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Post by maggie on Dec 23, 2006 9:14:56 GMT 10
This fic is a sequel to "Hindsight is 20/20". It helps set the tone and scene if you've already read it, so I'm posting the link here... luby.proboards52.com/index.cgi?board=fanficluby&action=display&thread=1153802448and now, "The Way You Look Tonight"This is a continuation of “Hindsight is 20/20”. Abby and Luka have been together now for eight months. Abby is sober. Both she and Luka are back at County General. LukaI’ve been laying awake, watching her sleep all night. She’s so peaceful right now. I study her carefully, trying to memorize everything about her. The way her silky hair falls over the pillow around her, the rise and fall of her breasts as she breathes, the moonlight glinting off her pale skin. Her lips are pursed as if she’s concentrating, and I have the urge to lean over and kiss her. The covers are thrown off, and I follow the curves of her body, her gently concave stomach, her slight jutting hipbones, down to her bended knee. One hand rests lightly on her chest, the other arm over her eyes. I can’t believe I ever let this go. I’m going to ask her to marry me tomorrow. Maybe by now it’s tonight. I’ve had the ring for weeks, waiting until I was sure she was ready. I’ve been ready to ask her since I got back from Africa. I want her here, next to me, for the rest of our lives. I love her. I love her like she’d never understand. I slide closer to her and wrap my arm around her gently, careful not to wake her. I rest my head in the space between her head and shoulder and kiss her soft skin gently. I want to spend my life with her.
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Post by ERFanRach on Dec 23, 2006 9:21:25 GMT 10
Great Start!!! Can't wit to read the rest!!!
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Post by hollygirl on Dec 23, 2006 9:36:43 GMT 10
Great start!!! please update soon, I cant wait for luka to ask her to marry him! She has to say yessss.
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Post by bostongirl on Dec 23, 2006 9:40:20 GMT 10
Really great start Maggie!!
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Post by erfan228 on Dec 23, 2006 10:53:39 GMT 10
Great start!!!!!!!
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Post by eriluby on Dec 23, 2006 10:59:11 GMT 10
Grest start!! Update soon, please, please, please!!
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Post by rorygilmore on Dec 23, 2006 16:33:12 GMT 10
YEAH!!! I KNOW I'm gonna love this fic! i already love the beginning. Luka is so in love with her, hope Abby still feels the same...
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 23, 2006 20:50:42 GMT 10
Great Start!!!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Dec 24, 2006 1:26:14 GMT 10
Hindsight 20/20 is one of my fav fics on here! Can't wait to read more natalie x
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Post by charlieluby on Dec 24, 2006 2:43:51 GMT 10
i seem to remember bein addicted to hindsight 20/20 so i cnt wait! x
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Post by luby2534 on Dec 24, 2006 7:49:40 GMT 10
I love it !!!!
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 24, 2006 7:57:50 GMT 10
wow this is really great please update soon
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Post by maggie on Dec 24, 2006 17:28:47 GMT 10
i should've warned you all before...this fic is going to move very slowly. in fact, the entire fic spans a single day, and each update immediately proceeds the previous one. thus, the whole story is about one day, told from both abby's and luka's perspectives (back and forth). that said, voila...an update.
Abby
I open my eyes to find myself staring straight into his. Those deep, mysterious eyes...I could get lost in them. I smile. “Morning.”
The way he looks at me makes me blush. I’ve never felt beautiful the way I do when he watches me. “Morning.” I wonder how long he’s been awake. He takes my hand in his and brings it to his mouth. “You’re not on today, are you?”
I shake my head. “No. Are you?”
“No.” He smiles and pulls me closer to him. I yawn and snuggle into his chest. He kisses my bare shoulder. “We don’t even have to get out of bed if you don’t want to.”
I love the feeling of his arms around me. I’ve wanted to feel like this for so long, safe, comfortable, content...loved. I can feel his warm breath on my neck and I turn over. “Don’t you think we might get a little bored?”
He shakes his head slowly and leans in. His lips are a fraction of an inch from mine. “I think we can find ways of entertaining ourselves.” He smiles before pressing his lips into mine. I feel his tongue searching my mouth and my eyes close as his hands caress my face. God, he’s a good kisser. His hands travel down to my waist and he rolls me on top of him without breaking the kiss. I move my own arms around him and let my hands slide up his neck and into his soft hair. Now I can feel his hands roaming my body and I moan just a little. I slip my tongue between his lips and the space between our mouths becomes nonexistent. I love this closeness. I love how he holds me like this and how the rest of the world disappears around us.
I hear a faint noise, and realize it’s Luka’s stomach. I begin to laugh, and our kiss is interrupted. I roll off of him and he grins at me. I tousle his hair. “Breakfast?”
Luka
My hands move down her waist, over her hips, to rest on her thighs. She moans into my mouth and then I feel her tongue against mine. If we were any closer we’d be...now there’s a thought. I move to pursue it, when my stomach growls. Abby begins to giggle. I try to ignore it and keep her from breaking the kiss, but she rolls off of me. I can’t help smiling as she dissolves in a fit of laughter. She reaches over and messes up my hair. “Breakfast?”
“Mmhmm.” I roll gently on top of her and press my lips to her neck. I can feel her tense a little as I begin sucking on her skin. She wraps her arms around me and moves her head to the side. A little sigh escapes her, and I can’t help smiling. I love every second of this. I move my head back to look at her and grin. “I want you for breakfast.”
She laughs softly, a sound I love hearing. She places one hands behind my head and I feel her fingers weave through my hair as she pulls my face to hers and our mouths meet. We don’t break apart until, after almost ten minutes of heated kissing, she pushes me back gently, breathing hard. She looks at me, and I can see it in her eyes. She’s willing me, daring me to take it further. I’m not one to back down from such a request.
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Post by megan on Dec 24, 2006 17:40:00 GMT 10
i effing love this fanfic. so wait i did the math in my head the next update will be...well...enjoyable eh?
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 24, 2006 19:21:49 GMT 10
Great Update! Loved it
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