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Post by <3 Luby II 2 <3 on Dec 10, 2006 6:37:43 GMT 10
Nice!!!
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Post by jadestar on Dec 10, 2006 9:33:41 GMT 10
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Post by daniella on Dec 10, 2006 21:39:20 GMT 10
I will... doing the next chapter of this story now... Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 10, 2006 22:00:44 GMT 10
YAY I can´t wait to read that
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 10, 2006 23:08:43 GMT 10
YAY I can´t wait to read that yeah me too
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Post by daniella on Dec 11, 2006 0:56:08 GMT 10
Girls, I'm going to fix some facts on thin storry... the name will change ( so now i can be doing this fan fic bigger...) as Joe's age... Luka and Abbys age will be the same... and the plot will be the same too...
Sorry...
Dani
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Post by daniella on Dec 11, 2006 2:58:02 GMT 10
The second part... hope I'm not too romantic to be melodramatic... trying to be on character...
It's PG- 13...
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Part 2: The proposal
When Abby and Luka went downstairs, Neela was sitting on the cough, with Joe in her arms. Abby smiled when she saw that Joe was awake. Joe looked at her and smiled, shaking his legs around, making sounds like " mama '". Neela standed up and Abby walked to them, picking up her baby. Luka walked to them and passed a hand on Joe's head. The baby looked at him and smiled. Luka smiled too and kissed him on the head. Neela smiled at them.
' Thank you for doing this for us, Neela... ' said Abby.
' You deserve this time by yourselves...' Neela said, picking up her purse.
Neela fished it for a few seconds and stopped when she found what she was looking for. She returned to Abby and gave her a little present. Luka picked up Joe from Abby's arms, so she could open the present and thank Neela.
Abby opened the package and saw a beautiful gold Indian bracelet. Abby showed it to Luka.
' Thank you Neela... ' Abby said, hugging her friend. ' My mother brought it from Calcuta... Neela said.
' It's really beautiful... ' Abby said, putting it on.
Luka didn't want to ruin the moment, but they were late.
' Abby, we have to go... ' he said, looking at Joe, that was with his little hand in his mouth.
' Okay... ' she said.
Luka gave Joe back to to Neela. Joe started to whimper, but Luka talked in Croatian with him. Joe appears to understand what Luka was seeing and stopped. Abby smiled and Kissed her child. Luka nodded to Neela.
' Don't worry... ' she whispered. ' I'll be here all night... '
Luka nodded and followed Abby towards the door. When they were outside, Abby asked:
' Where are we going ?
' It's a surpise... ' he said, putting a hand in the small of her back.
Abby sighed. It was no use to try to make he says something.
' Okay... ' she said.
Luka smiled a little. He knew she would try anything to know. He just hoped she liked the surprise... ----------
It was almost eleven o'clock when Luka and Abby exit the little Italian restaurant. It has stopped snowing and they were walking outside. Luka had convinced Abby to go to the park with him, because he didn't want to go home, not just yet.
Abby looked at luka. something was bothering him. He looked nervous.
' Luka, are you all right ? ' she asked.
' Yeah... ' he said. ' Why ? '
' You seams to be nervous... ' she said.
' I'm fine, Abby.... really... ' he said, even knowing that he was scared to death about this present... ----------
They were walking calmly on the park, hugging each other, because of the winter. Abby had her head on Luka's shoulder.
'It's so beautiful in here on the winter... ' Abby said.
' Yeah...' Luka said, looking around the snowed park.
They staid in silence for a few moments, just being with each other was enough
' Thank you for today, Luka... ' Abby said, looking at him. ' For your reassurance... for the diner and the walk... '
'Hey, it isn't over yet... ' said Luka. ' I still have one more surprise for you... '
Abby raised an eyebrow.
' Come on... ' he said, taking her arm, gently.
They walked for a few minutes, until the reached an area free of woods. Abby looked at her surprise and gasped. It was a balloon and was ready for them. There was a man waiting for them.
' Do you like it ? ' Luka asked, looking at her.
Abby didn't say anything, but nodded. Luka smiled, relieved. Abby looked at him, not helping but being in love with this man more and more.
' Come... ' he said, picking her hand in his again.
The man walked towards them.
' Mr. Kovac ? 'he asked and Luka nodded.
The man walked to the balloon and open the basked. Luka and Abby went inside.
' You know how to do it ? the man said, closing the basket door. Luka shook his head. ' You need to open this to arise the air a little and the balloon will start to go up... to go down, just do the process again, but this time on reverse... '
Luka nodded. He did what the man said the the balloon start to go up. He smiled when Abby closed her eyes and started to pick the basked with her hands.
After a few minutes, Luka stopped. The balloon was high enough. He looked at the froze lake and saw that everything was ready. So he walked behind Abby and hugged her.
' Are you okay ? 'he asked,
'Yeah... ' Abby said. ' I was never in a balloon before... it's amazing... tough very cold... '
' Can you look down ? he asked.
Abby tried but closed her eyes. She shook her head.
' Well, this way is the lake... want to try again ? '
Abby made what Luka said. It was his present, so she would see the best of it.
She glanced at the froze lake and stopped breathing. She coundn't believe, but in the ice was written: " Abby, marry me " , made with petals of red roses.
Abby turned her head and saw Luka looking at her. On his hand was a little box, open and inside the most beautiful ring she ever saw.
' I don't know what to say... ' she said frankly. She was caught of guard.
' Just say yes... ' Luka said. ' Don't need to be now... you know that I will wait for you the rest of my life till you're ready to marry again, but Abby... I love you... '
Abby was speechless for the second time that day. She didn't know what to say. She didn't want to break his heart, but she did want to marry him... someday anyway.
Luka sighed when she didn't said anything. He knew he had rushed her again.
He was about to put the box in his pocket again, when her hand stopped him. Luka looked at her.
' It was the most beautiful, sweetest and sincere proposal that I have ever recieved... ' she said. ' With Richard, it was a simple proposal and with... your first was a little... '
' Yes, I know... ' he said. ' It was too soon the first time... '
Abby nodded, but this was.
' Abby, I don't want to rush you if you not ready... ' Luka said. 'I just... '
He looked at his feet.
'Yes... ' she whispered.
' What ? ' he asked, looking back at her..
'I said, yes... I'll marry you... ' she said, smiling.
Luka smiled too, and picking up the ring, put on her finger. After, they hugged each other and kissed....
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Dani
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Post by hollygirl on Dec 11, 2006 3:20:27 GMT 10
awww! Luka is such a sweetie! I loved it! update soon!
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 11, 2006 3:36:06 GMT 10
Loved this update!! Luka is so sweet
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Post by daniella on Dec 11, 2006 3:42:45 GMT 10
Yeah, he really is... now, i can say that this story will be longer than A long day... it just needed a few changes... there will the others characters of ER, but Luka and Abby will be the principals here... as always... Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 11, 2006 3:53:58 GMT 10
YAAAY Now I´m happy!
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Post by *Natalie* on Dec 11, 2006 4:41:08 GMT 10
What an amazing update So glad she said yes natalie x
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Post by ERFanRach on Dec 11, 2006 4:54:10 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by strizzy on Dec 11, 2006 7:06:12 GMT 10
Brilliant update!!!
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Post by josefine on Dec 11, 2006 8:50:39 GMT 10
Great update!!!
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