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Post by rorygilmore on Dec 13, 2006 14:39:12 GMT 10
Ahhhh!!!!!! That was AMAZING dana, LOVE IT!!!  (...and love mistletoe...especially when Luka holds it over my head   Love all your one shot fics; they're all so nice!  |
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Post by Real Dream on Dec 13, 2006 14:40:02 GMT 10
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Post by Melimelo on Dec 13, 2006 19:04:24 GMT 10
Loved it Maggie  sounds like the mistletoe has had a good workout! |
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Post by charlieluby on Dec 13, 2006 19:15:26 GMT 10
Awww! I love them! I think we are going to have some great luby one-shots here!  x |
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Post by zelda on Dec 14, 2006 5:18:48 GMT 10
CONGRATULATIONS TO YOU 3, Melinda, Larue, and Maggie!!! Your stories are all different, but they have something in common: it's the BEGINNING of something special between Luka and Abby. That's what made them so exciting! Anything can happen, but it must be Christmas spirit  : they are all full of dreams and hope! THANK YOU SO MUCH!  |
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Post by luby2534 on Dec 14, 2006 5:49:28 GMT 10
I really love these one shots. Great work guys !
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Post by strizzy on Dec 14, 2006 6:23:17 GMT 10
Very nice! Really like all three!
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Post by *Natalie* on Dec 14, 2006 6:44:10 GMT 10
Great one shot Maggie Loving these natalie x |
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Post by ~Bel Vezer~ on Dec 14, 2006 9:01:01 GMT 10
These are very interesting one shots.
I'm curious Maggie, as fanfic mod, if you've ever considered incorporating fanfic competitions here on TDWD. It seems like it could be very enjoyable, especially since there's such a big break between eps.
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Post by maggie on Dec 14, 2006 9:28:48 GMT 10
These are very interesting one shots. I'm curious Maggie, as fanfic mod, if you've ever considered incorporating fanfic competitions here on TDWD. It seems like it could be very enjoyable, especially since there's such a big break between eps. hmm...i actually haven't thought about it, but it's a good suggestion. i'll get on top of that. |
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 15, 2006 6:10:10 GMT 10
wow this was really cute too |
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Post by Melimelo on Dec 16, 2006 9:56:17 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]The christmas present[/glow]
Abby sits by the christmas tree and watches as the lights blink slowly and then faster.
"I think you need some new lights Luka..these ones are gonna short out soon ..."
Abby frowns and wonders why Luka doesn't reply..her stomach rumbles and the smell of the food is driving her crazy.
"Luka ..what are you doing.....I'm starving when do we eat.."
Still no reply..the silence is annoying and Abby gets up to investigate...
"Luka where are you....I agreed to spend the holidays with you and so far things have been great ..but if you don't serve dinner shortly ..I may have to start without you..."
The bathroom door opens and a subdued Luka stands in the door way and crosses his arms over his chest..
"Were you going to tell me .....?"
Abby bites her lip and stands still
"Tell you what ...?"
Luka nods towards the bathroom.
"I found a pregnancy test in the bathroom....positive"
Abby blushes and her face really starts to burn and she turns on her heel and heads back to the lounge .
"Oh my god " she thinks ..he knows and he doesn't seem happy.
Luka follows her back to the lounge.
"Abby we need to talk about this......don't run away from me "
Abby takes a deep breath and sighs .
"Look I just found out yesterday and I am as shocked as you are believe me ..I wasn't expecting this at all... "
Luka stands in front of her and puts his hand on her shoulder.
"What are you going to do about it.....I mean I know it's your decision..but I want to know...?"
Abby searched his eyes for a minute....as shocked as she was
at finding out she was pregnant..she thought Luka would be somewhat happier than he seemed ...
"I don't know Luka...I'm thirty seven years old and if it's not now ..I might be never...."
Luka began to smile a little..."So you're not thinking about a temination...?"Abby shook her head.."No not really...."
Luka pulls her into an embrace "Oh thank god..I thought that the reason you didn't tell me was because you didn't want to keep it..."
The relief in Luka's voice was all she needed to hear..Abby bends down to the christmas tree and picks up Luka's present.
"Merry Christmas....."
She hands the gift to Luka and he slowly unwraps it the whole time trying no to take his eyes off her.
"Oh my god..." he holds up a tiny pair of baby booties.
"You were going to tell me..."
Abby laughs
"Yeah I thought it would make a nice Christmas present"
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Post by ERFanRach on Dec 16, 2006 10:01:31 GMT 10
Great Story!!!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Dec 17, 2006 1:42:41 GMT 10
Great story natalie x |
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Post by zelda on Dec 18, 2006 8:48:33 GMT 10
OMG, Melinda, What a beautiful story! You played beautifully and so wittingly with our poor little nerves! I love your style, your humour, and this perfect ending! Enjoyed every word of this one shot fics! Maybe, because you and me have kids, I thought that Abby behaved like a maestro! Pretending... smiling mysteriously...teasing him.... and .... the tiny gift!!! Give you a new karma immediately! |
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(...and love mistletoe...especially when Luka holds it over my head 
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: they are all full of dreams and hope! 
