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Post by Little Amy on Oct 19, 2006 7:59:40 GMT 10
I wrote this while I was depressed(huh... still am) but decided to post it here. I really don't know if there's a background. And you just need to know that this is a Luby I story, like Abby still being a nurse and all that stuff. Every chapter is suppose to have a flashback from Abby's childhood(that's why the title) Oh, and I promise that if I decide to keep going I won't abandon it like I did with my first fic here. ¬¬'
Abby supported her weight with both her hands on the edge of the bed and carefully got up to not wake up the motionless body lying next to her. She moved to the bedside table and pulled a pack of cigarettes and a lighter. Luka mumbled something in his sleep that she couldn't understand. She stepped back in a reflex. Usually, she would have rushed to the bathroom to wash her tear stained face, like she'd been doing this past few days. Since Luka was unaware of her frequently night activity, he would make a lot of questions, and or she would be really rude with him or she would break down again. Neither one was a good option. But it wasn't a normal day and just in that night she decided not to worry about it. She turned her back to him and sat in the window sill, lighting up a cigarette.
'She brought the cigarette to her lips and after a couple of seconds let out some smoke. Immediately she started to cough and even if she had never smoked in her life she felt very stupid. "Dammit, Abby. You're not a kid anymore." Her thoughts came out a little more loud then she'd intended to and the body lying in the bed next to her shivered under the covers. She quickly hid the cigarette behind her back. Maggie would wake up the entire hotel seen Abby smoking. First would come the hysterical screams then the tears of guilty. She sighed and put the cigarette out.'
Abby pressed her forehead to the cold window and shook her head, as to try to push away the memories of her childhood. Suddenly, she felt arms surrounding her waist.
"Come back to bed." As he spoke a shudder went down her spine and all she could do was follow him. They laid on the bed facing each other. Luka cupped her face with both his hands and stroked her cheeks.
"Have you been crying, Abby?" She closed her eyes for a moment and let out a small ironic laugh.
"Isn't it obvious?" It wasn't supposed to sound that harsh. And he knew it. He put her arms around his own waist and squeezed her tight. He put his lips on top of her head and breathed her in.
"You don't have to tell me what ever is going on if you don't want to. I just want you to know... . . . that I'm here."
"I know."
"Good. There's something I can do?"
"Just .... . . Don't let me go." And he didn't.
So... .. ...Should I keep going? Or is it too sad? And please excuse my poor english... .
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 19, 2006 8:12:19 GMT 10
Yes, yes!!! Keep going!
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Post by XxXnicoleXxX on Oct 19, 2006 8:13:15 GMT 10
yes its a great start i think you should continue and i think your english is very good update soon XXXniczXXX
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Andrea
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Post by Andrea on Oct 19, 2006 8:13:56 GMT 10
Awww you are doing a great job Amykyo... please keep going i want to see where this is going...
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Post by ninabrasil (Marina) on Oct 19, 2006 8:31:29 GMT 10
Hey Amykyo! Great start, you should definitely keep going. Hope you'll feel better soon. Nina xx
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Post by LiLM on Oct 19, 2006 13:17:05 GMT 10
Great Start!! definitely keep going
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Post by lubyfreaky on Oct 19, 2006 18:55:59 GMT 10
please keep going it´s really good
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 19, 2006 19:02:18 GMT 10
Great Start!!
Keep Going!!
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Post by jaana on Oct 20, 2006 2:00:00 GMT 10
Yeah, you should definitely keep going! It's really good!
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Post by Little Amy on Oct 20, 2006 2:50:25 GMT 10
Thanks everyone for the nice comments, and I'm officially out of my depression(Let's hope it won't get in the way of my creativity). I don't think I'll be able to update tomorrow so I wrote a 3 updates in 1, scroll down to see the size of it ... big, huh?
Abby walked in one of the exams room. She pushed a curtain, stood beside a gurney and picked up a chart. "How are we feeling today, Sandy?" The girl looked up at her and smiled.
"I have cancer and I'll die soon. But you are dating the hottest doctor of the hospital!" Abby nearly shocked.
"What!?"
"Don't try tell me you're not 'cause the other nurse told me everything!!"
"But who--" Abby didn't finished her sentence, she knew who. As she crossed the room to get a wheelchair she made a mental note to kill Chuny later. "It's bath time!!"
"Don't change the subject! Are you?" Abby tried to made a confused face.
"What?"
"With the hot doctor!" Sandy wouldn't give up.
"How do you even know he's the hottest doctor of the hospital? You only know the ER!" The girl smiled.
"Hahaha, I guess this is a YES!" Abby sighed loudly. "And I know you have a good taste..." Abby smiled too and helped her to site on the chair.
"Thanks, I guess..." She started to push the wheelchair down the hall.
"So... .. I wanna know everything!"
"I thought Chuny had told you, everything..."
"No... I mean... The dirty details... .." Abby looked at her in disbelief.
"No way!!"
