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Post by ERFanRach on Jul 26, 2007 0:59:10 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
Update Soon!!!!
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Post by lubbylover1 on Jul 26, 2007 2:00:11 GMT 10
Great updates Come back soon...
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jehkovac
Marquise of Luby
Jessica Kovac Andrade de Oliveira
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Post by jehkovac on Jul 26, 2007 4:41:52 GMT 10
In this scene I almost jump in the TV and punch Abby and Luka...I was like "Friend?? They are kidding right?" ..... hauhauahauhauhauahu I love your update!! I hope you update it soon!!
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jul 26, 2007 5:35:54 GMT 10
Great update
Update soon
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Post by daniella on Jul 26, 2007 5:53:35 GMT 10
Glad you're liking... Now, the update... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 5: Neela's marriage or I do 1 Abby: I was up till late last night, thinking about me and Luka... what did we do wrong ? Why I couldn't say the truth to him ? I still love him... I got up early this morning and went to work... I had a feel minutes before work, so I went to the jumbo mall and got a coffee for me... it wasn't the best coffee, but it would make me feel better to start the day... When I was entering the ER, I saw Neela and Gallant together... did he came back yesterday ? Apparently yes... Two hours into my shift and I had a big surprise... Neela asked me to be her made of honnor... she was going to marry Gallant, today... and surprisingly I say yes... Now, I'm back at home looking inside my closet... what I am going to wear ? Not a dress, I decided... actually, I hadn't had a dress in a few years... I had one, baby rose, of a marriage where I was maid of honnor... but not today... I looked at the clock and saw that I had just a few minutes or I was going to be late... so I choose a black tailer... Almost forty – five minutes, I am back at the hospital... I see Luka breafilly... he said earlier that he couldn't make to the ceremony, but I hoped that he could make it to the reception... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by Rach :) on Jul 26, 2007 6:45:23 GMT 10
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jehkovac
Marquise of Luby
Jessica Kovac Andrade de Oliveira
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Post by jehkovac on Jul 26, 2007 9:10:55 GMT 10
Me too...I hope he make it to the reception...hehe continue
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jujuba
Countess of Luby
"Forget Superman, I'll take Mark Greene."
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Post by jujuba on Jul 26, 2007 10:24:52 GMT 10
Yeay! I wanna see Luka in the reception! *_*
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Post by daniella on Jul 26, 2007 12:54:06 GMT 10
I was going to update just tomorrow, but I wanted to give a little present to you, so... here it is... hope you like... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 6: The new ER Chief or I do 2 Luka: My shift finished half an hour ago, but Weaver wanted to see me... that is why I am still on the hospital... I walked towards the counter and see Clemente sitting there... I have to talk to him and tell him the news... I approach and we talked for some minutes... then I tell him that Weaver named me the new chief of the ER... and he says that he took off his name, but i knew he was lying... I didn't want to say anything, so I feign surprise... then I said good bye for everyone and exit the ER... I wanted to celebrate, so I resolved to stop by at Neela and Gallant's reception...Abby would be there, so... The driver to the bar is quick at this time of the night, just ten minutes... when I enter it, I see people are happy and having fun... I walked towards the bar and ask for a beer... I sat on a stool and looked around... I spotted Abby and when she smiled at me, I scene to her, smiling a little... She came to the bar and sat beside me... we talked for a while and I told her that I was the new Chief of the ER... As we looked at Gallant and Neela, we toast for discretion, prosperity and maturity... well, not that, but close... Abby was tired and she need some air... so I took her home... When we left, I opened the door to her and she smiled at me... I smiled back, noticing how beautiful she was... Gos, I just wanted to have another chance with her... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by lockhart on Jul 26, 2007 15:28:54 GMT 10
AWWWWWWWWW thanks for the nice present but I want more!!!! lol
update as fast as possible, pleaseee
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Post by Rach :) on Jul 26, 2007 19:22:19 GMT 10
great update and you have to do it again because i love the next bit!!
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Post by ERFanRach on Jul 27, 2007 0:27:04 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
Update Soon!!!!
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Post by LuBByFaNatiC [ThAiSsa] on Jul 27, 2007 2:07:29 GMT 10
Daniiiii come back here now!! hehehe Great update!! update ASAP!!!!!
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jujuba
Countess of Luby
"Forget Superman, I'll take Mark Greene."
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Post by jujuba on Jul 27, 2007 9:12:39 GMT 10
Dani! We want the next chapter right now! Hahahaha
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Post by daniella on Jul 27, 2007 14:03:19 GMT 10
Hey, another present....
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Chapter 7: A new chance
Abby:
Luka stopped his car in front of my house... there's a music on the radio and he starts singing... we talked a little... then, I couldn't resist... we couldn't resist... we kissed hungrily and make out in the car...
Before things starts to get out of control, I stopped and ask, no... demand him to get inside... he smiled and nodded...
I think that we never ran so fast... in five minutes, we got from his car to my apartment in less then three minutes... when I closed the door, Luka turned me and kissed me until I was against the door... our kiss was hugry... I never notice he started to take of my shirt, but when I felt his hands near my breasts, I stop the kiss and looking at him on the eye, I remove my shirt... I kissed him again and he hugged me, taking me on his arms... I put my arms around his neck and we walked to the bedroom...
We took of our clothes and fell in bed, never stopping our kiss.. he turned me around and I looked at him....
' Should we keep doing this ? ' I asked.
' We should... ' he said kissing me again...
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Luka:
I laid on my back, breathing hard... it was amazing... I looked at Abby... she was with her eyes closed, taking some deep breaths...
' Are you ok ? ' I ask her.
She smiles and turns her head to me...
' More than fine... ' she says.
I smile and look at the ceiling for a few seconds...
' Where do we go from here, Luka ? ' she asks me...
I look at her... she has turned on her side and was looking at me...
' I want us to try again... ' I say, passing a hand on her face...
She smiles... ' You know what happened before... ' she insisted...
I looked at her and turned, putting an arm on the bed, so I could be on the same level as she was...
' I'm not the same person I was before, Abby... I changed... and you changed too... ' I say. ' Let's try again... '
' Do you think it's going to work ? ' she asks...
' I do...' I say, finally, kissing her again and going to another round... she smiles against my mouth as she put her arms around my neck again...
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Dani
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