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Post by zelda on Jul 2, 2006 20:12:51 GMT 10
This scene reminds me so much of Joyce and Brian. This physical violence is awful, but we "see" the scene through your description. Luka could have knocked Richard out, for all I care! Great work.
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Post by charlieluby on Jul 2, 2006 20:33:21 GMT 10
:-/Richard is sucha b*****d! I hope Abby is ok please update soon! Are Abby n Luka going to get together??!?!?!? PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Jul 3, 2006 0:19:16 GMT 10
Hope Abby is ok... and maybe Luka could take care of her natalie x
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 3, 2006 6:45:53 GMT 10
Come on you have to update your killing us !!!
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Post by hollygirl on Jul 3, 2006 14:02:13 GMT 10
Luka was outside Abby's room and heard her and Richard fighting. He decided he shouldn't go in just yet, so he just listened.
"Don't tell me to go to hell! Abby...come on....baby...I'm sorry."
"Thats what you say every time! You are always sorry." Abby was crying uncontrollably...from seeing Richard..but mostly from the unbearable pain she felt.
"I mean it this time! I swear to god....I swear to f**kin god!"
"Get out! get away from me! You have done enough!"
"You won't leave...you can't stand being alone....you come back to me every time."
"I have no choice but to come back! If I don't come back I won't have a place to live! And....I...I hope that you will stop...Rich..I know you are a good person...or at least you were...I loved you....But I just can't anymore. I'm afraid to come home...I'm afraid to be around you...I can't do it anymore....I can't pretend everything is alright!"
"Everything is all right!"
"Richard! just get the hell away from me! it is making me sick to look at you! I can't even believe you had the nerve to come here!"
Richard jumped up out of his seat and slapped Abby across the face...she screamed in pain and Luka stormed into the room. He grabbed Richard and punched him. He fell over in pain. Abby watched in aw as the man she thought was the biggest ass alive beat up her husband for her. She found that she couldn't take her eyes off of him...He was over 6 feet tall....dark hair...deep blue eyes and had a sexy European accent. He finally released Richard who was crumpled up on the floor.
"I think you should leave."
"Bastard!"
"Have a nice day."
"F**k you!"
Richard stormed out of the room hold his jaw. His eye was bruising and his nose was bleeding. Luka walked over to Abby and took a seat in the near by chair.
"What the hell was that?"
"I..uhh..I'm...sorry.."
"No..no..don't be...I enjoyed watching that...I was actually hoping you would smash his head into the wall."
"Look...I..uhh, I know...we got off on the wrong foot. I was having a bad day...I'm usually not such an ass....I'm actually quite a gentlmen...all European men are."
"Yeah...well, would you like to start over?"
"Yeah, sure... Hi, I'm Dr. Luka Kovac...I'm an attending."
"I'm Abby Lockhart, I'm a med student."
"Nice to meet you."
"Nice to meet you too."
Abby and Luka shook hands and just sat in silence for a while. Luka was about to talk again when Leo walked in. Abby looked up at him and smile as he gave her a gentle hug. He has brought her more flowers. He had brought her some each day he had come. Leo was in his 50s and was like a father to her. She met him when she was 16. He was her boss, he hired her at a local supermarket. He knew her life at home was hard...and looked after her...he would give her extra cash, and if she needed time off, he gave it to her. If she needed to get out of her house, he let her and Eric stay in his spare room.
"Hiya sweetie..how are you today?"
"Richard was here..."
"They let that son or a bitch out?!"
"I guess...he had the nerve to come here...we fought and he hit me...he hit me across the face...after what he did to me....he still hit me..."
"Hes one sick f**k....Am I interrupting something?"
"Noo..Leo this is Dr. Kovac."
"Oh..he one of the docs that took care of you?"
"Yeah...and he also just kicked Richards ass."
"Yeah?! good for you! nice to have someone else lookin out for my girl. Shes like a daughter to me."
"Oh...yeah..it was nothing...I just uhh.."
"You did the right thing! I would have killed him the other night if I wasn't so worried about Abby."
They all talked for a while and then Leo left. Leaving Abby and Luka alone..They talked for what seemed forever...telling each other about their lives...Abby had already told Luka most of hers...but she went through it with more details and more civilized. Luka told Abby about his past on Croatia..His wife and children and how they were killed in the war. Abby could not believe what she was hearing...She tried shifting positions but it was too painful to move...she cried out in pain and Luke helped her get comfortable...was she falling for him? was he falling for her? They both could feel the tension.
"Do you want some more morphine or something?"
"Yeah...please."
As Liuka pushed more morphine through her IV he began to speak again...but tripped over his words..."You know...if you...uhh...you know....like...need...uhh.....If you need a..place..to...to stay..I have an extra room...I mean I know we don't really know each other that well...but I don't think you want to go back home.."
"Umm..Yeah...that would be nice....I uhhhh...I mean I definitely don't want to go back home...Thank you."
"Ok...Im glad I can help..."
"Well...I'm really tired..I think I'm going to get some rest.."
"Alright...I'll uhh...I'll see you later."
"Yeah...later."
