Taylor
Countess of Luby
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Post by Taylor on Oct 27, 2008 0:30:58 GMT 10
aww hopefully luka will see abby soon...!!!!!
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Post by baboune51 on Oct 27, 2008 4:19:53 GMT 10
Abby is free and Luka has to see her !
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lylee
Luby Lover
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Post by lylee on Oct 27, 2008 8:55:55 GMT 10
I'm not sure every husband-to-be would react like Carter did... It was a beautiful scene though.
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Post by suzanne on Oct 27, 2008 20:35:56 GMT 10
Chapter 26 The next day brought chaos. Jake woke up with a hangover. The preacher that was going to perform the ceremony was running late. The one of the groomsmen lost their shoes. The caterers got lost on the way to the ranch. Abby rushed around trying to help where she could. She found the groomsmen’s shoes on the back porch. She met the caterers at the end Luka’s street and led them to the house. The only thing she couldn’t control was the preacher getting there on time. Even though Luka wasn’t there, he still let Jake use his house for the wedding preparations. Abby looked around the room she was changing in. There were pictures on the wall of Luka and his grandfather at different ages. She smiled. Even as a kid, he was adorable. She took a deep breath to hold back the tears. She had just put on her makeup and didn’t have time to fix running mascara. She found her dress hanging on the bathroom door and slipped it on. It was an elegant strapless apple red satin gown. She fought with the zipper as someone knocked on the door. She knew it was Jake so she hollered, "Come in." She heard the door open and close. "Can you help me with this zipper?" she asked with her back towards the door. He zipped up the dress. "Thank you," she said turning around expecting to see Jake. "Luka." At first, she didn’t believe it was really him, because she had been seeing him everywhere.
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Post by baboune51 on Oct 27, 2008 21:04:37 GMT 10
yeah , new meeting !!
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Chephren
Luby Lover
If you wouldn't wear your dog, please don't wear ANY fur...
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Post by Chephren on Oct 27, 2008 21:05:43 GMT 10
OMG !!!
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!! Something like RIGHT NOW!!!!!
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Post by manu on Oct 28, 2008 1:25:31 GMT 10
Ahhh, this is good. Update asap
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Taylor
Countess of Luby
Posts: 150
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Post by Taylor on Oct 28, 2008 5:36:45 GMT 10
OMG u have to update i am dying to know what happens next!!!!
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Post by suzanne on Oct 28, 2008 8:33:23 GMT 10
So this is the final chapter for this story!! I'm so sad, really enjoyed this story!! I have started a new one already and will have the first chapter up tomorrow!! Thanks for all the comments guys!! Happy reading!! Suz!!xoxo Chapter 27 "You look incredible." She rushed to hug him but he stopped her. "No, I’m sorry but I can’t go down this road again. I only came in here to see you because I didn’t want you to be surprised at the wedding. I am here with someone else." "I see," was all she could say. "Anyway, I better get back out there. I hope that one day we can get past this and become friends." He turned and started for the door. "No!" she exclaimed causing him to turn back around. "What do you mean no?" he asked. "I don’t want to be your friend any more than you want to be mine. I get it. You are mad at me for taking so long to make up my mind, but you know what? I am mad at you too." "You’re mad at me? For what?" he asked. "For giving up. For getting shot!" "You’re mad at me for getting shot? How is that my fault?" he asked slowly inching forward. "I have never been as scared as I was that day. I felt like my world was falling apart and then you just shut me out." He kept inching closer. "I did it for you. I didn’t want you to have to choose. It was not easy for me either. That night you laid beside my bed sleeping was both the best and the hardest night of my life because I knew that the next morning I had to let you go." "That is the dumbest thing I have ever heard," she said. He laughed. "You fight for what you want. You don’t let it go." "It wasn’t so dumb. You came back didn’t you?" He pulled her close and kissed her. She pushed him away. "You’re not going to run away again?" she asked. He didn’t answer. He just pulled her close and kissed her again. "What about your date?" she asked pulling away again. He laughed. "Will you just shut up?" He kissed her again. This time she didn’t pull away. She wrapped her arms around his neck and enjoyed the wholeness she finally felt. She didn’t know if there was only one person for everyone. All she knew was there was only one person for her and this time she wasn’t going to let him go ever again. The end
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Post by daniella on Oct 28, 2008 8:40:45 GMT 10
It was a beautiful story, Suzanne... loved the end...
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Post by lubyfan4ever on Oct 28, 2008 17:22:02 GMT 10
Nice story, I'm sad it already ends.... I'm eager to read the next one !
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Oct 28, 2008 18:27:40 GMT 10
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Post by manu on Oct 28, 2008 19:12:47 GMT 10
Great ending. Fantastic story!
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Post by baboune51 on Oct 28, 2008 19:35:25 GMT 10
Great eding I have hate to read your fanfic next !
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