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Post by hollygirl on Jul 8, 2006 3:32:17 GMT 10
Dont worry...first kiss is coming soon! im trying to debate weather not to make Abby kiss him first..like in the show..or make a first kiss up...what do you think?
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Post by strizzy on Jul 8, 2006 3:33:39 GMT 10
With it being an original story, why not continue with that idea and think up your own first kiss?
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Post by hollygirl on Jul 8, 2006 3:40:52 GMT 10
good point...ill think of one...ill try to make it really good. thanks for your opinion.
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Post by Little Amy on Jul 8, 2006 3:53:26 GMT 10
great update!!! (wow, I need to try ketchup on eggs someday...)
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 8, 2006 3:56:05 GMT 10
You have to make up you own version, what ever you decide i'm sure it will make our hearts race...
Just do it soon.......Please
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Post by hollygirl on Jul 8, 2006 4:17:43 GMT 10
Abb's first day has been hard. 2 multiple MVA's 2 GSW's....a crazy drunk old man who thought she was his wife...she was exhausted..and her back had started to hurt from the herniated disk. Thank god the day was over...She was up on the roof thinking..She smiled and turned around at the sound of Luka's voice.
"I don't think I've ever seen so many stars."
"What are you doing up here?"
"Looking for you....ruff first day?"
"Yeah...it was a little overwhelming...But I survived."
"Does that mean you're coming back tomorrow?"
"I guess so."
He moved toward her and placed his hands on her shoulders as he stood behind her. she brought her hand up and placed hers on top of his. and there they stood in silence...looking up into the night time sky...
"Did you see that! make a wish."
"See what?"
"The shooting star.."
"I didn't see one."
"I did! now, make a wish...hurry." Abby closed her eyes for a few seconds and then opened them and looked up at Luka.
"What did you wish for?"
"Luka...you know if I tell you..it won't come true."
"I'll tell you what I wished for."
"It won't come true!"
"Then I'll just have to show you instead."
Luka turned Abby around and put his hands to her face...carressing her cheek...She leaned closer to him...they closed there eyes and slowly pressed there lips together...the kiss was long and slow....passionate and sweet. when they pulled apart Abby bit her lower lip and looked up at him..staring into his deep blue eyes.
"You know what?" she whispered.
"What?" he asked, his eyes locked on hers.
"Thats was the first time any of my wishes ever came true."
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 8, 2006 4:30:42 GMT 10
Yahoooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My heart skipped a beat. Just how i thought it should be... long, slow, passionate and sweet.
Your really good at this !!!
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Post by strizzy on Jul 8, 2006 4:45:54 GMT 10
Wow! Really great update!
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Post by sammiejm on Jul 8, 2006 7:38:35 GMT 10
Wow, beautiful first kiss
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Post by *Natalie* on Jul 8, 2006 9:17:03 GMT 10
Just caught up on loads All amazing! especially the last one
natalie x
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Post by hollygirl on Jul 8, 2006 10:51:04 GMT 10
Luka pulled Abby close to him and embraced her. She put her head to his chest and closed her eyes, listening to his racing heart. She couldn't believe they had just kissed...but she longed to do it again...it was the most amazing kiss she had ever been a part of. They pulled apart, and stood their in silence. Lost in each others eyes.
"Luka..." He placed his finger to her lips.
"You don't need to say anything."
"Oh...but I do....I just want you to know...that, no one has ever been as nice to me as you are..and no one has ever made me feel as safe as you do...and no one has ever kissed me like you just did...and I have nev-" but before Abby could finish..Luka's lips were again to hers..This kiss was even deeper....with even more passion...There lips parted but there faces remained centimeters from eachother....he pressed his forehead to hers.
"Its freezing up here....what do you say we head home?"
