|
Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jun 24, 2006 13:30:01 GMT 10
Great update! Update again soon!!!
|
|
|
Post by hollygirl on Jun 24, 2006 13:34:24 GMT 10
love your fanfic, update again soon!
|
|
|
Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 24, 2006 13:41:16 GMT 10
Great update!
|
|
|
Post by jaana on Jun 24, 2006 15:44:39 GMT 10
Update soon!
|
|
|
Post by anna982 on Jun 24, 2006 16:29:00 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Update again soon!!![/glow]
|
|
|
Post by zelda on Jun 24, 2006 22:20:53 GMT 10
Hi, Larue honey, I missed you! In each chapter, you develop a bit more of Luka's personality. I love the exchange between him and Tata. You show us how balanced and happy Luka's childhood was. ( love little Luka sleeping with his soccer ball! . And you make us feel that ,despite all the hardships he met, Luka is a STRONG man. He never gave up, even in the darkest hours of his life. He struggled and kept going, and all this, thanks to a happy childhood and the love of his parents. Great lines.
|
|
|
Post by Ergirl on Jun 24, 2006 23:07:37 GMT 10
I love this fic. its amazing! Update soon xXxxXx
|
|
|
Post by lubyfan on Jun 25, 2006 1:19:39 GMT 10
Great update!
|
|
|
Post by *Natalie* on Jun 25, 2006 3:16:45 GMT 10
Great update!! More soon please natalie x
|
|
|
Post by larue on Jun 26, 2006 2:18:15 GMT 10
Abby peeked out the ambulance bay doors and frowned slightly when she saw that Luka was sitting on the bench outside. She wrapped her arms around her chest and pushed the door open with her shoulder. She shivered a bit in the cool fall air as she crossed the empty lot toward him.
“There are warmer places to hide out, you know,” she said as she shivered again. Luka smiled and held his arm out and his coat open for her. Abby sat next to him and snuggled in close as he wrapped his coat around her. They sat quietly for a long moment.
“He is going to be fine, Luka,” she said finally. “He’s going to be just fine. The cancer hasn’t spread. ATRA will work for him.” Luka sighed heavily and held her closer to him. He wanted to believe her. He wanted desperately to believe her.
“I spoke with Andro last night,” Luka said. “He is waiting to hear about treatment options so he can find out what is available in Croatia. He wants Tata to come home.” She nodded thoughtfully.
“I would like Tata to be here for Christmas,” she said quietly. “I’d like them all to be here actually.” Luka chuckled.
“I doubt if you could get either of my sisters in law on a trans-Atlantic airplane,” he sighed. “It might be easier for us to go there.” She turned to look at him.
“Could we?” she asked happily. “For a couple of weeks? Maybe take Tata home ourselves?” Luka chuckled and kissed her nose.
“I have turned you into an international traveler!” Abby smiled and reached up to caress his cheek.
“Kerry might have a conniption,” she sighed softly. “She might be afraid we were going to take another side trip with the L’Alliance….like last time.” Luka chuckled and shook his head. He squeezed her close.
“Can you believe that we actually did that to her?” Abby laughed softly and pressed her head against Luka’s chest again. She loved listening to his strong heart beat.
“It’s like some crazy kind of television show, isn’t it?” she sighed. “Tune in next week for another episode of the Luka and Abby show…..” He laughed. Her brown eyes searched the beaten ambulance bay and then she looked up at him.
“We’ve kind of come full circle here, haven’t we?” she said. “I mean, look at where we’re sitting.” Luka glanced around. His eyes twinkled as he remembered.
“This is where you first kissed me,” he grinned. He felt her cringing.
“I was so embarrassed…..”
“And I was so….intrigued.” She frowned a bit and looked up at him playfully.
“Intrigued?” she asked.
“You were funny….and smart…..” he explained. “…had a nice ass.” She laughed and snuggled close again. Luka sighed and kissed the top of her head.
“I want us to grow old together,” she said softly.
“We will,” he assured her. “Old and gray and wrinkled…..and happy.”
“Abby?” Chuny called from the door. They both looked up.
“We’ve got a code brown on Mr. Podoni again.” she said. Abby straightened and shook her head.
“Will that man never learn?” she sighed as Chuny went back inside. Luka pulled his arm back and she stood up. She kissed him and then headed toward the ER doors.
“Hey, Abby,” he called after her. “When we’re old and gray and wrinkly?” She turned around.
“You’ll still have a nice ass.” Abigail Lockhart Kovac grinned and blew him a kiss. Luka reached up to ‘catch’ it and smiled softly as she went inside. He sat back and looked up at the brick wall before him. The rows of windows were orderly and neat, the words “County Hospital” high at the top. His eyes flew to the sudden bustling activity at the doors and heard the whine of the ambulance siren in the distance. Time to get back to work. Luka Kovac stood up as the ambulance careened into the bay and the doors burst open. He hurried to help with the gurney that was unloaded and pushed it into the ER.
The End
|
|
|
Post by sammiejm on Jun 26, 2006 2:47:26 GMT 10
What a beautiful end to a beautiful story Larue. I have tears in my eyes and a lump in my throat.
|
|
|
Post by hollygirl on Jun 26, 2006 3:11:20 GMT 10
I loved it! write another onee soon! you are a good writer.
|
|
|
Post by Ergirl on Jun 26, 2006 3:39:56 GMT 10
|
|
|
Post by strizzy on Jun 26, 2006 3:49:39 GMT 10
Brilliant story!!!
|
|
|
Post by anna982 on Jun 26, 2006 4:14:16 GMT 10
|
|