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Apr 20, 2007 8:21:29 GMT 10
Post by lubbylover1 on Apr 20, 2007 8:21:29 GMT 10
Great story
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Apr 21, 2007 3:39:07 GMT 10
Post by charlieluby on Apr 21, 2007 3:39:07 GMT 10
More! More more more more more more more more and did i mention MORE!
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Apr 21, 2007 5:06:44 GMT 10
Post by LuBByFaNatiC [ThAiSsa] on Apr 21, 2007 5:06:44 GMT 10
amazing update!!
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Apr 21, 2007 7:57:08 GMT 10
Post by *Natalie* on Apr 21, 2007 7:57:08 GMT 10
Great update There was a connection update soon natalie x
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Apr 22, 2007 8:03:54 GMT 10
Post by zelda on Apr 22, 2007 8:03:54 GMT 10
Melimelo, ( so right to keep this name! ) What's awesome, is that when reading your fic, the images of Abby 's and Luka's first night together were totally linked with your words. The mugger, the strong sexual attraction, the awkwardness of the day after....everything is so vivid in my mind! And your choice of words convey all these conflicting emotions, so very well. MERCI BEAUCOUP, my Melimelo!
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Apr 22, 2007 10:30:57 GMT 10
Post by Melimelo on Apr 22, 2007 10:30:57 GMT 10
It was a cool morning and Abby pulls her scarf up around her neck and then takes one long hard puff on her cigarette....she was almost at work and today was the first day she will have to face Luka since their encounter. The ambulance bay is already full and she takes one last puff before throwing the cigarette to the ground..the day had started. Luka casually looks up from the desk as Abby walks by...she glances at him and smiles awkwardly...she didn't need to say anything as it was clear from her eyes she seemed uncomfortable...he swallows hard and follows her into the lounge.
"Everything okay with you....?"
Abby hangs her coat up in her locker while she thinks about him standing there behind her....she wasn't sure what to say and wonders if he will mention the other night.
"Yeah ....I'm good ...and you.. how are you going...?"
Luka shuffles his feet and bites his lip.
"Yeah I'm okay...."
The small talk was getting even more awkard when they both talk at the same time..they laugh.
"You go first...."
Abby turns her head slightly and waits for him to answer.
"Abby ...I thought maybe you would like to go out again sometime..maybe tommorrow night...our first date really didn't go that well..."
Abby exhales..she didn't expect him to ask her out again so soon...she fumbles with her locker and tries to delay answering..she didn't want to scare him off..it was the first date she had really enjoyed since the divorce and even though it ended disasterously..she enjoyed the most part of it.
"I'm working tommorrow night..what about Friday night.."
Her voice was upbeat and sounded a little bit too enthusiastic..now she panicked that she seemed too keen..he might have just trying to be polite after the other night..maybe he didn't really want to go out at all...she turns back around confused.
Luka laughs and tries to hide his face from her...he shakes his head and puts his hand on her arm.
"I don't mind what night...it's okay we can go any night you want..."
She giggles to herself and watches as he slowly moves his hand away from her arm..he seemed genuine ....dark and broody but she felt safe with him....what happened the other night scared her...but she wasn't afraid of him and if she got to know him she figured that his mysteries would be revealed over time.. and if anyone understood that it was her....
Luka nods and puts his hands in his pockets.
"Okay Friday night it is...."
Abby nods in agreement...she knew the details would be sorted out later..it was time to go to work now and then it dawned on her..she would be working along side him all day
Both of them exchange one more knowing glance..realising that they had to go out there and be professional and any thoughts of the other night would have to be suppressed..his eyes survey hers and though no words are spoken the message is clear...they have a connection.
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Apr 22, 2007 10:40:30 GMT 10
Post by strausser on Apr 22, 2007 10:40:30 GMT 10
mel, i don't know why i didn't follow this fic since its first posted, but now i m addicted to it as well - how's shades of grey going btw?
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Apr 22, 2007 18:40:10 GMT 10
Post by luby4eva06 on Apr 22, 2007 18:40:10 GMT 10
i just read this & its really good. great update
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Apr 22, 2007 22:23:59 GMT 10
Post by rosiehartzenberg on Apr 22, 2007 22:23:59 GMT 10
this is really good i haven't read a fic about LubyI for aaaaaaaaaages and i'm getting addicted to this!