"Sounds good to me." He wrapped his arm around her and they walked to the elevater....soon Abby was up against the wall Luka's mouth was to hers and they were sucking the life out of eachother...she had her hands running through his hair...his arms around her caressing every inch of her back...pulling her closer to him...Abby started pushing him to the other side of the elevator and now he was against the wall....his hands running through her hair...her hands were holding his face close to hers...suddenly the elevator doors opened and waiting to get in was Dr. John Carter and Dr. Mark Green. There eyes widened, mouths dropped and Luka and Abby didn't even noticed the elevator had stopped..They had moved to a different wall. Abby was up against the wall again and Luka had now moved down to her neck..her head was tilted and she opened her eyes slowly, suddenly having the feeling they were being watched.
"Oh my god!" she gasped. Luka quickly turned around and stepped back..Abby pursed her lips together, and they both turned a deep Scarlett color. As they caught their breath, the 2 doctors didn't move....didn't say anything...just continued to stand there with there mouths open staring at them.
Abby grabbed Luka's hand and dragged him out of the elevater...Her smile couldn't have been any bigger as she tried to contain her laughter...Drs. Carter and Green looked at each other oddly and then stepped into the elevator.."I didn't know they were dating." Mark said.."I thought she was married." Carter said...and they both shrugged and Mark pushed the number 4 button, the doors closed and Abby wrapped her arms around Luka's neck.
"Oh my god....they just saw us making out...in an elevator....." Abby said through laugter..."How am I supposed to show my face here tomorrow....No one knows I'm divorced...and they all knew I was beaten by my abusive husband...they are probably thinking...oh my god what a whore."
"No they're not! Mark asked me the other day if you were staying with him.."
"I told him hell no...that you were getting divorced...and the only thing keeping you married was the lack of Richard's signature and a judge making you two legally divorced."
"You guys talk about me!?"
"Yes....you were a very popular topic in the ER gossip wheel."
"Oh great..."
"Well...In a matter of minutes, everyone will know what we were doing in the elevator..sooo, what do you say we get out of here. as soon as possible."
"Run!" Abby yelled as they heard the elevater ding. Soon everyone in admit was watching as Luka and Abby ran through crowds of patients....around gurneys, Abby almost ran into Kerry Weaver as she and Luka exited through the glass doors leading into the ambulance bay.
"What the hell was that about!?" Kerry exclaimed as she went to grab a chart. Carter and Mark walked up grinning and Carter simply said..."They were making out in the elevator."
"What!?" everyone standing there exclaimed.
"Carter...Mark...tell us exactly what was going on!" Chuny said moving in closer to hear better.
"Ok...well we were waiting for an elevator and when the doors opened ..Abby was against the wall and Luka was like sucking her neck off...and then she looked at us and screamed Oh my god! and then we just stood there staring at them. ..." Carter explained..."Yeah and then Abby grabbed his hand and pulled him out of the elevator..and as the doors were closing we could see her wrap her arms around his neck.." Mark added..."Yeah and then then as we stepped out of the elevater we saw them running toward the doors." Carter said finishing the story..
"Oh..wow! Isn't she married!?" Chuny asked.
"Luka said she was getting divorced...so it must be finalized."
Everyone continued to talk about this new topic until Kerry ordered everyone to get back to work. Back outside, Luka and Abby were heading toward the EL...his arm was around her shoulder and she had her head leaning against him....
"You wanna get something to eat?" Luka asked as the EL started moving.
"Actually...I was thinking maybe...we could go home....finish what we started in the elevator if your intrested.....but if your that hungry..then we coul.."
"No..no...I'm not hungry...I was just thinking about you..and how you need some fat on you."
"Shut up.." Abby said playfully hitting his arm.
"I'm just kidding...You are perfect just the way you are."
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Post by strizzy on Jul 8, 2006 11:09:05 GMT 10
Great update!! Very amusing!!
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Post by Little Amy on Jul 8, 2006 11:34:56 GMT 10
OMG!!!!!!!!!! I simply loved that part!!! I look like an idiot laughing here by my own!!!!!!
UPDATE soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 8, 2006 16:20:23 GMT 10
That was the best chapter yet, although they have all been really good. That was the best.
Please continue.
Update soon !!
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Post by larue on Jul 8, 2006 21:20:31 GMT 10
Awww...so cute, although I don't see Mark Greene doing the gossip thing. Am I wrong about that?
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