LiLM
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Post by LiLM on Jan 11, 2007 10:24:33 GMT 10
Thanx guys I'm glad you liked it so I'll try to update tomorrow ok
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Post by Melimelo on Jan 14, 2007 15:43:14 GMT 10
I like it, honestly... and I suspect there might be some trouble with Carter later??? Don't worry about Carter..let's concentrate on getting rid of Sophie first
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LiLM
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Post by LiLM on Jan 16, 2007 6:41:09 GMT 10
Sorry guys i had some problems at home so i couldn't update but here it is. ************************************************ Chapter 4 A Date?A week later. "I think I'm going to wear the black jeans, what do you think?" Katie asked Julie, she had a date with a guy from her math class. "Julie, Julie" "What, oh, I think you'll look great" "You're not listening to me, are you?" "Sorry" "If you like him so much, just ask him out" "I can't" "Oh, c'mon grandma, it's the 21st century" They were talking about Charley, Julie really liked him, they talked once but Julie was so nervous that she pretend to be late for class and run away from him. When they were walking to their class, Katie saw Charley walking to them. "Ok, I'll be right back" Julie saw Charley too and she quickly grabbed Katie's arm "Where are you going" "Hi girls" Charley said. It was to late for Julie to run. "Hi" Julie said "Um-um, I wanted to ask you something" "Ok" "Would you like to go out, let's say, tomorrow?" Julie tried to see Katie but she was looking away and just pinched Julie's arm. Ouch. She thought. "Ok" "It's 7:00 ok?" "Yeah, let me give you my address" When Charley was gone, Katie turned around and said to Julie. "Was that so hard?" "No, just the question is, what do I tell my mom?" As soon as Abby opened the door Julie jumped on her with a cup of coffee. "Hi, mom, how was your day?" Julie asked. Abby was a little surprised about Julie's behavior. "It was fine, slow though" "Yeah, listen, I was thinking maybe i should help you out more, in the house, you know, you'll be exhausted when you get home, so, I'll be happy to do it" "Ok, that's it, what's his name?" "What, what are you talking about?" Julie said walking to the kitchen. ""Mom I'll help you out more", c'mon Julie" "Ok, Charley, he asked me out, tomorrow" "See, that's easier to say, isn't it?" "Yeah, so, can I go?" "Yes you can but you have to be home early ok?" "Ok, thanks mom" "Yeah" That night Luka got home before Sophie and it was good because he needed some time to think. He was thinking about his relationship with Sophie, it wasn't what it was before, it became a routine, just one more thing to do, he just came home to a woman he didn't love anymore and he didn't want that, he wanted to talk to her but he didn't know what to say. Luka's thoughts were interrupted by a few knocks on the door. He stud up and opened the door. "Hi, babe, sorry I forgot my keys, how was your day?" Sophie said taking her coat off an then kissed him, and he didn't feel anything. "It was ok" Luka said closing the door. "You're not going to believe what happened to me at work, so this guy........" Sophie kept talking and talking but Luka wasn't paying much attention. His mind was thinking about somebody else. ******************************************* Ok tell me what you think.
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Post by hollygirl on Jan 16, 2007 6:46:01 GMT 10
I think that somebody else is Abby... and I also think this fic is awesome. update soon!
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LiLM
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Post by LiLM on Mar 29, 2007 11:24:44 GMT 10
So after a very long talk with my psychologist (no kidding) i decided to keep writing this, he said it was good for me, so heres the new update and tell me what you guys think....
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Chapter 5
Good or Not Good.....
TWO WEEKS LATER
Julie's date was great, they went to the movies and then Charley walked her home, they talk about their favorite things, music, movies, etc.. They were really into each other, share a few more dates and become more than friends.
