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Post by tanja on Mar 11, 2006 21:41:11 GMT 10
It is great! Please keep going
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Mar 12, 2006 14:36:38 GMT 10
can't wait for more!
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Post by lulu on Mar 12, 2006 20:14:11 GMT 10
Really nice writing - might just have to go read the lot...
~Abi*Lulu~
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Post by cranky on Mar 14, 2006 11:18:36 GMT 10
Like I told you, I love this story!
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Post by Little Amy on Jul 6, 2006 0:20:12 GMT 10
oh my... you make me want to read all of it... and I liked when Luka was dreaming... life passing in front of you when you are about to die
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jul 6, 2006 0:40:53 GMT 10
Awesome! Can't wait for the next update!!!
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Post by larue on Jul 6, 2006 11:12:55 GMT 10
This story is posted on fanfiction.net. It's my very FIRST fan fic! Should I put it here in it's entirety??? Are there readers who have not read it there? It's kind of long....but fun to read. I could easily edit it a bit.
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Post by maggie on Jul 6, 2006 11:46:56 GMT 10
oh, please post it!
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Post by larue on Jul 6, 2006 11:57:52 GMT 10
This fan fiction was the first that I ever wrote. It began with the Christmas episode that ended with 'I'm pregnant....' and left us with 4 freaking weeks of holidays specials and reruns. AARRGGGHHHH!!
Chapter 1 - 'Abby's News'
Abby stared at Luka and caught the sheepish smile forming at the corners of his lips.
‘What?” he asked slowly.
“I said, I’m pregnant,’ she repeated.
‘Okay”, Luka replied. Abby groaned and turned away from him.
‘Is that all you have to say?” she cried.
“What do you want me to say?” he asked softly. Abby felt his hands on her shoulders and he turned her gently around to face him.
‘Do you want me to say that I am...stunned? That I am... surprised?” he said as he carressed her jaw line with his thumb. He studied her face and then kissed her gently. “How about I say that I am very, very happy for us?” Abby melted against his kiss for an instant and then stiffened. She pulled away from him.
‘We can’t do this, Luka,” she said. “What are we going to do with a baby? You’ve just taken a new position at the hospital and I’m still...” Luka took her hand and pressed a kiss into her palm.
“We do what everyone else should do with a baby,” he said. “We will keep it warm and dry...feed it when it is hungry...and love it.” A broad smile spread across his face. “We solve all the problems together, eh?” Abby sighed as she studied his face. She raised her hands to his chest and sighed.
“I am not saying that I am going to go through with this yet,” she said determindedly. ‘It’s still early enough.” Luka raised his eyebrows and nodded. “Okay,” he said again. “We will talk about it...in the morning.’ He snuggled her under his arm and grinned broadly as they walked across the street to a cab stand. When they reached the other side he could contain himself no longer. He swept her off her feet and into his arms and twirled around and around as the snow flakes drifted down on them in the night.
She came awake slowly and stretched a bit in the warm bed covers. She opened her eyes and found Luka propped up on one arm and watching her.
“You are watching me again...” she sighed. He grinned.
“You are beautiful when you sleep,” he said.
‘Uh...yeah...well...I remember a time when you said I was nothing special...not pretty enough,’ she said. Luka frowned for a second as he thought.
“Ah...’ he sighed softly as he remembered. “I said that when I needed to get you off your cuff and back into medical school.”
‘My ‘duff’, you mean,” she said. “Not cuff...duff...and it was mean.” His eyes twinkled as he slipped his hand to her almost flat belly under the covers and caressed the skin there. Her eyes met his and he smiled.
“So...do you want the dill pickles with your breakfast yet?” he asked. A sudden wave of nausea swept through her.
“Oh great...” she said as she threw the covers off and raced for the bathroom. Luka fell back against the pillows and grinned. He would help her in a moment but right now he was enjoying the fact that his baby...his wonderful and very smart baby...was already making it’s presence known.
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Post by larue on Jul 6, 2006 12:03:23 GMT 10
Chapter 2 - 'They Know'
Haleh sat across the table from Abby and watched her carefully as she absently flipped the pages of the magazine in front of her. Chuny and Dori were ensconced on the couch and pretending to be reading themselves. Abby was aware that they were watching her and tried hard to ignore it. She sighed softly and went back to work on the stack of charts she was writing in. Chuny, Haleh and Dori exchanged glances and then went back to their own activities. The silence loomed large in the lounge. Abby dropped her pen in frustration.
