Post by Melimelo on Apr 19, 2007 12:43:17 GMT 10
This is an idea I had to change a scene a little.....
let me know what you think?
Abby stands outside his door...her hand is shaking as she reaches out to knock and her heart races at the thought of seeing him again ..it was the worst feeling.
Her quivering hand manages to make contact with the door and her feeble attempt to attract any attention would normally not be heard....but this is a hotel room and it's not that big..he would have heard.
The door opens slowly and his body leans against the door..his eyes acknowledge her presence but his expression does not change....his head hangs low as he opens the door wider and and waits for her to enter....she walks past him and he barely glances at her..he wonders why she is even here.
"You look terrible.....how is your head...?."
Luka shrugs coldly... he had stopped thinking about the mugger but he knew that's what she meant... he picks up a beer off the table and waves it at her.
"Want one..?"
Abby runs her hand through her hair..she collects her thoughts and then shakes her head.
'No I'm fine ..thanks....so you really think you should be having that ..you have a head injury ..."
Luka sighs and then drinks the last of the beer left in the bottle and casually tosses it in the bin...he looks at her and his eyes are red and he seems to be very conflicted.....she walks over closer to him and stands in front of him..he sits down and slowly pulls her in towards him..the beer had done nothing he still felt numb and now she was here....he needed something from her....something to make him feel alive again....he was sick of this awful hollow feeling and maybe she could do something.... something to stop it.
He pulls in her in towards him and their eyes lock...he feels nothing and then his lips touch hers and a warm feeling comes over him ...she closes her eyes and he pulls back her jacket..and then kisses her neck.
.....this is exactly what he needed.
Continue...?
let me know what you think?
Abby stands outside his door...her hand is shaking as she reaches out to knock and her heart races at the thought of seeing him again ..it was the worst feeling.
Her quivering hand manages to make contact with the door and her feeble attempt to attract any attention would normally not be heard....but this is a hotel room and it's not that big..he would have heard.
The door opens slowly and his body leans against the door..his eyes acknowledge her presence but his expression does not change....his head hangs low as he opens the door wider and and waits for her to enter....she walks past him and he barely glances at her..he wonders why she is even here.
"You look terrible.....how is your head...?."
Luka shrugs coldly... he had stopped thinking about the mugger but he knew that's what she meant... he picks up a beer off the table and waves it at her.
"Want one..?"
Abby runs her hand through her hair..she collects her thoughts and then shakes her head.
'No I'm fine ..thanks....so you really think you should be having that ..you have a head injury ..."
Luka sighs and then drinks the last of the beer left in the bottle and casually tosses it in the bin...he looks at her and his eyes are red and he seems to be very conflicted.....she walks over closer to him and stands in front of him..he sits down and slowly pulls her in towards him..the beer had done nothing he still felt numb and now she was here....he needed something from her....something to make him feel alive again....he was sick of this awful hollow feeling and maybe she could do something.... something to stop it.
He pulls in her in towards him and their eyes lock...he feels nothing and then his lips touch hers and a warm feeling comes over him ...she closes her eyes and he pulls back her jacket..and then kisses her neck.
.....this is exactly what he needed.
Continue...?