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Post by baboune51 on Oct 12, 2008 18:43:49 GMT 10
they have a physical attraction
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Post by suzanne on Oct 12, 2008 22:24:10 GMT 10
Chapter 11 "Okay, I am a middle child out of five children. I have one brother and three sisters. In high school, I played baseball and rode bulls." "You rode bulls? That’s hot," she said. "Is that a point for me?" he asked "Keep going." "On the weekends and summer, I would go to my grandparents’ ranch and work there. A few years ago he died, which devastated me because we were close, he left me the ranch. He was actually the one that hired Jake. I could have quit my job and take over the ranch, but I love my job. I know it’s weird but I actually do love my job." "That’s not so weird. I love my job too." "Point 2, now do I get rewarded?" She smiled and kissed him. After a couple of hours of swimming around, talking, and making out, they decided to head back to the campground. Luka put his arm around Abby’s shoulder as they walked. Abby smiled. It had been a good day. They were able to hang out and get to know one another. Then all of a sudden he asked the dreaded question. "When are you gonna tell Carter about us?" Sorry its so short, will have another one later!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Oct 13, 2008 3:49:16 GMT 10
Love it! What is she going to day to Carter ? ;D Can't wait to an update
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Post by baboune51 on Oct 13, 2008 5:44:32 GMT 10
they didn't make love
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Post by Taylor on Oct 13, 2008 7:18:14 GMT 10
love the story so far!!! keep going......
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Post by suzanne on Oct 13, 2008 9:41:34 GMT 10
Chapter 12 She looked like a deer caught in the headlights. Truth was she hadn’t even thought about telling Carter. "Um…I guess when I get back." He seemed pleased with her answer because he didn’t press the issue anymore. Then she saw him. Carter was sitting around the campfire talking to Niki. Abby stepped out from under Luka’s arm and rushed over to find out what Carter was doing here. He smiled when he saw her and rushed to greet her. "I missed you." He kissed her. Luka walked away. "Isn’t it great? Dr. What’s his name decided to join us," Jake said sarcastically. "Again, it is Dr. Carter, Dr. John Carter." Carter said annoyed. "Not that I am not glad that you are here, but what are you doing here?" Abby asked. "Well, I called your phone earlier and Niki answered and said that you were fishing but really wish I would come up. So here I am." He hugged her and she glared at Niki who smiled and waved deceitfully. Crap! She had forgotten her phone. For the rest of the day, Carter was stuck to her like glue. Luka wouldn’t even look at her. How could things change so fast? Carter looked at his watch. "Um, it’s getting late. Are you ready for bed?" he asked. She didn’t answer she just took his hand and followed him to the tent. Luka got up and walked away. Within a few minutes, Carter was asleep with his arm around Abby. She stared blankly at the tent wall. All she could think about was Luka and the day they had. She needed to talk to him, but Carter had her pinned, so she decided to wake up early in the morning to talk to him.
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Post by Taylor on Oct 13, 2008 10:30:18 GMT 10
OMFG lol my jaw dropped when i read this update...good job i love stories that keep me guessing!!!!
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Post by leiraguzon on Oct 13, 2008 18:40:01 GMT 10
Awww Carter had to come. Lol. Can't wait to read what happens next
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Post by baboune51 on Oct 13, 2008 18:51:47 GMT 10
wow , poor Luka
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Oct 14, 2008 2:15:44 GMT 10
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Post by lubyfan4ever on Oct 14, 2008 2:36:32 GMT 10
Hey, I didn't expect Carter to be there, it surprised me as much as Abby ! Can't wait for the next step ! Keep going !
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Post by suzanne on Oct 14, 2008 3:06:22 GMT 10
Chapter 13 The next morning Abby woke up just before daybreak and managed to sneak out of the tent without waking Carter up. She walked over to Luka’s tent but to her surprise, it was gone. She walked out to where all the vehicles were parked. His truck was gone too! He had left! She was devastated. She walked out by the riverbank and sat down. She sat there for hours before anyone had gotten up. Jake was the first one up, so he walked out to check on her. "Hey, kid, you don’t look so good," he said sitting down next to her. "He left. After everything that happened yesterday, he just left," she said sadly. "Ab’s, do you really think he wanted to stay and watch you make out with your boyfriend? Believe it or not, that boy really cares about you." He looked at her. "And from what I can see you care for him." "It doesn’t matter. I am with Carter where I belong." She got up and walked away. "How do you like your surprise?" Niki asked as Abby walked past her. Abby had enough of Niki and her attitude. She walked over to Niki and yanked her up by her shirt collar. "What are you doing?" Niki yelled. She dragged Niki out to an open area and shoved her down. "I’m tired of your mouth! If you have a problem with me then let’s settle this now! Are you so miserable that you are determined to make everyone else around you miserable too?" Abby didn’t wait for her to respond. "You get one shot, so you better make it good because I’ll beat you down!"
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Post by shelby on Oct 14, 2008 3:58:51 GMT 10
oh god....go Abby!!! great update!!
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Post by baboune51 on Oct 14, 2008 5:24:45 GMT 10
yeah go Abby go !!!!
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Post by suzanne on Oct 14, 2008 18:50:27 GMT 10
Chapter 14 Everyone stood around and watched. "I don’t want to fight you, Abby," Niki stammered obviously afraid of Abby. Abby stepped towards her and Niki stepped back. "Let me make something very clear! If I hear you talk bad about anyone here, or if you even look at anyone cross-eyed, then rest assured that I am coming after you. I am not a fighter but I will not hesitate to kick your ass." Abby acted like she was gonna hit her. Niki flinched. "You know, I almost feel sad for you. Look around, look at all these people who have my back." She motioned toward all her friends. "Now look who has yours." No one was there. "And it is not because we didn’t try to be your friend. All I am saying is you better wake up before you isolate everyone that has ever tried to care about you." Abby walked off. "What was that about?" Carter asked following her. Abby sighed. "Just tired of all the drama." He grabbed her arm and pulled her close. "You took this vacation to relax, but you seem more stressed than when you left. If you are this stressed, then maybe you should consider leaving early." Another update later, got interrupted!!
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