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Apr 23, 2007 2:45:46 GMT 10
Post by strizzy on Apr 23, 2007 2:45:46 GMT 10
Nice update!!!!!!
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Apr 23, 2007 2:55:10 GMT 10
Post by ERFanRach on Apr 23, 2007 2:55:10 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
Update Soon!!!!
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Apr 23, 2007 3:07:24 GMT 10
Post by Rach :) on Apr 23, 2007 3:07:24 GMT 10
wow i love this fic its very good update!!
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Apr 24, 2007 5:45:55 GMT 10
Post by *Natalie* on Apr 24, 2007 5:45:55 GMT 10
Great update natalie x
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Apr 24, 2007 12:03:35 GMT 10
Post by Melimelo on Apr 24, 2007 12:03:35 GMT 10
The space in the drug lockup suddenly seems smaller and as Abby tries to fit past Luka she finds herself brushing up against him instead.
"Sorry...I didn't mean that.."
Luka smiles back at her and raises his eyebrows as she picks up a bottle of pills...he watches her and as she taps her pen against her clipboard..he wonders if she is waiting for him to say something.
"So.. our date tonight....where should I pick you up from...?"
Abby pushes the pen behind her ear and spins around ...she wanted to see how enthusiatic he was and by the look of it he didn't seem too motivated...she tests him.
"Well you live in a hotel...maybe we should stay in and order room service."
Luka stands still and his face dioesn't change...he isn't sure if she is being funny or if she truly wants to stay in his room with him...he shifts his feet uncomfortably and searches the room for some clue as to what he would say next... suddenly a candy striper goes past the door and it gives him an idea.
"What if we go to your place and hire a bunch of movies and eat lots of popcorn and sweets....?"
Abby tilts her head back..this didn't sound like a date ..it sounded like a babysitting duty and she begins to pout a little...did she get it wrong is he not that interested after all...?
Luka moves up behind her and she shivers as his body touches her for a fleeting second as he tries to pass...he puts his hand on her shoulder and sighs.
"'Abby...I'm not really sure what to say...maybe we should just go out for a drink and see what happens...?"
Abby looks up into his big green eyes...she can feel his apprehension and it suddenly dawns on her that maybe he just wanted sex....maybe that's all he needed.
"Luka.....I'm going to get some really bad chinese takeout and go back to my place after work and chill out..if you want to drop by you are more than welcome...."
She scrawls down her address on a piece of paper and quickly hands it to him before she chickens out...he takes it from her and puts it in his pocket... if he wanted sex and only sex she didn't mind...he was hot and all he had to do was give her one of those killer glances ...and she was his..... all night but he made her feel something and even though she had just come out of a failed marriage..she found her self suddenly imagining things that she and Richard had talked about when they first fell in love and if this was just about sex then why was she feeling all this other stuff...?
Luka looks back over his shoulder and into the drug lockup and sees Abby still standing there..he makes a fist with his hand and bashes it into the side of his leg...he was angry with himself for messing up their date......Abby was the best thing to happen to him since Danielja died..... and yet he was pushing her away. Luka takes in a deep breath and turns on his heel..he feels a huge knot in his stomach and he stops for a minute as he closes his eyes and tries to visualise Danielja..he whispers the words Volim Te ...he opens his eyes and a new image is suddenly emblazed in front of him..it's Abby.
"Are you okay Luka....you had your eyes closed and were mumbling something in Croatian...."
Luka smiles back at her and sees her confused look suddenly vanish...he still had no idea of his affect on her.
"What time shall I come over....?"
Abby stares and then blinks....their date was back on.
"Um...7o'clock...I guess...."
Luka nods slowly and maintains eye contact until she leaves. Their date was definately back on.......
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Apr 24, 2007 12:42:13 GMT 10
Post by jacobsmommy on Apr 24, 2007 12:42:13 GMT 10
HEY MEL, I READ YOUR FIC FOR THE FIRST TIME AND I HAVE SOME WORDS TO SAY ABOUT IT: FANTASTIC WONDERFUL EXCELLENT GREAT JOB OUTSTANDING. FOOLED YOU DIDN'T I. LOL. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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