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Post by orangecrush on Nov 8, 2008 8:40:58 GMT 10
I've decided to start a new fic as I couldn't work out where to go in my other one. The setting for this isn't in the hospital but is in a school instead, where abby and luka are teachers. I know a few fics have already used this as their setting, im not copying them I just wanted to write something different to a hospital as i dont know all the medical terms and similar. Anyway, let me know what you think, hope you enjoy! Just a small update for now...
He could feel his eyes closing shut as every second passed. If Waters was gonna keep talking about the same boring subject, he was gonna have to either lay down and go to sleep or physically go over and shut him up. Both sounded equally as appealing. Looking around the hall, his eyes skimmed over his tutor group’s faces... boredom struck them, struck him, struck every person he laid his eyes on. He briefly glanced at his watch, 45 minutes, he let out a groan of impatience that proved to be a little too loud and gained a few giggles from his tutor group. Smiling briefly and shushing them, he went back to his previous grumpy thoughts. Tuesday mornings. Assemblies on Tuesday mornings were awful. This morning’s topic was “Fire Drill Procedures.” Everybody knew what to do in case of a fire, and didn’t need it explaining to them over the space of what looked like it was going to be a whole hour. He sighed and thought back to last night. Monday nights were cheap nights in town, so it was normal for him and his colleagues to go out drinking. Last night had been no different. His hangover this morning was terrible, the previous night, he had consumed far too much and, as usual, had woken up in his bed not being alone. Hooker or not, it was still as one night stand and the thought made him sick to the bone. He sighed. He was far too lonely to care. Looking around the room, he could tell which of the staff had been out also, slumped shoulders, tired eyes, regular smiles as they remembered things they had forgotten about last night. His eyes wandered on, pausing on a face he did not recognise. She was absent mindedly staring out the window behind him, obviously the fire alarm talk wasn’t doing it for her either. He tried to focus back towards the front of the room but something kept urging him to look back at her. She was stunning. He eyed her up and down, good figure too, then felt himself heavily blushing as he realised she was now looking at him. Their eyes locked for a moment, and then he looked away, his heart thumping through his ears.
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Post by suzanne on Nov 8, 2008 10:43:38 GMT 10
Very nice start!! Interested on whats gonna happen!! Update soon!!
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Post by orangecrush on Nov 9, 2008 5:41:30 GMT 10
Her first day was going well. She had had two lessons where all the students had co-operated with her politely and now she had a free lesson. Making her way to the staff room, she found it to be empty, not knowing whether to take this as a good or bad thing, she made a coffee, sat at the table and stared out the window. She could get used to this.
Drifting off into a daydream she was loudly interupted. The door swung open and two people stormed in, oblivious to Abby's presence, one in front of the other, voices raised loud. "Firstly Jenny, get your facts straight, I emailed them to you this morning and secondly if John Carter wants to criticise my teaching, he can do it to my face, not behind my back, and definately NOT to you!" A man shouted, huffing and running a hand through his hair, she recognised him from the assembly earlier. "Look, I don't know what it is between you and carter, but recently it's got worse and I want it to stop! Or else, Luka I mean it!" The second voice retaliated, who Abby presumed was 'Jenny.' With that the lady turned around and stormed out, slamming the door behind her.
Abby watched as Luka leant against the lockers, breathing heavily, shoulders moving up and down. She thought back to this morning's assembly, when their eyes had locked briefly, he was very handsome she smiled as she admired his frame from behind. He muttered something which sounded like a foreign word and slammed his fist on a locker, pulling Abby out of her thoughts and causing her to knock her mug off the table. "Shit!" she exclaimed as coffee went everywhere.
Luka swung around immediately, not realising there had been anyone else in the room. He felt his heart miss a beat when he saw who it was. Smiling awkwardly he rushed over to help clean up the mess. "Sorry," he sighed, sitting down at the table opposite Abby, "You caught me at a bad time." His lips formed a small smile as he glanced up into Abby's eyes. "That was Jenny, my superviser and as you can probably tell, we don't really get along." "Don't worry about it, coffee had gone cold anyway!" Abby wryly smiled back. "Blame that on the coffee machine," Luka gestured over to the corner, "it's rubbish." She smiled and nodded her head. "I'm Luka by the way" "I'm Abby" "Pleased to meet you" he smiled and held out his hand. As their hands touched a shiver went down Luka's spine, "Do you fancy coming and getting some proper coffee from across the road? It's the least I can do after ruining your last," he blurted out before his brain would let him stop, blushing madly he looked up into Abby's eyes. He didn't know what was wrong with him, he wasn't 15 anymore, he should be able to handle talking to a pretty women, but this one, for some reason, he couldn't.
She hesitated for a second, thinking about the proposal, until she finally nodded her head and got up. "Sure, let's go." She smiled.
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Post by suzanne on Nov 9, 2008 11:40:02 GMT 10
Nice update!! I like when people write different fics that are not in the hospital!! Keep going, can't wait to see how it goes!!
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Post by lubylover4life on Nov 11, 2008 10:42:04 GMT 10
i love it! the scenario outside the hospital is nice to see for a change. clearly carter's already being a pain in the ass..