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Post by anna982 on Jul 3, 2006 15:57:45 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Update again sooooon[/glow]
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Post by zelda on Jul 3, 2006 21:20:52 GMT 10
I'm so glad Luka kicked Richard 's sorry ass! It's nice to see that Abby trusted Luka so quickly, and their connection is already very strong. Sweet to know that Abby had a "surrogate " father, when she was a little girl. Thank you for this great chapter.
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Post by sammiejm on Jul 4, 2006 3:35:38 GMT 10
This is really good. It's very traumatic, but it looks like Abby has found her saviour in the form of a very tall, dark and handsome foreigner
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 4, 2006 3:52:26 GMT 10
Yeah !!!!!
I love this fanfic. Please update really soon !!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Jul 4, 2006 6:46:17 GMT 10
Yeh Abby and Luka!!
natalie x
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Post by Caffy on Jul 4, 2006 8:16:30 GMT 10
Ooo. Working out how to use these boreds is so EXCITING! *bounces*.. Yeah. Anyway I am loving the fanfiction, tres gripping, I like reading the ones that are like, generally different story lines, not that I don't like the others. Ooo. I'll just stop digging here *shakes head* Anyways yeah. Looking forward to the next bit
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Post by hollygirl on Jul 4, 2006 12:45:56 GMT 10
It had been a week now, Abby was still covered in bruises and in unbearable pain. she was being discharged tomorrow, Luka was off, so he would be helping her settle in to his spare room. Abby still couldn't believe she was moving into his place...Abby liked Luka...he really was a gentleman..not an ass like she thought he was....he was so sweet and soooo damn sexxxxy...she would have moved in with Leo...but she couldn't stand to be in that buliding...in the apartment next to the one she has been beaten in and where she had been abused for years. Leo had packed all her things into boxes so she could get her stuff and get out of there...Abby pressed charges against Richard...he was charged for attempted murder and physical abuse. She also filed for divorce. She wanted that done and over with as soon as possible. She dropped med school..to pay for a lawyer....pay for the divorce..she was in debt...and a lot of it. As she layed her head back Luka walked in.
"Hi."
"Hi...look..I want to thank you again...for letting me stay in your extra room....I would move in with Leo...but I can't stand being in that building....I know Richard isn't there anymore...but being in the room next to the room where we lived....where he beat me...where he raped me...well I just couldn't be there...just...walking through the apartment door..I get so scared you know?....I ....I " Abby stumbled through her words as the tears began to roll down her cheeks.."It's like I can't breath....and I start getting shakey...and I just think hes going to be there...come around the corner...hit me with something...burn me with something..slam me into something...I don't even know why I stayed with him....Whats wrong with me?"
she was crying hard now...gasping for breath between sobs...which caused deep pains in her chest, and ribs..Luka just sat there silently...listening to her..He placed his hand on her back and gently rubbed it to comfort her...He was falling for her...he knew she was still married but he couldn't help it.. she was beautiful...behind the bruises, tears, scars, stitches, fear...was beauty..where her skin wasn't bruised it was fair and soft...she had amazing brown eyes, that said so much. She had silky, brown hair...it flowed around her neck and over her shoulders in messy curls...they were natural and very sexy.
"What kind of....person....stays with someone that beats them shitless....on a daily basis?" Luka didn't know what to say...he grabbed a tissue and gently wiped away the tears from her eyes. She winced, and he was even gentler. Luka handed Abby the box of tissues and continued to rub her back up and down with his hand..
"Thank you.."
"No problem....are you ok?"
"....I..uh...I will be."
"Leo stopped by earlier..but you were asleep..he dropped this off." Luka said handing Abby a large brown envelope. She opened it and pulled out papers about the divorce...she didn't want to deal with that right now..so she quickly shoved it back into the envelope and threw it onto the side table.
"I had to drop med school...so..I..was wondering if maybe you could talk to someone...about maybe hiring me as an ER nurse or something...since Carol left...you guys could use a nurse right."
"Yeah...I'm sure I can talk to Kerry...why did you drop med school?"
"Because I already missed like 2 weeks of my ER rotaion...I'm broke and in debt...I have to pay for a lawyer...and the divorce crap...I just don't have the time or the money for school.."
"I see...but you were a 3rd year right?"
"Second."
"Ok...well once you have money...and the divorce is all settled you can always go back."
"Yeah...I guess....Look...um, I'm kind of tired...I think I'm going to try to get some sleep." Abby said trying to lay back down.
"Let me help you." Luka said as he jumped up of the bed and helped her get comfortable...or at least as comfortable as she was going to get. "You're comfortable...pain wise?"
"Yeah...I guess..I mean I don't want to get dependent off of morphine."
"I could give you something else...lighter, like tylenol..or something."
"I'm fine really..I know..you probably have patients...you should go."
"Yeah..I probably should..See you later."
"Yeah...later..don't forget to ask Kerry about me being a nurse down there."
"I won't."
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Post by jaana on Jul 4, 2006 15:59:01 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by zelda on Jul 4, 2006 21:47:06 GMT 10
Great chapter again. I like it when you describe Luka's kindness with Abby.He takes his time, doesn't want to rush things with her.That's very sweet.
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 5, 2006 3:33:03 GMT 10
I'm addicted to this fanfic. It's fantastic !!
Please update soon !
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