreciate some crits on perhaps things I could change? And yeah. Which story do you guys like better this one of Hindsight?[/glow]
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Aug 25, 2006 10:08:52 GMT 10
Great update!!
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Post by Andy on Aug 25, 2006 10:22:17 GMT 10
I like them both, they are different... why choose between them?
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Post by rorygilmore on Aug 25, 2006 12:34:32 GMT 10
[glow=purple,1,300] Yay! Actually passed my gcse's!
*happy victory dance*[/glow] THAT'S SO GREAT!!!! CONGRATS!!!
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Post by lubyfan on Aug 25, 2006 20:23:50 GMT 10
Great update!
I like both fic, i hope you'll continue them.
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Post by strizzy on Aug 26, 2006 0:43:57 GMT 10
Great update!!
Glad you passed your GCSEs, I did too!
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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 26, 2006 4:04:53 GMT 10
What is she gonna do? Update soon natalie x
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