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Post by erfan228 on Feb 8, 2007 7:24:18 GMT 10
Wow!! I wasn't expecting Eddie to die!! Poor Abby! Can't wait for more!!
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Post by luby2534 on Feb 8, 2007 7:29:35 GMT 10
So Sad !!
Please update soon !
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Post by lubbylover1 on Feb 8, 2007 9:01:07 GMT 10
Sad update, but awesome fic, Holly
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Post by Bah on Feb 8, 2007 11:02:43 GMT 10
great update.
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Post by hollygirl on Feb 8, 2007 13:03:05 GMT 10
thanks for the feedback, update tomorrow..
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Post by hanna on Feb 9, 2007 9:01:32 GMT 10
great update! so sad that eddie died. i hope maggie gets hit by a car. leaving poor abby like that Keep it up!
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Post by Noora on Feb 10, 2007 8:20:47 GMT 10
NOOOOOOO!!! Eddie is dead??!! He left he's poor little girl alone?!!! Very painful to read.. but very giving. Greatly written. I loved the parts they had together, they were so cute. : ) Maggie really should have a lesson how to raise children and how to be there for them!!! Can't wait for the new updates xx
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Post by hollygirl on Feb 10, 2007 14:53:03 GMT 10
its been a while. I have a little writers block... can't get what I see in my mind, down on paper... or.. on the screen.. I always have this problem. its perfect in my head, but when I'm done writing it.. its just. crap. Chapter 11: Guardian Angel
At the tender age of six Abby's life was turned upside down. Changed forever. For worse, but in a way for the better. Her father moved out and now he was gone. Gone forever. Killed in an instant.. one stupid move made by a young man. Who lived of course. But thats always how it goes. The one who kills someone.. lives.. sometimes without a scratch. Through all of this Abby still saw the good. She had Luka. Who had moved across the street and became her best friend. At such a young age their friendship had grown strong. It would be one that would last a life time.
As Mariana held Abby.. and Nate held Luka.. it was almost as if they had read each others minds. Simultaneously they slid down each adult and walked toward each other. Arms open. Eyes closed. They embraced each other. Luka holding Abby tighter as her tears fell onto his shirt, soaking it. Mariana and Nate watched them bewildered. How could two children be so mature? so comforting? How were these two lucky enough to find each other? and what would life be like right now if they hadn't met?
Mariana glanced at Nate and then turned her attention back to Abby and Luka as he quietly whispered to her in Croatian. words of comfort came from his mouth, and even though Abby had no idea what he was saying.. they helped. She calmed in his arms. And he could feel it. Nate stood up, and picked up Eric's carrier and then walked over to Mariana, wrapping an arm around her shoulder. "We should get going." He said quietly. She nodded.
"Luka.... Abby... we're going to head home." She said softly.
Abby sighed and then pulled back from Luka, looking at him. Neither one of them said anything at that moment.. but.. Luka understood her. And she understood him. He took her hand and followed Mariana out of the hospital and then out to the car. Nathanial strapped the baby's carrier into the back seat and then Luka and Abby slid in. He got in first and she followed. Her elbow rested on the door with her cheek laying on her palm keeping her head up.
The whole ride home Luka had watched Abby. The endless tears that rolled down her cheeks. She made no sounds... it was a silent cry. He kept her hand in his. It made him feel better... He felt that if he was comforting her.. maybe it wouldn't hurt so much. But somehow he knew this wasn't fully true. No matter what he did, what anyone did, it would still hurt. Hurt much more than the usuall pains a child endures. This was much worse than falling and scraping your knee. A band-aid and kiss wouldn't make it feel better.
When Nate pulled into the drive way Abby didn't move from the car. She did however look up and out the window, across the street at her house. Luka sat there with her waiting for her to make a move. Waiting for his parents to open the door and take them out. He knew his mom would talk to Abby... and his father would bring Eric inside... which he was right about. Both doors opened and the sleeping baby next to him was taken inside, leaving Abby, Luka and Mariana outside still. "Luka honey, why don't you go inside and get ready for bed. it is way past your bed time."
