~Bel Vezer~
Countess of Luby
Guru of Sluttiness
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Post by ~Bel Vezer~ on Dec 31, 2006 20:03:57 GMT 10
*Ahem.* Note my new avatar. That's what I'm looking for in the next chapter. ; )
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 31, 2006 20:37:01 GMT 10
Love the chapter!!
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Post by lubylover123 on Jan 1, 2007 1:08:34 GMT 10
*Ahem.* Note my new avatar. That's what I'm looking for in the next chapter. ; ) updatee soon maggie!
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Post by megan on Jan 1, 2007 3:43:26 GMT 10
i love this story to pieces. but where the hell heck is an update. you probably have jet lag or homework or something but um....yeah i need some luby please!
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Post by Melimelo on Jan 1, 2007 12:02:09 GMT 10
OMG ...I have just found this Gem of a story and as per usual jumped in late and missed the sex scene . I have gone back to the begining and read all of it and I love it It is so refreshing to read Fics that start with Abby and Luka just getting together and we join in with their journey to love...it's so sweet and romantic but in a sensual way... not sickly sweet make you wanna puke kinda of way. I think maggie is evolving a little bit with her writing too...maturing nicely and having this story play out the events of a single day is genious....although I hope you might extend it a little further.
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Post by strizzy on Jan 2, 2007 11:34:18 GMT 10
Really like it so far!
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Post by maggie on Jan 2, 2007 19:16:34 GMT 10
Abby
My hands are submerged in the soapy dishwater when I feel his hands slide down my arms and into the sink. His body presses against mine, trapping me between him and the counter as I feel his warm breath on my neck. “Luka, what are you doing?” I whisper to him as his lips brush against my skin.
“Helping.” He laces his fingers through mine and lets his hands follow my own as I continue washing dishes. I feel him nuzzling my neck and pressing soft kisses into my skin. I find it difficult to focus on the task at hand, but I don’t let him stop me. The intimacy of just having his hands on mine in the warm water, his body against me, is incredible. It’s such a simple act, but somehow, it feels like more than that. It’s sensual, it’s loving, it’s passionate, it’s everything that our relationship has become in the past months. I finish and wipe my hands and his with a dish rag before turning around to finally face him. He smiles and leans in, pressing his lips against mine. I feel his tongue graze the roof of my mouth and my arms automatically move to rest on his shoulders. His hands rest on my waist, pulling me towards him as he tilts his head to one side and intensifies the kiss. We could stay like this for days, I know, if we weren’t careful. I pull back from him a little, breathless.
“Are we going to do this all day?”
Luka
Her lips taste of this morning’s maple syrup, sweet and rich. I tilt my head to one side and pull her into me, deepening the kiss. I love the feeling of her body against mine. She pulls away and looks up at me, trying to catch her breath. “Are we going to do this all day?”
A smile creeps over my face and I grip her waist and back her out of the kitchen, towards the couch. “I wouldn’t mind.” I move her backwards until her legs hit the couch and she involuntarily falls onto the cushions. I carefully lay myself on top of her, making sure not to crush her petite frame.
She looks at me, skepticism mixed with amusement. “Don’t we have things to do?”
I don’t want to do anything but kiss her, hold her close to me, and ask her to spend the rest of her life with me. I press my lips against hers and leave a soft kiss on her mouth. “We should have a day off.”
She hesitates and bites her lip before leaning upwards and placing one hand on the nape of my neck. “Okay.” She draws me down to her and lets me slid my tongue between her lips again. I pace my breathing, because as much as I want to take this further, as much as I can feel my body anticipating more, she needs to know I’m here for more than that. I’d be more than willing to spend every waking moment making love to her, but I feel as though I have something to prove to her today. I know she’d never jump into my arms and agree to marry me, weeping like in the movies. I know she can barely consider marriage without getting moody and dysfunctional. I know she’s been hurt and she doesn’t want to repeat the mistakes of her past. If I have even the slightest chance of getting her to say ‘yes’ tonight, she needs to know I want her for more than sex, more than companionship, more than any one thing. In that sentiment, I gently roll onto my back, bringing her with me so that she’s lying on top of me. The brief moment before our mouths come together again gives me the opportunity to look into her eyes and see that, if nothing else, she loves me. I’ve got a chance.
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Post by ERFanRach on Jan 2, 2007 21:16:23 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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kia
Duchess of Luby
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Post by kia on Jan 2, 2007 21:49:03 GMT 10
amazing! It was so full of love and passion, it was just perfect. Great job.
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Post by Maryna on Jan 2, 2007 23:58:13 GMT 10
i haven't had time to check the TDW lately, but now that i read your story i think it's wonderful as all your stories!
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Post by lubylover123 on Jan 3, 2007 0:02:19 GMT 10
Awww that was gorgeous
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Post by Noora on Jan 3, 2007 0:17:11 GMT 10
That was beautiful.
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Post by *Natalie* on Jan 3, 2007 1:36:20 GMT 10
Amazing update as usual Loved Luka's part in this... especially his end thoughts natalie x
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Post by megan on Jan 3, 2007 3:58:10 GMT 10
well done maggie. you met my demand. haha thank you!
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Post by steffi1986 on Jan 3, 2007 4:15:12 GMT 10
wow this was really cute please update soon
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