marie
Countess of Luby
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Post by marie on Aug 2, 2009 7:51:56 GMT 10
Great ! :-)
I like your fanfic
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CharmedOne
Luby Lover
The definition of insanity is doing something over again and expecting a different outcome
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Post by CharmedOne on Aug 8, 2009 23:58:28 GMT 10
Hey, guys! Here is the next chapter. I'm very sorry that it took so long and it's not very good. Special thanks to LindsayMonroe for her help and support.
Here we go
Chapter 12:
It’s morning. 9 o’clock. I lay in bed and I should be at work but I don’t want to go. Well, I think for the first time in my life, I really don’t want to go to work, I mean I love my job and I like my new colleagues but yesterday was horrible. I just want to stay in bed the whole day but alone it’s not the same as with Luka. He’s already gone maybe already struggling with the questions. So I get up and get Joe and myself ready. I call the nanny and leave as she arrives.
Ten minutes later, at the admin desk, it’s the hell that broke loose. Every staff member rushes trough the corridors and shouts medical jargon through the crowd. Damn it! I should have stayed in bed!
I see Luka running towards me. “What the hell is going on?” I ask.
“Good morning back to you” he says sarcastically “Pretty ugly train explosion but we got the criticals under control, all majors and minors got transferred to burn unit and surgery. And you are very late.”
“Yeah, I know. Couldn’t get up after yesterday, just wanted to stay in bed but without you I just feel alone. So I left and came here and wanted to help you with the question detonation.”
“Ah, well, people didn’t have time for asking and if they would have, I wouldn’t have given them an answer because you are better in stuff like this.”
“Well, thank you.” I say and give him a ‘hello’-kiss.
“So you mean the rush hour is over?” I ask. “Yeah, you could say that. But I think there will be some more traumas coming in and the waiting room has also to be cleared.”
“Great so let us fight for the innocent people!” I say laughing and grab some charts.
Luka:
Our shifts are over and I’m very grateful this horrible day finally comes to an end. I leave the lounge and walk to the admin where I see Abby signing charts. I walk to her and ask if she is ready to grab something to eat. She says she is off and heads for the lounge to change.
“You are going home?” someone asks behind me. I turn around and see that Malucci is standing behind me. “No we are going to Moc Dagoo’s to get something to eat.”
“Well, if you wait you could join us, we are planning a celebration because it’s Kathy’s birthday.”
“Ok, we will wait in the ambulance bay.”
“Great, then see you later.”
Abby is walking toward us and we leave the ER. I ask her if it’s ok if we join the others at their party.
“Yeah, sure of course, it would be great! But probably there will be the question detonation.”
“Ugh, probably.”
“But you have to help me, I’m not doing it all alone.” she demands. “Ugh, if that makes you happy, I’ll do everything for you.” She giggles but then stops as the ER doors open and the whole ER staff comes out.
“Guys, are you ready?” Maluccci asks. “Yeah, let’s get the party started.” I say.
Abby:
I feel kind of awkward and can feel the nurses’ glances on my back. Man they’re horrible! It’s someone’s birthday and all they can think of is our relationship.
We are at Moc Dagoo’s and I order a soda for me and a beer for Luka. I go back and everyone starts singing for Kathy. She got a huge cake with burning candles.
She looks so excited and blows out the candles, thanking everyone. She got a couple presents and everyone said that she could make a wish.
“Hmm … let me think …” Kathy says, looking at me and Luka. “I want answers.”
Ugh, I moan, it’s her birthday!
“Ok, then what do you want to know?” I say annoyed. “Everything!” she says. “Could there be a little definition?”
“Well, for how long have you known Dr. Kovac?” “Almost nine years.”
“For how long have you two been married?” “Two and a half years.”
“How old is your son?” “Three years.”
“So your son …” someone says. “Joe”, I correct. “So Joe was born before you got married?” “Yes” I say. It’s getting into an intimate direction. Why do they bother?
“I watched you the whole evening and never saw you drink anything except soda, why is that so?” someone asks.
“Err…” I look at Luka for help. He gets it and answers “Because she never drinks alcohol.” “Ever?” “Ever!”
“How did you meet?” “It was my first day as a med student in the ER.” I say.
“And how did you get together?” “The first or the second time?” Luka asks. “You were two times together?” “Uhm, yes.” “Then, both times.” “First time, we went out on a date.” Luka answers. I look at him and understand that he doesn’t want to tell anybody of the disaster. But he didn’t count in Malucci.
“Ah, you mean that evening you killed that man?” I looked at him with my killer-glance. “Oh, sorry.”
“And the second time we just slept together.” I say. “That’s it. It was a nice evening we gotta go. See you tomorrow. Happy birthday, Kathy.” Luka says.
We get our coats and leave Moc Dagoo’s. “Holy s***! If our relationship would be that interesting, don’t they have their own private life?” I ask. “I don’t know. Actually it was kind of fun.” Luka answers and lays his arm around my waist.
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Post by suzanne on Aug 9, 2009 0:31:04 GMT 10
Nice update!! Poor Abby and Luka having to answer all the questions!! Hope you update again soon!!
