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Post by suzanne on Aug 24, 2008 10:58:07 GMT 10
Very nice update!! Love the way Abby talks straight to Luka's face!! Hope he does call her soon and makes it up with her!! Hope Gillian doesnt cause any problems!!!! Update soon!!
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kcabrasil
Countess of Luby
Could I be more mess up?
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Post by kcabrasil on Aug 26, 2008 5:36:25 GMT 10
Hei, you're back!!! amazing update... I'm waiting for the next!
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carolh4eva
Junior Luby
wishin' i were abby
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Post by carolh4eva on Sept 15, 2008 20:19:14 GMT 10
hey, wats going on here? did u forget all abot this fic?!!! because i love it and you need to finsh!! please?!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Sept 15, 2008 23:47:19 GMT 10
Update !
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Post by Melimelo on Sept 27, 2008 18:50:02 GMT 10
No I have not forgotten...I have been busy and i promise an update in the next few days Thanks for your patience
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Post by Melimelo on Sept 27, 2008 22:10:19 GMT 10
Chapter 17
Abby stands at the door and stares at it and asks herself what is she doing here and by here she means standing at Luka's door at 10pm at night. The answer is simple. Luka having discharged himself from hospital over a week ago had been holed up in his apartment under the watchful eye of Gillian and then out of the blue he calls Abby and asks her over for a visit when she finishes her shift. Of course she lied and told him she was tired and probably wouldn't make it and after hanging around work and procrastinating as long as possible she finally summons the courage to come and see him and convinces herself she will even be civil to Gillian. So here she stands only centimetres away from his door and suddenly her hand feels frozen and she can't find the strength to knock. Imagine her surprise when it opens anyway.
"Abby ..what are you doing out here..?" Luka stares at her.
Abby raises her eyebrows and considers asking him the same question and then Gillian pushes past him and carries out a bag.
"Hi Abby..glad you decided to drop by..I have to leave"
She leans upward towards Luka and he responds with a kiss and Abby turns her head as it isn't something she wishes to see up that close. Abby watches Luka's eyes as they follow Gillian's path down the hall and as she disappears from view Abby sighs a beath of relief.
"So she is going home..huh?"
Luka nods as he ushers Abby inside.
"Her boyfriend is back and she wants to catch up with him."
Abby feels herself do a double take and then shakes her head.
"She has a boyfriend...what was she doing with you then..?"
Luka sits down and rubs his chin...explaining things to Abby was going to be complicated.
"Abby..I'm not very good at committing to relationships and over there people come and go and the work is..well sometimes over there..it's different and things are not taken too seriously and people hook up and....."
He could see the glint in her eye was turing to despair and horror so he tried to re direct.
"Did you hear from Carter yet or is it still just the letter..?"
Abby clenched her fist ,the mere mention of Carter's name made her angry.
"No I haven't heard anything "
Her face was without emotion and sudenly he felt terribly guilty and he wanted to pick up her hand and hold it and let her know he was still grateful for her friendship after eveything he had been through..he was just glad to have her here even if she was in a strange mood.
"Abby...your friendship means a lot to me and I'm sorry things didn't work out for you and Carter...if you need me..I'm here."
Abby felt her lip tremble and suddenly the drama of the last couple of weeks finally started to hit her...thinking Luka was dead,Carter going to find him and then dumping her by letter...it was all too much and she didn't want to think about it.
"Luka have you got a beer in your fridge..I kind of need a drink"
Luka surprised by her request sat still for a minute and then leaned over and grabbed her hand..this time he had the courage to hold it as he looked her squarely in the eye.
"Abby...you don't want a drink...do you..?"
Abby was beginning to shake and she wasn't sure if it was from emotion or stress and as Luka pulled her into an embrace she felt her body go limp and offered no resistance to his advances. Luka's hot breath was nuzzling at her ear and she felt intoxicated simply by him breathing and as his arms swept her in closer she felt safe.
"Oh Abby...I really missed you..."
Luka's gentle accent was almost hypnotic and then suddenly as she closed her eyes and drifted slightly an alarm went off and at first she though it was only in her head and then Luka laughed.
"Oh yeah I was warming up some pizza." It was the oven alarm.
Abby recoiled away from him on the couch and noticed that amost all her buttons were undone and suddenly an even bigger alarm went off in her head for real.
