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Post by Maryna on Jul 17, 2006 6:39:29 GMT 10
love it!!! update soon, please!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jul 17, 2006 7:49:04 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by zelda on Jul 17, 2006 9:46:40 GMT 10
Rory Gilmore: the beginning of this story left me a bit....dumbfounded: Samka, no way, Carby, even worse. But you presented your fic with a great sense of humour and I enjoyed it. And today is a great moment: That's so true. New dads are often panic- stricken and petrified with this huge responsability, and believe me, leaving a newborn in a supermarket is not the worst case of scenario! (I know what I'm talking about! ) Finally, Luka is a wise guy: forgetting his baby girl in the ER was quite a safe place!! Love your fic.Great update!
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Post by rorygilmore on Jul 17, 2006 10:08:44 GMT 10
Samka, no way, Carby, even worse. But you presented your fic with a great sense of humour and I enjoyed it. Love your fic.Great update! Thanks for your feeback everyone and Zelda: Yeah, I know... about Carby and Samka...it' TOTALLY sucks... but I promise things will give a BIG turn as the story develops; I want to write a funny and happy story.. Now hope you like this new update ..._______________________________________________ Luka’s apartment was cozy and warm, compared to the cold winter outside, it was snowing and Christmas was coming in a few days. Abby was sitting on the couch reading a newspaper while Luka was making one of his croatian exquisiteness. He eyed Abby by the corner of his eyes, from the kitchenette: “Anything interesting?” he asked “Huh?...Oh no… not checking the news section; I’m looking for an apartment” She mumbled, turning the pages. “An apartment?” He asked “Yeah, with the baby coming, got a lot more expenses…can’t afford my apartment’s rent anymore…need to save some money, you know…” She sighed
Luka felt unconfortable with that idea, she already had that dreadful apartment were she was living and if she was looking for something cheaper, she would probably end up living in a rented-room if not, a box in the street. Abby closed the newspaper , putting it on the coffee table and stood up with difficulty because of her big belly.
“I’m not sure if I’m gonna be able to handle this…It’s too much…everything…maybe I should…” she mumbled putting a hand on her big belly. “Hey” he said getting close to her. “You’re not alone, I’ve told before…I’m here. Everything is going to be fine” he said taking her hand. “How can you be so confident when your girlfriend has dumped you with a newborn?” she asked him He just looked at her and said “First, she wasn’t my girlfriend, second…well, I think…”
A baby’s cry interrupted them. They both turned to look upstairs were Luka’s bedroom was. Standing there, none of them moved. “I’ll go” Abby finally said “ You finish your cooking, I’m starving”
Abby went upstairs and entered the room. Everything was exactly the same she thought. Except for the little crib near Luka’s bed. She got close to it and saw the little baby squirming and crying. She bent down and picked her up “Are you hungry?” She asked. “…Me too, you know your dad is going to kill us of hunger” The baby calmed down a little in Abby’s arms. “Let’s go downstairs”
“Hey, Cooker!!!…where’s the milk?” Luka turned around to see Abby. He thought she looked pretty with a baby in her arms and a big baby belly under it. “You know, you look like a picture” he said while taking out the baby’s formula of the cabinet. “Well, maybe you would like to take one” she teased. “You really look nice holding a baby” he started to prepare the formula.
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Post by hollygirl on Jul 17, 2006 10:26:13 GMT 10
great update! more soon!
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Post by rorygilmore on Jul 17, 2006 15:28:46 GMT 10
“Dinner is ready” Luka announced sitting, next to Abby who was feeding the baby on the couch. “You know…you should give her a name, Luka…or are you planning to call her “baby” until she’s 40?” “Haven’t got enough time to think about one, everything went so fast, you know” he said caressing one of the baby’s tiny hands…
“You pick one” Luka smiled “Me?!” Abby said surprised. “Yeah, c’mon . You’re the one who had the idea” Luka smiled “My idea?!...Luka every child is supposed to have a name!. So it's not my idea!!” “C’mon Abby just say one… a nice one, of course”. Abby stared at him for a second and said “Well then….how about Abby?…It’s cute” She smiled “Well that’s original!” Luka laughted. “Really! Say just one name, and we’ll name her like that” “We?” she asked “Well yes, you started all this” “Okay, Okay you’re beginning to annoy me” she said giving him the baby’s empty bottle. “Let’s see…How about.. Danna?” “Danna?” Luka repeated…”Danna” he mumbled looking at the baby, now sleeping in Abby’s arms. “I like it…Danna Kovac…Sounds nice” he said. Abby smiled. “It’s perfect” He smiled too. “You’ve got a name, Danna” Abby said, looking at the baby. “WAIT!…. Stay still!!! Luka said running towards his room. “What...?” Abby frowned For the first time in months he was feeling happy, he didn’t knew why but this moment was great. When he came back, he was holding his camera “Don’t you dare, Luka!!!” Abby warned him “I look like hell” she said. “You said I should take a picture and this is a moment I would like to save forever” He smiled “…my daughter’s name day…he turned the camera on and said: “Hey, Danna, this is your name day…Abby has picked a name for you” . Abby shook her head.
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Post by jaana on Jul 17, 2006 17:02:11 GMT 10
Great fic! Update soon!
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Post by sammiejm on Jul 17, 2006 17:59:39 GMT 10
Really good!
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Post by Maryna on Jul 17, 2006 18:13:46 GMT 10
it's so sweet! update soon!!!
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Post by lubyfan on Jul 17, 2006 19:37:10 GMT 10
Love it!
Update soon!
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linda
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Hope for the future
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Post by linda on Jul 17, 2006 20:26:28 GMT 10
updation is neeeeeeeeeded right now!!! this is too cute!!
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Post by carsley on Jul 17, 2006 21:20:33 GMT 10
It's great!! More, MORE!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jul 17, 2006 22:50:44 GMT 10
Great updates!
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Post by zelda on Jul 18, 2006 0:05:31 GMT 10
This is a cute idea to let Abby choose the babygirl's name! Abby and Luka are getting closer and closer. Very sweet passage, with a lot of funny moments.
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 18, 2006 4:58:06 GMT 10
Please update really soon !!
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