“What!” she asked sharply. ‘What is it?’
“Well...someone is certainly touchy today”, Haleh said with a feigned frown. Chuny smiled.
“Touchy as in, maybe...emotional?” she replied. Haleh chuckled and stood up to carry a coffee cup to the counter.
“So, Dori,” Haleh asked. “Did you ever find that missing test kit from the O.B. closet?” The three nurses looked pointedly at Abby. “Uh...I bought mine at the mini mart like everyone else,” Abby said. Dori moved to sit in a chair at the table with Chuny right behind.
“So you did take a test,” she said.
“And...?” Chuny asked. Abby glanced from one to the other.
“Wouldn’t that be confidential information?” she asked. Chuny leaped up and did a high five slap with Haleh.
“ I knew it!” she laughed.
“I can’t wait to tell Carol!” Haleh laughed.
“We are not telling anyone!” Abby cried futilely.
“Of course...” Dori nodded, her eyes wide. “We won’t tell...promise.”
‘Do you think it’s possible to have a private life around here?” Abby groaned. The three nurses stopped on their way out the door and contemplated her question.
“No,” Haleh said.
“Nope,” Chuny grinned.
“I don’t think so,” Dori added. Abby groaned and buried her face in her hands as they left. She sat back in her chair and sighed heavily.
This was all so new...and scary. Luka was being wonderful...so patient. She was used to handling things. She had seen herself through some major curve balls in her life. But for the very first time she missed having someone to talk to. She missed Susan...and lord help her...she actually missed Maggie. There was only so much you could say on the telephone. The door of the lounge opened and Sam walked in.
“Hey,” she said and headed for the refrigerator. ‘Kinda quiet out there.”
“We both know it’s just the lull before the weekend storm,” Abby replied. Sam opened a bottle of water and sat down at the table.
“How are you doing?” she asked. Abby shrugged.
“Trying to keep up with this ever growing pile of paperwork,” she said.
“Luka told me about the baby, Abby,” Sam said. “I am very happy for the two of you. I know that he has wanted this for a while.” She sighed.
“And I know that he has especially wanted it with you,” she finished. Abby looked at her and Sam smiled. She lifted the bottle in a toast.
“Luka is a great dad,” Sam said. “Just ask Alex.” Abby chuckled.
“He is one scary kid,” Abby said. “And too smart for his own good.” Sam grinned.
“Look at all you have to look forward to!” she said as she stood up. “Thanks for having him for dinner the other night while I was on duty.”
“I was glad he was there,” Abby said. “Luka had someone to play his games with.” Sam laughed as she left. Abby went back to work on her files and was gathering them up as Luka pushed open the door to the lounge.
“Would you have any idea why all the nurses are smiling at me?” he asked. Abby chuckled and stood up with the arm load of files.
“Gee...I don’t know,” she said. “That Croatian charm maybe?” Luka grinned and studied her quizzically for a moment.
“They know,” he said. “They know about the baby. I thought you wanted to keep it a secret?”
“I did!” Abby cried. “I don’t know how they found out.” She glared playfully at him. “And don’t give me that crap about...glowing”. Luka shrugged and held the door open for her.
“But you are glowing,” he said as he pressed a kiss to her forehead. “My meeting is over and I am going home. Come to my place for dinner?”
“I don’t know,” Abby said warily. “When I am with you at your place, I never make it home to mine. I need some rest.” Luka chuckled.
“Tonight we sleep...I promise,” he said. “I’ll even give you a Croatian massage to relax you.”
“Right,” she said. “I think that’s how we got into this situation in the first place.” Luka laughed heartedly and headed out the door to the E.R. bay.
“That is one happy man,” Haleh said with a satisfied smile as she watched him disappear. “And when the boss is happy, we are all happy.”
“So when do we start the baby pool?’ Chuny asked as she leaned over the older woman’s shoulder.
“I think we’d better start the wedding pool first,” Haleh nodded.
“I heard that,” Abby said as she passed by them to put her files away. “Private life, remember? Confidentiality?” Haleh and Chuny snickered.
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Post by hollygirl on Jul 6, 2006 12:04:38 GMT 10
great update!!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jul 6, 2006 14:43:55 GMT 10
Loved the update!!
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Post by Little Amy on Jul 6, 2006 16:46:16 GMT 10
love it! update soon!
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Post by jaana on Jul 6, 2006 17:13:18 GMT 10
Love the update!
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Post by Noora on Jul 6, 2006 23:17:06 GMT 10
Oh my god amazing fic! Update
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