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Post by carsley on Oct 25, 2006 2:37:38 GMT 10
Friday afternoon. Luka was on his way home from work, and grabbed a coffe at Magoos. The day had been slow, traumas there, traumas here, traumas everywhere. He had yelled at Pratt. Pratt yealled at him. Sam came into the discussion, Pratt told her to shut up ... - Luka was tired. But something good had happend. Not good, awesome. Abby smiled at him. That way .. That only .. she could. Should he ask her out to dinner? Just for fun? But she's ... So .. good. He came home, opend the door, he went in the apartment, bills on the floor, a big sigh, and just picked them up. - Gas, food, computer .. Why does everything havto be so expensive?! He mutterd. He tooked a beer, and went to the couch, sat down and opend the bills. - Gas - 100$?! DAMMIT! He said . The phone rang. - Kovac. - Hey, Luka, Abby here. - Abby, hi. He felt happy. - I was just wondering if you've seen my stetoscope, Pratt said you borrowed it before ... - Um .. Yes, yes, it's in my locked. Sorry. - Oh .. Well .. I can .. borrow Rays, sorry for disturbing you, bye Luka. - ABBY. Wait .. - Yes? - Um .. Haha, wanna go to ... lunch tomorrow? - Um .. Yes, I think I can ... 11 a.m? Doc Magoos? - Yeah, great. See ya. Bye, Luka said and smiled. - Bye. To be contiued. |
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 25, 2006 3:10:54 GMT 10
Great Start!!!
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Mitsi1819
Marquise of Luby
Somewhere, Somehow, I'll Find You..
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Oct 25, 2006 3:19:47 GMT 10
Intresting...  |
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Post by luby2534 on Oct 25, 2006 3:21:15 GMT 10
Loved the start, cant wait to read more of your work !! 
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Post by jadestar on Oct 25, 2006 3:48:37 GMT 10
sweet start, I'd like to read more  |
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Post by lubyfreaky on Oct 25, 2006 3:48:38 GMT 10
Great start  |
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nandafm
Marquise of Luby
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Post by nandafm on Oct 25, 2006 15:08:04 GMT 10
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Post by jaana on Oct 25, 2006 23:51:54 GMT 10
Great start! Sounds interesting, i'd like to read some more.  |
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Post by Noora on Oct 26, 2006 0:50:26 GMT 10
I love shy Luka too. More cutier ^^
Interesting start!
really want to hear something more!
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Post by carsley on Oct 26, 2006 2:28:50 GMT 10
Saturday, almost 11 a.m Luka was on his way to Doc Magoos, his meeting with Abby was soon coming true. Brilliant. Awesome. Lovely. He had one of his black suites, a purple tie, and a white shirt. He was hot. If you ask him. Hopfully, Abby would think that to. When he arrived, Abby was running cross the street. Her scrubs (yes, on a date ...) were bloody. - Sorry, trauma, she said and smiled. - Ah. Traura .. Heh ... So, how are you? - Fine. Just a little odd ... Beeing here and .. all. You? - Ah ... Good, I guess. Haha. - Why are you blushing? Abby asked and looked at him. - You're .. beautiful. - Thankyou .. I guess. Abby blushed to. - Now who's blushing? Luka said and laughfed. - Is this .. romantic? Doc Magoos? At almost noon? Isn't a date suppose to be like .. Dress and roses, and expensive restaurant? - You wanna do that instead? - Yeah .. Sure ... Do you? Abby said and looked at Luka. - Heh, yeah ... But only if you're wearing a dress. - Luka ... Really? - Yes! Pleaseeeeeeee, I am beging you. I'll take you to that expensive place .. What's it called? The golden ... ? - HORSE? Kiddin' me? WOW, yeah, Luka, that's expensive ... - Say that then? He looked at his watch. - Maybe 8 p.m? She smiled. - I'll pick you up outside you'r door. See ya later. - Bye. She runned away and Luka smiled as hell. |
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 26, 2006 5:34:22 GMT 10
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Post by strizzy on Oct 26, 2006 6:07:33 GMT 10
Nice start!
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 26, 2006 9:34:34 GMT 10
Great Update!!!
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Post by carsley on Oct 26, 2006 19:25:31 GMT 10
thankyou, i will update soon as i come home from school. |
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Post by jaana on Oct 26, 2006 23:55:59 GMT 10
It was great, Magda!  |
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