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Post by orangecrush on Nov 14, 2008 2:51:51 GMT 10
Luka sighed as he slumped down onto the sofa. Today had been a long day. After coffee with Abby, his day had been full, kids playing up, detentions, cover lessons, he was shattered. Leaning his head back he closed his eyes, a familiar smile playing at his lips. He couldn't stop thinking about her. The conversation had been easy at the coffee house, and Luka had enjoyed being able to sit across from her and stare into her beautiful eyes. He knew nothing about her, yet still seemed so entised. He needed to get to know her better, in all senses of the phrase. Shifting so that he was laying down, Luka pulled off his tie and attempted to get some much needed sleep. Just as he was dosing off, his mobile started ringing. He groaned. Reaching for the coffee table, he looked to see who was calling. Jo. He groaned louder. The girl from last night. This morning. Whichever. Either way, he knew he was going to have to answer, it was only fair.
Clearing his throat he leaned on his elbows and answered the phone. "Hey" "Hi Luka" Silence. "How areyou?" "Yeah, I'm okay thanks, little hungover from last night though" Luka replied, half chuckling. "Oh right yeah. I was just calling to see, umm, well to see if you were free tonight?" She crossed her fingers, hoping he would say yes. "Uh, sure" Luka answered, thinking it was best to tell her that nothing was gonna happen between them in person than over the phone. Jo smiled, "Great, say 7 o clock at the Bar on the corner?" She waited. He hestitated. "Sure," he finally said. "See you there." Hanging up he flopped back onto the sofa and covered his face with his hands. Why didn't he just say no?
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"Matt?" Abby called as she chucked her keys on the table. Her eyes darted to a note that had been left.
Abby, Just popped out to the gym, will be back at 6ish, Be ready to go out we are meeting friends at the Bar on the Corner tonight. Matt xx
She sighed negatively, hating the way that Matt always decided what they did and she never got a say in anything.
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Nov 14, 2008 4:53:17 GMT 10
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Post by suzanne on Nov 14, 2008 8:41:40 GMT 10
Very nice!! Ca't wait to see what happens!! Luka and Abby have to get together!!
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Post by baboune51 on Nov 15, 2008 7:04:09 GMT 10
great start !!!!!!!!
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Post by suzanne on Nov 29, 2008 7:03:11 GMT 10
Please update, I really like this fic and the fact its not set in the hospital makes it more interesting!!
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Post by lubylover09 on Dec 4, 2008 22:11:40 GMT 10
wow please update!!! l love it.. I come to this site every mornign before work and read fics make my day!!!
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Post by orangecrush on Dec 19, 2008 21:51:49 GMT 10
hey everyone my computer broke and i have only just got another one so will be updating soon
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Post by suzanne on Dec 19, 2008 23:20:23 GMT 10
hey everyone my computer broke and i have only just got another one so will be updating soon Glad your gonna update, I wanna see were this story goes!!
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Post by orangecrush on Feb 20, 2009 23:44:06 GMT 10
Sorry for delay! and sorry it's a little short.
Abby aimlessly played with the straw in her empty glass staring around the room. Coming out with Matt had been a mistake. Here she was being left out while he drank and chatted with his friends, and she just sat there not being invited into the conversation at all. Huffing and glaring at Matt, it was then that something in the corner of her eye caught her attention. Glancing up at the door, she saw him. Luka was walking through the door. He was followed closely by a girl that looked somewhat younger than him and they headed for a table in the corner, in line with Abby’s. She ducked her head and tried to look small behind her empty glass, she wasn’t sure why but just looking at him gave her butterflies in her stomach. She had Matt, she didn’t need to be thinking about anyone else. And him seeing her, or them speaking would trigger her mind into things she shouldn’t be thinking about. Matt looked at her questioningly. “You okay?” “Yeah” Abby tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, “ I think I might go outside for a smoke.” “But it’s raining” Matt remarked just as she was about to get up. “Oh” she stated, feeling even more flustered then before. “I’m just going to go to the toilet then.” And with that she got up and rushed to the loos to collect her thoughts. Matt watched her go, shrugged and turned back to his mates, “ She always goes funny like this, hormones!” He grinned and downed the rest of his beer.
Luka leaned back in his chair slightly and sighed as Jo placed her hand on his leg. He didn’t want to be here, with her. She began to stroke his thigh as she sipped on her drink and made small talk. As Luka was half trying to listen and half trying to ignore her hand creeping up his leg to his crotch, he saw a familiar face emerging from the toilets. His heart missed a beat and his stomach did a small flip. As she was walking back to her table, her eyes lifted to look directly into his. He felt his cheeks redden. He smiled and nodded, she smiled and gave a small wave back. Sitting down at a table, a guy who Luka presumed was her boyfriend put his arm around her then looked over to where she had been waving. His grip on Abby’s shoulder tightened protectively, his gaze not moving from Luka’s. He was stupid to have thought she was single, someone as good looking as her. She would never be interested in him. Deflated, he turned to Jo, someone who was interested in him. Leaning into kiss her, he pulled her up and led her out of the pub, taking her back to his seemed like the only way to take his mind off of his troubles right now.
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Post by suzanne on Feb 21, 2009 0:13:25 GMT 10
Glad your back!! Abby needs to dump that idiot and Luka needs to get his act together!! Can't wait to see where you head with this story!! Update again soon!!
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