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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Sept 14, 2006 22:06:24 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Sept 14, 2006 22:14:51 GMT 10
great update!
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Post by steffi1986 on Sept 14, 2006 22:23:37 GMT 10
wow this is really cool, I totally can imagine that, recalling their lovestory please update soon
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Post by LoveLuka on Sept 15, 2006 0:13:59 GMT 10
hahaahah great chapter
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Post by strizzy on Sept 15, 2006 3:22:44 GMT 10
Really like it!
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Post by Maryna on Sept 15, 2006 5:21:20 GMT 10
awesome update!again soon!
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Post by *Natalie* on Sept 15, 2006 6:23:12 GMT 10
Great update! Really liking this natalie x
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Post by Rach :) on Sept 15, 2006 23:26:54 GMT 10
lol update
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Post by Melimelo on Sept 16, 2006 14:43:56 GMT 10
part 3
Luka pushes Adam's gigantic feet off the couch and waits for him to complain. "Dad I was comfortable...." Luka gives him a disapproving look and Ava jumps up and almost knocks the popcorn bowl over. "Okay you two quit it I want to hear more of the story.." Abby rolls her eyes. "Don't you want to watch old movies on TV or something .." They both go "NAh.." Luka takes a deep breath. "Okay....I will tell you what happens next...." Ava sits cross legged on the floor next to Adam and the popcorn bowl is now between them..Luka continues as she stuffs another mouthful into her mouth. "I started back on the ER roster and I arrived for my shift and who should be working at the desk when I walk in....yep you guessed it... your mother.....I smiled at her and said hello and I was genuinely pleased to see her and she stood their with her mouth wide open and says "What are you doing here..?" and I shrugged and kind of scarcastically said "Well I work here ..remember..?" Of course your mother got all flustered and made some excuse to leave and then I went to the lounge and got changed and when I came back out I got a fairly icy reception from some people and the day didn't seem to start off that well.." Adam laughs "Let me guess..you went looking for mum and you hit on her and the day got better.." Abby leans over and smacks him on the head. "It wasn't like that.." she sits with her arms crossed over her chest and continues. "I was in drug lock up looking for something and he walks in and pretends he was looking for something too.." Luka protests.."I was not in there looking for something..I was trying to collect my thoughts and take a break as everyone was a little edgy with me and I felt like I was stepping on eggshells all the time.. and you...you were hiding from me.." Abby puts her hand up . "I was not hiding...anyway you came over and talked to me..You didn't have to and you did...." Ava's eyes light up and for a minute Abby thinks she sees Luka in her ...she smiles and continues.. "Well he asked me how I was going with my ER rotation and I told him how much I was enjoying it and he questioned me on why I didn't like Psychiatry as he felt I had natural affinity to listen to peoples problems.." Luka puts his arm on her shoulder "I thanked her for helping me in my sessions that her listening to me and getting me to open up to her ...I was grateful that when I talked she really listened and I felt she really understood me....of course at that stage I had know idea that she had some personal experience to draw on you know with her own family and all....but she helped me and I thanked her." Adam pokes Luka in the leg. "So when did you ask her out...c'mon get to the good part " Luka looks at his son and knows that he wants some macho version of events that he could laugh at with his father..but in all honesty it was one of Luka's most vulnerable moments and he wasn't sure he could tell it without shedding a tear. Abby sighs "Okay I 'll tell you.....after weeks of uncomfortable moments and stolen glances ..we found ourselves in the lounge together getting ready to knock off from work and it was the week before christmas and I kinda felt miserable that I was going to be working the holidays and not get a chance to fly home to see my family and then it dawned on me ..your father was spending his christmas working too and all his family were miles away in Croatia and I suddenly noticed how sad he looked and as he was about to leave ..I kept trying to think of something to say that would be witty and maybe cheer him up and then he turns back and stands there looking at me and tries to find his own words to say...I mean he was literally speechless and It suddenly became really awkward and I felt like his only friend in the world and then he asked me.." Adam and Ava sit up and lean forward as Abby begins to tell them what happens next...but Luka interrupts her and talks instead. "I asked her out for a drink....It took all my courage to her ask her out....I had not been out with another woman since my first wife died and I didn't know if I was ready or if I would be good company and hell I didn't even know if she would say yes...but I had to take a chance because she was the one person the only person that I felt close to at that moment and to be alone on christmas ...I didn't want that at all....." Luka and Abby take a moment to look at each other and Abby wipes a small tear from her eyes and Luka laughs. 'I thought I was gonna be the one that cried..." Adam screws his face.."Oh don't go getting all mushy you two..maybe we better stop and order some pizzas or something because all this crying is gonna make me hungry.." Ava stands up "Everything makes you hungry.." Luka kisses Abby again and this time she really really responds and they are passionately kissing when Adam pushes a pizza brochures in front of them. "Can you two lock lips after you order the pizzas..?" Luka smacks him over the head with the brochures. "I can't wait until you start dating and I catch you kissing a girl ...I am gonna make so much fun of you .." Luka and Adam continue to tease each other as they order the pizzas and Ava sits next to her mother on the couch. "So did Daddy try to kiss you on your first date...?" Abby smiles and looks across at Luka...he still was as handsome as that first day she met him. "Oh yeah sweetie ...eventually he kissed me .." The girls laugh as the boys take their seats and Adam looks at his mother. "So ..what did I miss..?"
To be continued.....
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Post by Andy on Sept 16, 2006 15:05:03 GMT 10
Loved the update! I seem to have missed update number two! Well, even better I got to read both together! I want to read more now!
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Post by Maryna on Sept 16, 2006 19:40:40 GMT 10
awesome update!
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Post by LoveLuka on Sept 16, 2006 20:15:48 GMT 10
haha great can't wait for an update
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Sept 16, 2006 21:38:01 GMT 10
Lovely!
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Post by jadestar on Sept 16, 2006 23:19:45 GMT 10
so sweet - *sigh*
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Post by steffi1986 on Sept 17, 2006 1:03:05 GMT 10
OMG yeah this is really sweet please update soon
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