Abby was home, it was her day off, when Julie got home. "Hi mom, how's it going?" "Great" "Cool, oh mom, can i go over to Katie's we have a big paper work to do?" "Sure...so what's going on with your life?" "Hm-mm nothing really" "Really...what about Charley?" "What about him?" "Well you have go out a few times..how's that going?" "Ok..but don't talk until i finish ok?" "OK" "If you really want to know, Charley is my boyfriend now, and i didn't tell you anything because i wanted to be sure, ok, now you can talk" "I think that's great, i just, can i give you an advise?" "Sure" "Be careful ok, I'm not saying he's not good but just be careful" "I know, ok bye mom"
Luka was sitting on a bench in the ambulance bay when he saw Carter was coming to him and he sat next to Luka. "So, how's it going?" "What?" Luka turned his head to look at him. "Never mind, hey do you think Jerry can give me Abby's phone number?" "Her phone number?" "Yeah, I was thinking about asking her out, but i don't have her phone number" Luka was a little surprised, Carter never talk to him, well he did but just for things related to the hospital. "Hm-mm I guess" "Ok, great, thanks man" Carter said patting Lukas back and left. "Yeah" Man, that was weird. Luka thought. Thanks to Carter, Luka started thinking about Abby, again, he was decided to break up with Sophie and ask Abby out but first he needed to be sure about his feelings. That night when Luka got home, Sophie was in the kitchen, Luka closed the door and walk to her.
"Hey, i didn't hear you come in" Sophie tried to kiss him but he turned back "What's going on?" "We need to talk?" Luka said taking her hand and leading her to the couch. "About what?" "Us" "Us?" "Yeah, us, our relationship" "What, what are you talking about?" "I think we need a break" "A what, why?" "It's just, it's not what it used to be" "Of course it is" "Well maybe for you but not for me" "Is there someone else, is it that woman you work with?" "No, it's not that, i just, i need some time to think ok?, I'm going to a hotel and I'll pick up all my things tomorrow" "So it's not just a break?" "I guess not...i'm really sorry Sophie but this is not good, for any of us, ok, and i hope one day you'll forgive me" Luka walked in to their bedroom and put some clothes and things in a suitcase, when he came back to the living room saw Sophie was crying, he felt bad about it but he couldn't do it anymore. "I'm going" Sophie just nodded. "I'm sorry" He grabbed his keys and left, he knew that Sophie was upset and that she probably didn't want to talk to him or see him ever again. "I'll look for an apartment tomorrow"
THE NEXT DAY
Abby was walking to the ER when Carter almost jumped on her. "Good morning Abby" "Dr. Lockhart" Abby said a little mad. "Right, how was your day off" "What, why are you asking me that?" "I just..." "Look, I don't want to be rude but I'm late so if you'll excuse me.." Abby said walking to the lounge. "Ok, see you"
During the rest of her shift, Carter kept following Abby everywhere, the lounge the elevators, even when she was on break. By the end of the day Abby was so upset that she yelled at him once, but that didn't stop him. "Hey Abby, wait up" Oh what the hell. She thought . "Yeah?" "Would you like to go out for a coffee or something?" "Hm-mm, no, thanks" "Why not?" "Because i don't want to but don't take it personally" She said walking out of the lounge. She saw Luka sitting on a chair and walk to him. "Hey" She said "Hi" "You look sad" "Yeah" "Ok, um, are you off?" "Yeah I'm just signing this" "You need a ride home?" "No, thanks" "You want to get some coffee, you seem to need it" Abby said smiling. Luka just laugh. He didn't know what to say. Did she ask me out, o c'mon Luka is just coffee, it's not a date. He thought. "Sure" "Ok, let's go" They walked out of the ER to the ambulance bay and Carter saw them. "So, I'm not good enough, but he is, uh?"
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So, you like it?
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Post by LuBByFaNatiC [ThAiSsa] on Mar 30, 2007 3:04:19 GMT 10
it's a really great fic.... glad you decided to keep writing this fic...
update soon
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Post by lubyworld on Mar 30, 2007 3:56:25 GMT 10
love your update i hope you update soon
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Post by barbarabraz on Apr 1, 2007 1:00:06 GMT 10
Great update! Update soon! Really good fic! ;]~
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Post by lubyworld on Apr 12, 2007 3:09:01 GMT 10
LiLM where are you ? I really really need an update ...please update as soon as possible
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LiLM
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Post by LiLM on Apr 12, 2007 7:30:17 GMT 10
Hi, sorry guys for the lack of updates but I'm not home I'm on vacations at my aunt's and she doesn't have internet and there are no many cibercafes around here but as soon as i come back home I'll update ok.
