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Post by Bah on Feb 25, 2007 14:28:29 GMT 10
great update!
update soon please!
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Post by Real Dream on Feb 25, 2007 15:02:08 GMT 10
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Post by strausser on Feb 25, 2007 16:22:14 GMT 10
ok, there're two huge luby plot hole in this story so far: 1. luka should not be able to resist abby 2. abby should not be able to resist luka melinda, you have to fix them soon!
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Post by ERFanRach on Feb 25, 2007 20:47:09 GMT 10
Great Update!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 26, 2007 1:44:31 GMT 10
Great update natalie x
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Post by erfan228 on Feb 26, 2007 7:59:02 GMT 10
Great update!! Can't wait for more!!!
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Post by Melimelo on Feb 26, 2007 10:50:09 GMT 10
The rest of the day had been full of awkward moments..ever since the stalker comments Abby felt uncomfortable around him and when he was in the kitchen she stayed on the sofa and when he was in the bathroom she sat and watched the television...she wondered if he noticed she was trying to keep out of his way. The sound of the pouring rain outside the window was somehow comforting until Luka mentioned going out in it. "You are not seriously going out in this weather are you...?" Luka shrugs his shoulders... "I thought I might go to the video store..do you want anything while I'm out..?" Abby shakes her head slowly..wondering if her lack of good company had made him want to go out. "No ..I'm fine thanks..." Luka stares at her for a minute and wonders why she is giving him the cold shoulder all of a sudden...he slips on his coat and heads out the door still contemplating her mood.
Abby stares out the window wondering why Luka is taking so long..he has been gone an hour and it's not that far to the videoshop .....even on foot. The rain is steady and Abby is beginning to pace as it gets darker and there is still no sign of Luka. 'Where could he be ?..." she wonders. The rain has made a lake on the sidewalk and the water flows fast as it runs down the street..Abby folds her arms across her chest and wonders what she should do..."I'm not his keeper..he can come and go as he pleases ..I don't have to know where he is all the time or who he might be with.." There she had done it..she had crossed the line and sent her self into paranoia and why..why did she care so much where he might be...she starts chewing on a strand of hair she has twirled around her fingers..when suddenly there is a key in the door....
"Luka.. you're all right" she runs towards him and he puts out and arm to stop her. "I am all wet and stuff ..don't touch me..."
Abby stands back and looks him up and down...his sleeve is covered in blood and his hands have cuts on them. "Oh my god Luka ..what happened...." Luka recounts a car accident on the way to the video store.
"I saw this car skid through a red light and plough straight into the car on the other side....it was awful and I ah .... I called 911 and immediately tried to help out....it was no use the driver of the skidding car was killed instantly and the other driver was trapped in the car ..I tried to pull them out..but their leg was stuck and they kept loosing conscienciousness...I did everything I could...but I couldn't save them"
His face is wet and water drips from his hair as he stands there seemingly reliving the whole event over and over again... Abby bites her lip and swallows hard..she wasn't sure what to say and could only think about his wet clothes. "C'mon Luka..let's get you out of these wet clothes..." She grabs him by the hand and leads him to the bathroom..he seems to be in a trans-like state and suddenly she is very worried about him. "Luka...take off your clothes and have a shower....I don't want you to catch a chill..."
Luka stands dazed and confused..if she felt awkard before ..she certainly felt it now..she pulls off his coat and throws it to the floor and takes his t-shirt up and over his head...she unbuttons his pants and pulls them down to the floor and as if on autopilot he lifts his feet to step out of them...she stares at his boxers and can't proceed..she stands up and turns on the shower for him.
'You can do the rest...I will go to your room and get some dry clothes for you....." she touches his arm and he slowly nods. Abby lays out some clothes on hs bed and then sits down and puts her head in her hands. 'What the hell is going on with him ...?" Luka walks into his bedroom and sits down beside her..she looks up at him..his expression looks pained.
"Abby...when my family died in the war...I wasn't there...and by the time I got there..it was too late I could have saved my wife or I could saved my daughter..but I was selfish and I tried to save both and in the end I couldn't save them at all..." Abby squeezes his hand and leans her head on his shoulder like it's the most natural thing to do. 'I'm so sorry Luka...I didn't know...I guess today brought back some bad memories huh..?"
Luka turns her head to face him...he stares into her eyes searching for something..she dares not to breathe and he moves his lips in close to hers..he hesitates and looks into her eyes again..she surrenders herself..she is unable to resist. They lie down on the bed and his hands move effortlessy across her body and feel every inch of her curves....her eyes close as she feels something electric in his touch..she can't stop him..she doesn't want him to stop as he begins to silently undress her. "Luka...." she seems to question him and he simply hesitates for a moment and then continues.........
To be continued.............
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Post by strausser on Feb 26, 2007 23:23:09 GMT 10
melinda, you are literally inviting homicide with that cliffhanger. you know, queensland isn't that far away from melbourne... and i don't really want to make it to the frontpage of the paper. arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i demand an update
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Post by ERFanRach on Feb 27, 2007 2:05:03 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by Bah on Feb 27, 2007 3:43:48 GMT 10
great update!
update soon please!!!
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Post by zelda on Feb 27, 2007 5:23:00 GMT 10
I loved the awkwardness between them! It's so realistic! And how bittersweet it is when Luka opens up to Abby! But, with the end of the chapter, I see some steamy scene coming soon! I could call this part GREAT EXPECTATIONS!! Karma for you as soon as I can!
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 27, 2007 5:59:08 GMT 10
Great update Glad Abby was there for him natalie x
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Post by kcabrasil on Feb 27, 2007 6:27:50 GMT 10
;)great!!!
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Post by Melimelo on Feb 27, 2007 7:11:08 GMT 10
Yikes I have to get ready for work..maybe just a quick update and maybe just for the mature readers!!!!! especially strausser...there are two flights into Hervey bay today and I don't want her coming after me! Abby woke up and immediately felt a smile on her face..last night was incredible and she couldn't have imagined how emotional and loving it could be...the difference between this time and the last time they had sex was phenomenal..... Luka's arm drapes over her waist and she can feel him pressing against the small of her back as they lie against each other spooning like cutlery..his hand starts to move and she closes her eyes and grins as she anticipates his next move... " Morning ..." he groans as she stretches away from him. "Morning ..yourself.." she giggles nervously..suddenly she realises that they are in his bed.. his big glorious bed and the whole concept of roomies has taken a whole new twist. "Luka ...what are we going to do..?" Luka rolls her over and pulls her up on top of him and she stares into his eyes..an evil little smirk forms on his face.. "I am going to make love to you all day Abby ...that's what I am going to do...." Abby blinks and raises her eyebrows "Yeah..that sounds like a plan....." To be continued......
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 27, 2007 7:38:11 GMT 10
Sounds like a very good plan Great update natalie x
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