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Post by sissa on Aug 9, 2009 2:57:23 GMT 10
“And the second time we just slept together.” true hahaha
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marie
Countess of Luby
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Post by marie on Aug 9, 2009 8:08:58 GMT 10
ah ah ! I smiled when I read that too it's a nice update ! hope we'll get a new one soon
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CharmedOne
Luby Lover
The definition of insanity is doing something over again and expecting a different outcome
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Post by CharmedOne on Aug 20, 2009 16:35:51 GMT 10
So, I added this poll, because I want to know, who's better for Neela, with who you want her to be with...
Need help then I write you another chapter...
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CharmedOne
Luby Lover
The definition of insanity is doing something over again and expecting a different outcome
Posts: 96
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Post by CharmedOne on Oct 17, 2009 3:27:34 GMT 10
Sorry I keep you waiting but I have really no idea how to continue this. I mean, I know the story I want to write but I don't know how to write it.
So should I continue or stop and send everyone who wants to know how it goes on a pm?
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Post by Martine on Oct 17, 2009 6:12:08 GMT 10
Sorry I keep you waiting but I have really no idea how to continue this. I mean, I know the story I want to write but I don't know how to write it. So should I continue or stop and send everyone who wants to know how it goes on a pm? Please don't stop writing. You shouldn't stop because ER is finished. Everyone seems to stop writing lately. Fanfic is the only possibility that's left to get 'new' Luby fixes these days
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Post by sissa on Oct 17, 2009 8:34:29 GMT 10
yeah, keep writting here. Maybe after a while you get how you want to go with this story.
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Post by suzanne on Oct 17, 2009 10:39:31 GMT 10
yeah, keep writting here. Maybe after a while you get how you want to go with this story. I agree you should keep writing!!
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CharmedOne
Luby Lover
The definition of insanity is doing something over again and expecting a different outcome
Posts: 96
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Post by CharmedOne on Oct 18, 2009 19:52:26 GMT 10
I will continue and I know when you want to get a fix the only option is reading or watch dead watched episodes
What I meant is that I know my story line just the problem is English is not my native tongue so sometimes I don't know how to get a sentence right
So I think, the new chapter will be up in about a week
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kia
Duchess of Luby
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Post by kia on Oct 18, 2009 20:06:04 GMT 10
I'm among the people who want toy to go on writing. I like your story, please don't stop.
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CharmedOne
Luby Lover
The definition of insanity is doing something over again and expecting a different outcome
Posts: 96
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Post by CharmedOne on Nov 23, 2009 3:24:05 GMT 10
I know it took long, I got stuck in the middle of this chapter but here it is. It's just a filler chapter but I will write more, I promise. Also I'm thinking about publishing this story on fanfiction.net. And for all those who like NCIS, I will start a story and publish it on fanfiction.net but it will take its time because I have to work out the Tony/Ziva bantering, working relashionship and their personalities.
The story got a new title, hope it fits.
So enjoy!
Chapter 13:
It’s the next day and I have lunch break. I sit in the lounge and dial Neela’s telephone number. At the second ring she picks up.
“Hello?” she is asking. “Hello Neela it’s me, Abby.” “Hey Abby, I’ve called you two times the day before yesterday” “Oh sorry that I didn’t pick up it was a hard night. Joe swallowed Luka’s wedding ring and we had to go to hospital.”
“Oh my god, is he ok?” “Yeah he is alright and Luka’s ring, too.” “I’m glad everyone is ok.” “Yes me too but our secret is not a secret anymore.” “I’m sorry, but perhaps it’s better this way.” “Yeah, maybe you are right. I’m glad it came out like that.”
“So why did you call?” Neela asked. “Well I was thinking, maybe you wanna come and visit us? We have a guest room and I’m sure surgery can disclaim you for a couple of days.”
“Yeah, perhaps it would be better to get away for a short time.” “Great, so when are you coming.” “I have to check the flights, but I’ll call you when I booked.”
“Ok but don’t come before Thursday, I have the kids again.” “Ok well then, see you.” “Bye.” I lay down the phone and exit the lounge to look for Luka. I ask at admin and get to know that he is at the coffee shop. I walk into the ambulance bay and over to the coffee cart.
“Hey”, I greet him. “I talked to Neela and she said that she is excited to come visit us, she just has to look up flights. She told me she would call when everything is settled.”
“Ah, ok. Great, then you have someone who can tell you what happened in County since we left. And I was thinking maybe you can get in contact with Susan again.”
“Yeah, that would be great. Ok, gotta go my break is over.” I say and kiss him before I leave.
The rest of the day went by without any surprises and at 5 p.m. I call it a day and head home. On the drive to our house my phone starts buzzing. I look at the caller I.D. and see that it’s Neela.
“Hey, you found a flight?” I ask her. “Yeah, I will be there in three days at Logan.”
“Fine, we will pick you up then, don’t know if Luka can come but surely me and Joe.”
“Ok, thanks see you then.”
“Ok, bye”
“Bye”
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Post by suzanne on Nov 23, 2009 4:43:38 GMT 10
Woohoo an update!! Soooo glad Neela going to visit!! ;D Hope you update again soon!!
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