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Post by Sleepless Monday on Apr 14, 2007 11:24:31 GMT 10
I just caught up on the whole thing. Its really good, can't wait for your update!
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LiLM
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Post by LiLM on Apr 22, 2007 14:03:49 GMT 10
So here's the new update..
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Chapter 6
Would you like to....
They went to a Cafe near her house. At first both felt weird but with time everything seemed normal, like the knew each other for years... "So, why are you sad?" "Uh, I'm not" "Yeah and i don't like pop tarts" "Well, i broke up with my girlfriend" "Sophie?" "Yeah" "Sorry" Am I?. She thought. "Thanks...and now I need to find an apartment" "Really..well I can help you with that, I saw a few places when I moved here, I can give you the addresses" "Really, that would be great" "Ok" In that moment Abby's celphone started ringing. "Oh, sorry, hello,hi honey, yeah ok, yeah right, bye baby, ok bye, Sorry" "It's ok" Honey, Baby? He thought. "Oh my god, it's late i have to go" Abby said looking at her watch. "You need a lift?" "No thanks, my house is near by" "Ok see you then" "Bye Luka" "Bye"
Back at the Lockhart's House...
"Hi, honey" Abby said "Hey" "How was your day?" "It was...fine, yours?" "Slow" "Mm, mom I have to tell you something" "What?" "Grandma called, Dad's mom" "Really, what did she want?" "Uh, just talk, say hi, know how we were doing" "Oh, great, how is she?" "Good, she's good" "Ok" "Mom she asked me if I could come visit?" "Do you?" "What?" "Want to go?" "I don't know, I mean I'd love to see my friends in LA and of course her" "Well, I think you should go" "Really, it's fine with you?" "Yeah, she's your grandmother, go, have fun" "Ok, I'm going to call her, maybe I'll go next weekend, thanks mom" Julie said and kiss Abby's cheek. "Anytime"
A FEW DAYS LATER....
He thought about a lot of things, Like was Abby married? Who was Honey and Baby?, he had to figure out before he asked her to go out. That day they treated a men who's wife died, they were in Lockup and Luka started talking.. "It's sad" "What" She asked "He feels guilty for what happened" "He's not" "Yeah" "I wonder how long have they been married?" "I don't know, many years, I guees...how long have you?" "What?" "Been Married?" "I'm not" "Oh" "Yeah. My husband died two years ago" "Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't know" "It's ok" "They stood there looking in to each others eyes. Luka was just about to say something when Chuny walked in.. "Abby would you...." "MVA coming in" "Ok we'll be right there, let's go" Abby said and walked out of the room. "Great"
That day was awful for Abby. A lot of work and certain R3 following her all the time, again. By the end of her shift all she wanted to do was go home. She was in the lounge getting her coat when Luka walked in... "Hey" "Hi" "How was your day?" "Fine, thank you" "Sure...uh, Abby can I ask you something?" "Yeah, sure" "Would you like to....uh....to" "Yeah?" Abby laughed "Would you like to have some dinner with me sometime?" "Dinner...with you?" "Yeah" "Uh, yeah, I'd love to have dinner with you?" "Ok, how about next weekend, let's say Saturday, at eight?" "Perfect, it's a date" "Ok" "Good Night, Luka" Abby said and walked out of the lounge. "Night"
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So TheRe it is and I ProMise to Update mOre Often...LiLm
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Post by Bah on Apr 25, 2007 9:03:54 GMT 10
great update!
update soon please!
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Post by smile90 on Apr 25, 2007 22:34:29 GMT 10
great update!!!
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Post by suzanne on Apr 23, 2009 23:18:32 GMT 10
I just read this!! It's really good, would love to see it updated or finished!!
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