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Post by daniella on Oct 28, 2008 8:27:44 GMT 10
Hey... this is the last update from part 1... Don't forget: the meeting of Abby and Luka... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 26: Talking... County Hospital, Chicago A week later: 10:13 AM Abby was going well... a week later, she was in a normal room and her heart was beating strongly... no signal of weakness or irregular beating... her cuts were healing well too... Now, Dra. Corday was evaluating her chart. Dr. Dubenko was on the night shift, so he passed her Abby's case... 'Well, Abby...' she said. 'Everything is fine and I don't see the need to keep you here... I'm going to discharge you... ' 'I can't wait to go home...' Abby said. 'I miss my son so much...' ‘You can see him, today...' Elizabeth said, smiling. 'You were luck...' 'I know...' Abby said. 'You'll have a big time off ahead, so...' Elizabeth said. 'Just make it the best with your kid...’ 'I will...' said Abby, nodding... X ~ X ~ X Four hours later: Susan was pushing Abby's wheelchair... when they entered the waiting room, Eric, Maggie and Andrew were waiting for them... 'Abby, just think about it...' said Susan. 'It's a great opportunity...' 'I will, Sus...' said Abby as Andrew ran to her. 'Mommy.. ' he said. 'Hey, kiddo...' she said. 'Be careful... mommy is still sick...' 'We're going home now?' he asked and she nodded. 'Yes, we are...' she said, kissing his head. 'Ok...' he said. X ~ X ~ X It was dinner time... Maggie was in the kitchen as Andrew was playing video – game with Eric, in the living room... Abby entered in the kitchen slowly and sat at the table. Maggie looked at her. 'You should be in bed, resting...' her mother said. 'I'm tired of staying in bed...' Abby said. 'Did you take your medicines?' Maggie asked again. Abby looked away... now, it was her mother who asked about the medicines, not her... now she knew what her mother and Eric passed when she say they had to take their medicines... 'Yes, mother...' she said. She would be taking immunosuppressive drugs for the rest of her life now. Maggie noticed the irritation in her daughter's voice and didn't say anything else. 'Mom...' said Abby, after a while. ‘Remember that Susan was talking to me when we entered the waiting room, in the hospital?' Maggie looked at her daughter... 'She offered me a job in Los Angeles on the hospital she will be in charge for...' Abby completed. 'Well, Abby, this is great...' said Maggie. 'But you don't need to decide it now...' 'It would be a re – start...' Abby said. 'I know, but now it's not the time...' Maggie said, putting a salad on the table. ‘Let's eat... Andrew, Eric...' XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by suzanne on Oct 28, 2008 8:37:22 GMT 10
Great way to end part one Dani!! Abby going home to her family!! Very nice!! Looking forward to the next part,. Don't leave us waiting to long!!
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Post by baboune51 on Oct 28, 2008 19:48:09 GMT 10
yeah , Abby is return at her !!!
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Post by daniella on Oct 31, 2008 17:13:59 GMT 10
Hey... here is the second part... enjoy! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 27: A new place.... Almost a year and half latter: Abby finally moved to Los Angeles... she was fully recovered from her wounds and was cleared to work... Susan was still in the hospital, so since she was one of the bosses, she could find a job for Abby on the ER... Susan find too an apartment for her friend and her son... it was near in front of her own... Now, they were finishing moving Abby's stuff to the new apartment... This is the last one…' said Susan, putting the box on the table. 'What's inside?' Abby asked, as she unpacked a few plates 'More kitchen stuff...' said Susan. Abby nodded. The trip was tiresome, but easy... after she sold her apartment in Chicago, Andrew and her staid at Maggie's for three days , so her furniture could arrive in LA... The new apartment was big enough for her and Andrew... three bedrooms and bath, a big kitchen, dinning room and a big living room... Abby was able to buy it with the insurance money she received... she bought a car too... Chuck appeared from one of the bedrooms... 'The beds are ready...' he said. 'Great...' said Susan. 'We can finish here and go eat pizza... what do you say?' ' Yeah...' said Andrew and Cosmo, from the living room where they were watching a movie on TV... X ~ X ~ X Kovac's house... Same time: Luka sighed after stopping the car in front of the house... he didn't entered on the garage, because they would go out... it was Jasna birthday... he couldn't believe his little girl was eleven years old... He and the kids got out of the car and entered the house... after his wife died, their lives changed... the children moved from their school... they moved to this new home too... The house was bigger than the other and less expansive... well, define expansive for a five bedroom and four bathrooms house, with a big pool and a garden... Jasna and Marko ran upstairs... as the older house, each one had a room... Luka bought too two Golden Retrievers, King and Queen, so the children didn't felt alone... He was still on the team... today, he had a meeting with his coach to make arrangements for his return 'Marko? Jasna?' he called them from the kitchen... 'In my room...’ shouted Marko. He sighed and went to the fridge... picking up a beer, he opened it and drank it... he didn't even know why he bought it, he didn't drink... but today it was what he needed.... The two dogs ran into the kitchen and barked, calling his attention... after a few seconds, Jasna appeared on the door... Luka looked at her... 'Jasna, what did I say about having the dogs in your bedroom?' he asked. 'Sorry, Tata...' she said. 'Can I ask something?' 'Sure, princess...' Luka said. 'Can we go to the pizza house?' she asked. 'We can go any place you want, princess...' Luka said. 'Remember, it's your birthday...' XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Oct 31, 2008 20:59:24 GMT 10
I love it Can't wait for next update
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Post by suzanne on Oct 31, 2008 21:14:12 GMT 10
Really good update!! Can't wait to see what happens at the pizza house!! Update soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on Oct 31, 2008 22:25:10 GMT 10
the meeting has the pizzeria !
