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Post by luby2534 on Oct 30, 2006 4:23:02 GMT 10
I really like the concept of your new fanfic Larue. I have been looking forward to reading more of your work. You put all your heart and soul into your writing and you always have me hooked from your first post.
Great start. Please update really soon. !!!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 30, 2006 9:50:15 GMT 10
I really do appreciate this fanfic start, it is a completely different but brilliant idea to write about Luka's early years in the US and the mother - son relationship expressed in the letters - it is simply BEAUTIFUL to me I really hope you continue with this fic, even if it not turns out to be a Luby one
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Post by zelda on Nov 4, 2006 8:50:43 GMT 10
OMG, Larue, I have been looking for your new fic like crazy. Why the hell couldn't I find it before today??? As usual, you really amaze me. You have such a large range of stories, all different, all appealing. This one hooks me from the very first words. I LOVE the style: The first exchanges between Luka and his Mom are bittersweet, full of love and sorrow. And, then, a CLIMAX: No more letters, 2 dry telegrams which announce a dramatic event. You.are.such.a.good.writer. BRAVO,and now update please.
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Post by luby2534 on Nov 5, 2006 1:47:50 GMT 10
Very moving Larue, cant wait to read your next update !!
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 5, 2006 2:50:15 GMT 10
Great Update Really emotional!
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 5, 2006 4:21:43 GMT 10
Beautifull! O, so beautifull.... I don't know what to say else....
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Post by luby2534 on Nov 5, 2006 5:01:36 GMT 10
Speachless !!
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Post by jadestar on Nov 5, 2006 5:37:52 GMT 10
OMG it is so beautiful written, I nearly cry everytime I read it because it's so emotional and touching, I love this fanfiction, honestly
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Post by zelda on Nov 5, 2006 10:26:57 GMT 10
Lyn, honey, This is the BEST fanfic you have written. I have read it several times before posting. Every reading gives me new details, new perspectives. The literary structure is magnificent. Change of style, of speed: Some memories are sweet ( the FARM, the HAPPY family life, the FIRST AND TRUE LOVE..) We know that luka has been totally happy when he was a child,with loving parents who adored him and his brother. This explains why after all the tragedies in his life, this man is a fighter and he'll survive, whatever his future is. The strong link with his mother, her inconditional love, this is what helps any man to cope with his personal issues, whatever they are. You write something which explains so well Luka's personality: QUOTE: His brother Zadro: "He had never realized that I've already lived several lives." This LINE shows how Luka CAN OPEN UP to his mother with so few words, she'll understand .... And these people ( family and relatives) never use PATHOS or DRAMA to tell about their sorrows and losses. Before congratulating you, I wanted to tell you something personal and weird: I'm so fascinated by Luka, his past, his present life in America, that I didn't have a single thought about Abby..... I think it's the best compliment I could give you. And I am moved to tears by the simplicity of your words...
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 5, 2006 23:17:08 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by zelda on Nov 7, 2006 0:36:25 GMT 10
Lyn, Loving this story so much. This is a like a road movie. I would like to find some original and snotty remark concerning your style and ..... how you can improve it. Honestly I CAN'T. I really think it takes a lot of WORK to find such a clever structure in your style. The everyday stuff between Luka and his Mom is nice and easy. As soon as it becomes more personal, they have these laconic words which emphasize everything. Very BRIEF and INTENSE. I could call this fic :LUKA LOST IN AMERICA. MERCI for these lines. ( your very best, for me, the most elaborated ones... )
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Post by steffi1986 on Nov 7, 2006 2:20:16 GMT 10
wow this is really a great fic please update soon
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 12, 2006 6:10:53 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by zelda on Nov 12, 2006 10:55:21 GMT 10
Lyn, Each chapter is so different. Here I feel that Luka's life is weary and sad. He said nothing about his work, and his brief affair with this girl is everything but exciting. His last lines to his Mom are not convincing at all. The simplicity of your words make it even darker. Great passage.
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Post by jadestar on Nov 13, 2006 1:35:17 GMT 10
what I love so much about this fic is that you describe so many emotions and situations with very few and simple words, yet you leave many things unspoken and still I can read these unspoken things between the lines... wonderful, I adore your way of writing
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