"Luka...we can't do this....we are not thinking clearly"
Abby hastily rebuttons her blouse and and tries to tuck it back in as Luka returns from the kitchen and seems pissed off.
"Why not?...we are good friends and we have had sex before..."
Abby throws her head back in disgust.
"Luka your bed is probably still warm..."
Luka grabs her hand as she tries to get passed him.
"Maybe we are more than friends..maybe we need to be honest and admit we still have feelings.."
Abby can't think straight...all her plans and all her thoughts lately have been about getting on with her life..and now this
"Luka...I can't..we can't...I mean we can be friends but that's it ..that's all I can offer..I'm sorry...I have to put myself first for a change."
To be continued..........
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Post by suzanne on Sept 28, 2008 4:49:10 GMT 10
That was really good!! Glad Gillian is gone!! The way Abby was nervous about knocking was very good!! Love the way Luka and Abby get on! I'm glad Abby is thinking of herself for a while too!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
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lylee
Luby Lover
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Post by lylee on Sept 28, 2008 7:16:47 GMT 10
It's great to see another look on s10. I loved how you put Abby's alcohol problem in the story. That's something that I wouldn't have imagined happening in s10. I hope you'll update soon.
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marie
Countess of Luby
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Post by marie on Sept 28, 2008 18:59:40 GMT 10
it's pretty cool !
hope you update soon
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Chephren
Luby Lover
If you wouldn't wear your dog, please don't wear ANY fur...
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Post by Chephren on Sept 29, 2008 7:34:12 GMT 10
This is soooo great! You have one more fan!! So please, update soon!
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Post by suzanne on Nov 29, 2008 6:45:06 GMT 10
Come on, you have to update!! Did you forget this fic?? Need to know what happens!!
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Post by Melimelo on Jan 6, 2009 14:05:03 GMT 10
Okay okay....I did forget about this I will try to do an update but i'm a little stale so bear with me
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Post by suzanne on Jan 6, 2009 20:10:38 GMT 10
Okay okay....I did forget about this I will try to do an update but i'm a little stale so bear with me How could you forget it, its sooo good!! I'm sure you not stale and whatever you write will be really good!!
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Post by Melimelo on Jan 6, 2009 20:43:34 GMT 10
Chapter 18
The elephant was definitely in the room now and it was called lust. Abby was so emotional that as much as she wanted to push Luka away at the same time she was imagining him pulling her back in. ....Her head was beginning to ache and she felt a sort of migraine coming on.
"Luka...I need an aspirin, can you get me one."
Luka looks at her carefully,he tilts her head up with one finger pressed just under her chin and looks into her eyes. Abby squints a bit as she looks into the light and waits for him to speak.
"Hmm...you look tired Abby...are you getting enough sleep?"
Abby twists her head a little and his finger drops away and she shrugs her shoulders.
"Yeah....I'm sleeping...not like a baby or anything ...but I'm sleeping."
She just lied to him and he could tell and her eyes darted around the room as she tries to qualify her answer before he questions her again. This was rediculous and she felt stupid for trying to convince him...so what if she wasn't sleeping, it's not like she was asking him for sleeping tablets . Luka puts his hand on her shoulder and squeezes it a little.
"Abby...let me cook you dinner and we'll talk for a while and..."
Abby cuts him off before he finishes.
"Luka ..you already said you were warming up pizza and besides it's late and you should be resting and not trying to look after me...I'm a big girl. "
Luka runs his hand up her arm and she stops breathing for almost a full second...his touch was like silk and she yearned for him even more now and the silence between them was obvious and neither dared to speak and as Abby fumbled to say something ...Luka grabs her face and gently kisses her on the forehead.
"I respect you and our friendship so I won't try anything tonight...but you should know that there is nothing wrong with friends having....well you know I'm here if you need me"
Abby closes her eyes and listens to his soft accent whispering in her ear and she almost blurts out the words I want you and then Luka turns suddenly and walks off toward the bathroom...he yells out to her.
"I'll just get you those aspirin and then we'll have pizza"
Abby punches the cushion on the couch and then sighs.
"Thanks Luka..." she yells back, and wonders if she made the right decision.
To be continued...............
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Post by suzanne on Jan 6, 2009 22:13:32 GMT 10
Loved the update!! Can't wait to see what happens between them!! Love your stories!! Update soon please!!!!
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