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Post by daniella on Nov 1, 2008 21:36:45 GMT 10
Thanks, girls... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 28: Happy Birthday... La Pizza House Long Beach, California 06:36 PM Susan and Chuck took Abby and Andrew to a place near their home... the kids were having fun, but Abby wasn't she wasn't hungry and barely ate the piece that was on her plate... Susan looked at her friend. ‘Abby, are you ok?' she asked. 'Yeah, I'm just...' Abby said, looking at her. 'Not hungry...' 'Really?' asked Susan again. ' t doesn't has to do with happened earlier, does it?’ No..., thought Abby. She denied... Earlier, when they were coming inside, they arrived at the same time of a man and his kids...Susan and Chuck ran after the kids and when the door was about to close, the man opened it again to her... the looked at each other and smiled... Abby was a little ashamed, but felt alive for the first time after the surgery... 'Well, since the surgery, I'm feeling this way...' Abby said. 'I don't think I will be able to be near somebody again...' By somebody, she meant a man... 'The scar is dismissing...' Susan said. 'It's horrible...' Abby said. 'I'm grateful this heart saved me, but...' 'You don't need to tell what happened...' pondered Susan. 'Yeah, right...' said Abby, sarcastic. 'Abby, independent of what had happened to you, you are...' Susan said, putting her hand over Abby's. 'What?' asked Abby. 'An attractive and beautiful woman...' said Susan. X ~ X ~ X In the other side of the restaurant, Luka tried to forget what had happened earlier, but this was the first time, since Danijela had died, that he really felt another woman attractive... 'Tata, can we leave?' asked Marko. Jasna and he ate several pieces of pizzas, so they were satisfied and wanted to go home... 'Let’s just wait a little...' he said, looking at a waiter and making a sing for him. 'I have a surprise for Jasna...' Someone turned the lights off and all of the attendants started to sing happy birthday... someone brought a cake from the kitchen... Some customers started to sing, some just cheered... Jasna stayed quiet, but was happy... she didn't expected this... A young man put the cake in front of her... it had a happy Birthday written on it and a 11 year old candle. 'Make a wish, Jasna...' said Marko. Jasna looked at her father. 'Can I ask for anything?' she asked. 'Sure, princess...' he said. She closed her eyes and silently, made a wish... At the same time, Luka looked at the woman he met earlier in the other part of the restaurant... she was very beautiful, even if she was sad... he just hopped he could meet her again... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by suzanne on Nov 1, 2008 23:33:09 GMT 10
Loved it!! Especially how you show it from both sides of the story!! Update soon!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Nov 2, 2008 3:44:04 GMT 10
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Post by baboune51 on Nov 2, 2008 18:37:06 GMT 10
beautiful surprise for Jasna , but Abby is so sad
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Post by lylee on Nov 5, 2008 6:31:29 GMT 10
It's interesting to express Abby's uneasiness about her surgery. I had several updates to read, and I was sad when I saw it was the last one!
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Post by daniella on Nov 5, 2008 9:31:26 GMT 10
Thanks... glad you're liking it... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 29: Little League Soccer Game... Abby's Lockhart Apartment Los Angeles, California Saturday, 10:17 AM When Abby woke up, she could hear noises from the TV and knew right away that Andrew was up. This past week was good, even if they're still adjusting to the new city... Andrew was on the same class as Cosmo... he was almost a year younger than his colleagues, but after a few tests, the principal let him on the second grade... Monday would be his first day at school... But, today, they would go with Cosmo to his little league soccer game... Susan was at work, so she would have to take them... if Andrew liked it, she would put him on a team... if not, well... Sighing, she got up from the bed and walked slowly to the living room... Andrew was already eating some cereal while watching TV... 'Good morning, sunshine...' Abby said, kissing him on the top of his head. Andrew turned to his mother. 'It's almost ten o' clock... the game is at eleven, mom' he said. 'I'm going to change, so we can go, ok?' she said. 'Clean this mess after...' Andrew looked at the table... he had spilled some milk from the bow... 'Ok...' he said looking at his mother... X ~ X ~ X Shoreline Park, Long Beach Los Angeles, California 10:54 AM When they arrived, the kids were already preparing themselves... Cosmo left his bag with Abby and ran to the field... Abby and Andrew walked to the bleacher mounted for it... 'Is this seat taken?' Abby asked a woman. 'No...' said the woman. 'Thank you...' They sat down... Abby was about to ask the woman something when her eyes saw something... it was the same man who had opened the door for her in that pizzeria... It was just a coincidence, wasn't it?, she thought. X ~ X ~ X Luka sighed as he watched the team get ready... this was one of the moments he passed with his kids... with the team in the middle of a championship run, it was difficult, but he tried... Jasna was at his side, eating snacks... Luka picked up some for him... 'Is this place good?' he asked before they sat down. 'Da, tata...' (Yes, dad...) said Jasna. 'When it's going to start?' 'It's about to start, honey...' he said, watching the coach call all the boys to the side of the field, where their place were, so he could pass the some instructions... 'Go, Marko...' Jasna said and he smiled... Since his wife died, almost one year and half before, Jasna and Marko became really close... they still are... From nowhere, he resolved to look at his left side... he saw the same woman, from the restaurant... she was with a kid... maybe her son... this meant she was married... but he didn't remember seeing a ring on her finger... Should I speak with her after the game? he thought. Maybe if... oh, the game is starting...XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by suzanne on Nov 5, 2008 10:11:26 GMT 10
Loved it!! Can't wait until they actually meet properly for the first time!! Update soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on Nov 5, 2008 21:13:27 GMT 10
yes , Luka speak with her !!!
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