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Post by ERFanRach on Dec 16, 2006 20:19:05 GMT 10
Update Soon!!!
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Post by daniella on Dec 16, 2006 20:58:40 GMT 10
The next part:
Warning: spoilers ahead !!! [glow=red,2,300][/glow]
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Part 7: Arriving
After this incident, the flight was tranquil. Joe woke up, but staied quiet the rest of the flight. Abby could feed him with some baby food and things got better. The flight attendents were nice, always asking them if they need anything. Once Abby need to change Joe's diaper. Now, she as alone with Joe, because Luka was in the bathroom.
Once Luka came back, she looked at him. he was holding his left hand, the one that Ames broke and the one that he hit the man with.
' Does your hand hurt ? ' she asked.
' Just a little... ' he said.
' Let me see... ' said Abby, taking his hand on hers, seeing that his hand was bruised. ' Does it hurt when I do this ? ' she asked again.
Luka grimaced a little.
' Yeah, but it's not a big deal... ' he said. ' Since i can move my fingers, we know that isn't broken or something... '
' Don't want to put some protection ? ' she asked, still holding his hand.
' Nah... ' he said, smiling a little.
' If you need I have some Tylenol in Joe's bag... ' Abby said, resting her head on the head rest of the seat.
Luka saw that she was exausted.
' Why don't you try and get some sleep ? he asked. ' You are exausted... '
Abby smied.
' Thanks, but no... ' she said. ' I don't know if I can sleep after that... '
Luka nodded and turned back to look at the seat in front of him.
' Yeah, me too... ' he said.
' Besides, we have a lot of time to do that... and others things too... ' she said.
Luka looked at her. She was smiling maliciously.
' I don't know if i say this two often, but I love you, Luka... ' she said.
' In the begging both of us didn't said it enough, but today, yes... ' he said. ' I love you too, Abby... '
Abby kissed him then, but stopped when she heard a little laugh. They looked at Joe. he was wake and was laugh at them form his car seat. Abby tickled him more and Joe laughed again. Luka smiled at the scene, they were one happy family... ----------
It was late in the night when they arrived in Cancun. Besides passing the customs, they needed to do some statement to the police about the incident in the plane, because that man put charges against Luka. The police archieved the case when another passengers staied in Luka's side.
Now Abby was pushing the cart and Luka had Joe sitting in his shoulders. They just want to go at the hotel and fall in the bed.
' Mr. and Ms. Kovac ? called a man, nearing them.
Luka and Abby stopped.
' Yes ? said luka.
' My name is Daniel Moore and I'm a friend of John Carter... ' he said showing his hand. ' John said you would be arriving today at night... '
Luka shook his hand while the other holded Joe.
' This is my fianceé Abby and this is our son, Joe... ' said Luka.
Daniel shook Abby's hand and smiled at Joe. Joe was corious about him, but continued sucking his pacifier.
' I have a car waiting outside... ' Daniel said. ' Here, let me take this... '
' It's okay, really... ' said Abby.
Daniel insisted and Abby let him take the cart. The walked outside and a black Mercedes was in front of them. The driver opened the door for them, while Daniel put their bags in the luggage compartment.
Abby entered the car, followed by Luka and Joe. ----------
On the way, they passed hotels and restaurants and more hotels. Daniel was showing them everything. After a few miles form the airport, they arrived at their hotel. Abby took Luka's hand when she saw the entrance of the hotel.
' Wow... ' she whispered.
The doorman opened the glasses door for them. Inside was even more beautiful.
' Good evening... ' said the doorman.
' This is Charles... ' said Daniel. ' This way... '
Luka and Abby followed Daniel to the elevator and pushed the buttom.
' So how long do you know Carter ? ' asked Luka while they were waiting.
' I know him for over two years... ' Daniel said. He looked at Abby. Joe was almost asleep in his mother's shoulder. ' He has an apartmente here... '
Luka and Abby looked at each other. Carter didn't mentioned that...
The elevator arrived and they stepped in. Daniel pushed the button to the 8th floor.
' Look, Daniel... i don't know what Carter said to you, but we don't... ' said Luka after a while. He was inconfortable.