"Oh, come on!! What does a sick girl has to do to have some fun around here?!"
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Abby helped Sandy to lay on her bed. "You're all set." Sandy looked at her lap and remained in silence. "Look, Sandy. If this is about earlier, I really don't think I--"
"It's not it. I just ... don't know how to say this ... I ... You ... Could you do me a favor?"
"Oh... Sure." Sandy handed her a small piece of paper.
"Could you call this number for me?"
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Abby folded her arms, waiting. The girl had asked her to stay, and so did she.
"Hello?"
"Hi." Sandy's voice was cracking.
"Who's this?"
"Humm . . . ... It's me. Sandy..." Both remained in silence until Sandy spoke again. "So, how are you?"
"Haven't I asked you to stop calling here?" Abby gave her a worried look, but the girl mouthed an 'It's okay'.
"Yes you did. But this is really important."
"Make it fast."
"I didn't want to drop this bomb on you, but I'm afraid I don't have another choice... . . . I just want you to know... Dad... That I have cancer and that I'm gonna die..." She laughed uncomfortable. "Well, that means I'll finally stop calling..."
"Is this some kind of sick joke!?"
"No! No! Of course not! It's the true... I was just thinking that... After all these years and just now I got the chance to find you... I just... Wanted to meet you... Before... ... you know . . ."
". . . I'm sorry to hear that. But. I really can deal with that. I have a family ... Would be a lot to explain..."
"I . . . I . . . I understand..." Abby saw tears starting to form on her eyes.
"Thanks. And... Wasn't my fault, you know? Your mother told me she was pregnant, but she never really looked for me... So I always thought she was lying..."
"I understand... I understand..."
"Okay, then. Bye." He hung up the phone and Sandy lowered her head. Abby walked to the gurney and hugged her for a long time.
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Abby walked in one of the exams room. "I'm sorry I didn't come yesterday. It was my day off." She pushed the curtain but found the gurney empty. She exited the room and walked to the Admit. Angry building inside her. "OK, who moved Sandy from exam 4, again?" Chuny, Haleh and Luka looked at each other uncomfortably.
"Who!?"
"Hum . . . She died . . . yesterday..." The two nurses gave her a sad look and quickly walked away. Luka stood in front of her and held tight one of her hands with his own.
"You know ... I knew it was going to happen... I Just didn't think it would be so soon . . ."
"I'm sorry, Abby." She pulled her hand from his grip and walked away.
"You say that a lot."
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Luka came out of the bathroom holding a towel around his waist. he saw Abby spread all over the bed, eyes fixed on the ceiling.
"Wanna take a shower?"
"I don't know." He sighed and sat next to her. She got up and sat too, sighing. "Maybe." He tried to make eye contact but she turned her head away. She picked up her purse that was lying on the floor but Luka quickly grabbed her wrist and made her put it back. He knew what she was going to do.
"Don't. .... Use me, to relieve your tension." He pulled her to him and laid her in the bed. She laughed.
"Are you that desperate?"
'No, I'm that in love with you.' It was what he really wanted to say, but he didn't want her to think he was pushing her. He knew she had to be the first one to... . say the "L" word.
"Was you?" She looked confused at him until realization hit her. Their first time. This very hotel. This very bed. As she had said, he didn't talk.
He pulled her shirt and her pants off but didn't do anything else. He just stared at her in a way that made her blush. He wanted to help, but she had to want to be helped. She grabbed his towel and tossed it on the floor. She was on top of him. Then beneath him. On top again. His hands were all over her. Her mouth was all over him. After what seemed ages they collapsed and fall asleep on each others arms.
'Abby got up from her bed with screams coming from the hallway. She stepped out from her bedroom and wasn't surprised with what she found. Maggie was opening every door of the house shouting things for no one in particular. Abby entered the nursery and picked up little Eric from his crib. She moved to the next room. "Dad, wake up. Mom is acting like crazy, again." But she found the room empty. "Dad?" She opened one of the closets and panicked when she saw only Maggie's clothes. Eric started to cry. "Daddy. . . . ?"
"He's gone Abby." She saw Maggie standing in the hallway. "He's gone, and it's all your fault!"'
Luka woke up and looked at Abby that was standing in front of the window completly... . naked. He opened his mouth to say that this was a nice way to start the day, but stopped himself when he saw her expression. She didn't look good. He got up from the bed carrying a blanket and wrapped it around her.
"You're gonna catch a cold." She walked away from him.
"I need that shower."
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 20, 2006 3:22:27 GMT 10
Great Update!!!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 20, 2006 3:27:32 GMT 10
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 20, 2006 4:10:06 GMT 10
wow this is really great and touching, please update soon
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Andrea
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Post by Andrea on Oct 20, 2006 4:54:08 GMT 10
Great... i'm liking this so much!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please Amykyo keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 20, 2006 6:50:57 GMT 10
This is really gd! Hope you do more soon natalie x
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