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Post by hollygirl on Jul 5, 2006 12:48:16 GMT 10
I love this fan fic! great update!
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Post by jaana on Jul 5, 2006 16:15:58 GMT 10
Update soon!
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Post by zelda on Jul 5, 2006 21:26:25 GMT 10
Each detail is amazing, Larue. After an unforgettable description of hot Luka asleep , you give us another great one of Luka and Abby having breakfast. Why is Luka so damn sexy while making scrambled eggs? And Abby's addiction to ketchup is so funny. It's an ordinary day, but you make it so special with your inimitable style.
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Post by Ergirl on Jul 5, 2006 22:34:39 GMT 10
Hehe..awesome! Ketchup on the eggs...of course! Update again soon!
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Post by Little Amy on Jul 5, 2006 23:18:50 GMT 10
love it! you're an amazing writer!! update!
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 6, 2006 4:26:40 GMT 10
I like it....a lot !!!
Please update !!!
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Post by sammiejm on Jul 6, 2006 4:57:46 GMT 10
Larue, you said at the start you weren't confident writing descriptive pieces, but this is another amazing update.
I can see the scene playing out in my head as I read this. I'm looking forward to reading some more...I hope you plan to continue.
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Post by lubyfan on Jul 7, 2006 23:21:41 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by strizzy on Jul 8, 2006 3:59:08 GMT 10
:)Great
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Post by *Natalie* on Jul 8, 2006 7:12:07 GMT 10
That was great!! Hope it doesn't finish at breakfast
natalie x
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Post by larue on Jul 8, 2006 13:16:15 GMT 10
Arrival……..
Luka shook his umbrella off as he reached the shelter ambulance bay doors and looked up at the falling rain. It was coming down from a gray sky in soaking sheets. The ambulance bay was almost as dark as night. He stepped inside and nodded at Jerry and glanced at the very full triage area. He wrapped long fingers around the umbrella and headed toward the lounge. He stopped short when he saw her and a soft smile snaked across his face.
Abby was standing in the front corridor studying an x-ray on the board. Her arms were folded across her chest and she was positioned in that funny little way she had when she was thinking hard. Her shoulders were back and her hips thrust slightly forward as she leaned away from the board to see every angle. Her brow was furrowed and her lips pursed forward. Fine lines creased the corners of her eyes. He studied the profile of her face, her dark bangs and the long, shining hair that was still pulled back into a snug ponytail. His eyes traced the lines of the white lab coat that she wore over her green scrubs. She straightened and put her hands on her hips with the lab coat flowing behind them. The scrub shirt clung to her breasts a bit and was tucked into the waistband of the pants. She leaned forward and looked at a small corner of the x-ray a little closer. She turned her head a bit and then caught sight of him. She smiled. She tipped her head toward the x-ray and shrugged her shoulders.
Abby watched Luka approach and her throat tightened with emotion. He was wearing his favorite blue shirt and navy tie under his long, dark all weather coat. She smiled a bit when she saw that he’d worn his dark sneakers with his black slacks. He stopped beside her and she looked up at him as he turned to the lighted board she had been studying. Rain drops still clung to his shoulders and he leaned in to look at the same spot she had found. A strand of dark hair fell across his forehead. His hair was a little long around his ear and she almost reached up to tuck it out of the way. Definitely time for a trim. His brows furrowed and his eyes moved over the board as his straight nose almost touched it. His cheeks were smooth and clean shaven. Long creases, that dimpled so easily when he smiled, cut into his face as he tightened his lips in thought. He started to smile and tapped a long finger at the spot she had found herself. He'd found the tiny nick in the patient's bowel just as she had. It had been leaking and making her sick since the initial surgery weeks ago. He straightened and started to speak when he turned and found her looking at him.
“What?” Luka said as he looked at her. Abby snapped the x-ray from the board and grinned.
“Just looking…” she said as she headed toward a nearby exam room.
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jul 8, 2006 13:32:19 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jul 8, 2006 13:38:43 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 8, 2006 16:08:35 GMT 10
Love it. Please update !!
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Post by Noora on Jul 8, 2006 21:41:12 GMT 10
Aww awesome! ^^
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