' It's okay... really... ' said Daniel. ' He said you are good friends of Susan and he and asked me to give anything you want... '
Abby was incofortable too, but didn't say anything.
The elevator arrived and they stepped out. They followed Daniel in the corridor towards their room.
' Here... ' said Daniel. ' Number 86...
He opned the door and they stepped inside. The suite was gorgeous.There was a small kitchen with micro - wave and a fridge, counter with four seats, a glass table with fruits and champagnhe with two vessels, a small living room with a plasma TV, video - game and stereo. The floor was gorgeous too. It was marble with drawings in granite.
' The bed is this way... ' said Daniel, openning two slinding wood door.
The bedroom was big enough for four people. There were a beautiful king size bed and a crib for Joe. The closet was big enough too and was made of oak, as the slinding doors. And the bathroom... it was so big and beautiful.... a giant mirror and a jacuzzi were there, besides the shower.
' There is another jacuzzi outside, in the balcony, facing the sea... ' Daniel said, opening the curtains and the glasses door for the small living room. ' Now, the breakfast is from 08:00 to 10:30 every day... '
Luka nedded. Their bags arrived and Daniel put them in, near the door..
' Here are your cards... ' Daniel said, putting them on the counter. ' Excuse - me... '
Daniel left and Luka walked in the bedroom. Abby hand put Joe in the crib. Almost instantly, Joe was asleep.
' He slept ? ' asked Luka, walking behind her.
' Yeah... ' said Abby, amiling a little.
She sighed. Luka looked at her. He put his heands on her shoulder and started to massaging they.
' You're tired... why don't we take our clothes and get in bed and sleep ? '
' Yeah, it's a good idea... 'Abby said.
Luka started to kiss her neck and she groaned. It was good , but she was too tired for this...
' Luka... ' she said.
' I know... ' he said.
After a few minutes, the lay in bed, in front of each other. Luka was helding Abby colse to him.
' I love you, Luka... ' she said with closed eyes, almost sleeping.
' I love you too, Abby ' he said,passing his hand on her face.
Luka watched Abby for a few minutes, but sleep came over him. Kissing her on the head, he closed his eyes and slept...
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PS: The spell check didn't work, so I'm sorry if there was gramatic mistakes...
Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 16, 2006 23:27:09 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by ERFanRach on Dec 17, 2006 1:00:06 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by maggie on Dec 17, 2006 1:01:29 GMT 10
PS: The spell check didn't work, so I'm sorry if there was gramatic mistakes... no worries, i understood.
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Post by daniella on Dec 17, 2006 1:20:39 GMT 10
Okay Maggie... it's a little difficult to write in two langagues... when i last expect, I'm writting an settence in portuguese in the beggining and finishing it in Enlish... or the contrary... i'm making a mess in my writting... ;D Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 17, 2006 1:23:57 GMT 10
don´t say lies! you really good in writting! I can 4 languages,and english is my forth. It´s really difficult for me too!
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Post by daniella on Dec 17, 2006 2:13:21 GMT 10
Thank you, Miss Ebay... It really means a lot for me to read this... I'll try to explain my ideas in writting... but my mon think that I'm confusing... but that's okay, because she don't understand how I can pass much time in the computer writting storys... Dani
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 17, 2006 5:06:19 GMT 10
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Post by daniella on Dec 17, 2006 5:11:27 GMT 10
I'll try to write it today, but I'm going out tonight... if not today, I'll post it tomorrow...
Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 17, 2006 5:18:42 GMT 10
Okay,we´ll wait! Enjoy your day or Night !
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Post by daniella on Dec 17, 2006 5:56:08 GMT 10
It's night... it will now 6:00 PM... Dani
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Post by Noora on Dec 18, 2006 5:03:31 GMT 10
Read the all chapter so far.. I think you're doing fine with this fic! Loved the scene where Luka protected Abby.. That is so like him! The proposal moment was beautiful. How do you come up with this stuff?
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Post by daniella on Dec 18, 2006 10:19:20 GMT 10
Just tried to do some different stuff but at the same time, romamtic... Finishing wirtting and will translate... almost certain to be update today... Dani
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Post by fe_mcphee on Dec 18, 2006 12:29:34 GMT 10
ok ! we wait !
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