He wasn't going to argue with her. He knew she wanted to talk to Abby alone. So he let go of her hand and slid out of the car, watching his mom squat down as he walked into the house. Inside his dad was holding Eric who had just woken up. He was rocking him gently back and forth to stop his fussing.
Mariana got Abby out of the car and then walked across the street and turned the nob on the front door, hoping it was open. When it didn't open Abby walked over to a bush and pulled out a stone frog. she flipped it over and inside it was a key. She handed it to Mariana, who gave her a warm smile and then opened the door. She filled a laundry basket with clothes, diapers, wipes, formula, and baby food.... Abby grabbed Eric's stuffed puppy he couldn't sleep without.. and his blankey.. and then walked into her room. She walked over to her bed and slowly picked up a bunny. It was a big fluffy bunny.... a little old, and a little worn... it had been hers since she was a baby. Eddie bought it. She held it close to her, and then opened her CD player and took out her song. Her special song.
Mariana popped her head into Abby's room, holding the basket. "You got everything you need?" Abby nodded and then followed her back across the street. She took Abby up into the guest room right across the hall from Luka's room. She tucked her in and shut off the lights. Abby turned the sound down low and pressed the play button.. the soothing voice of her papa's filled her ears.. and once again the tears fell. She hugged her bunny closer to her and closed her eyes.
Her door creaked and she looked up to see Luka standing in the door way. She simply nodded and he walked in, closing the door behind him. He climbed into her bed and lay next to her. He wrapped his arms around her and she wrapped hers around him... As she drifted off to sleep her young mind couldn't help but think there was a reason she met Luka. Her mom had just thrown her dad out.. her life ruined.. and then this kid moves in.. and then one day follows her to the park.... some one wanted them to meet.
Abby opened her eyes and looked at him in the dark. Maybe he came into her life.. to help her. To give her strength.. to care about her.. to be her friend.. to always be there. To protect her. Like a guardian angel. Maybe that's what he was... and if so, he would always be there. Forever. Forever to guide her, forever to protect her. Forever to be a loving friend.
When I see your smile tears roll down my face I can't replace.
And now that I'm strong I have figured out how this world turns cold and it breaks through my soul, and I know I'll find deep inside me, I can be the one.
I will never let you fall I'll stand up with you forever I'll be there for you through it all, even if saving you sends me to heaven.
It's ok It's ok It's ok
Seasons are changing and waves are crashing and stars are falling all for us days grow longer and nights grow shorter I can show you I'll be the one.
I will never let you fall I'll stand up with you forever. I'll be there for you through it all, even if saving you sends me to heaven.
Cause you're my you're my, my my true love my whole heart please don't throw that away.
Cause I'm here, for you please don't walk away and please tell me you'll stay, stay..
Use me as you will pull my strings just for a thrill and I know I'll be okay though my skies are turning gray.
I will never let you fall I'll stand up with you forever I'll be there for you through it all even if saving you sends me to heaven.
-Your Guardian Angel By: The Red Jumpsuit Apparatusits a little more about love... but it gave me inspiration for this chapter. I listened to it, as I wrote it. And this concludes PART 1. this fic will have 3 maybe 4 parts..
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Post by Caffy on Feb 10, 2007 20:16:08 GMT 10
I can't believe I haven't seen this before. I love where I think you might be going with this, If not I love it anyway, you have me hoooooked wommmmannn Please make Maggie come home and hug her kids soon?
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Post by ERFanRach on Feb 10, 2007 21:11:11 GMT 10
Great Update!!!
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Post by lubyfreaky on Feb 10, 2007 21:16:58 GMT 10
Poor Abby! Can't belive that Eddie is dead!
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Post by LuBByFaNatiC [ThAiSsa] on Feb 10, 2007 22:51:41 GMT 10
lovely update Holly....... poor Abby... why Eddie is dead?!
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Post by daniella on Feb 11, 2007 0:03:00 GMT 10
Beautiful... simply beautiful... and cute... so cute... Love the update... Now Holly, let Abby and Eric be with them... and not with Maggie... Dani
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 11, 2007 1:33:24 GMT 10
Amazing update Glad Luka is there for Abby natalie x
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Post by Noora on Feb 11, 2007 3:07:46 GMT 10
THAT CHAPTER WAS SO CUTE!!! In love with it.
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