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Post by littlegirl on Feb 27, 2009 0:15:14 GMT 10
So funny ;D. I know what it feels like to be surprised like this.
Love your update.
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 27, 2009 3:40:22 GMT 10
it's funny and Luka would protect her ! nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on Feb 27, 2009 9:44:31 GMT 10
Thans guys!! I'm going away for a few days so here's the next chapter before I go!! Chapter 5 The other man helped his friend to his feet. “It’s okay; it’s nice to know my sister is protected so well.” He holds his nose. “I can look at it for you, I’m a doctor.” Luka says. “That’s okay my friend here is a plastic surgeon and he can check it out later. My name is Eric Wyczenski. You must be the guy John told me about. He didn’t tell me you were a doctor. Why are you working here?” “I got fired.” “Kill someone?” The other man asks. “That‘s not funny Mark. I‘m sorry Luka.” Abby says. “Look I have a sister so I understand, really I do. My ex-girlfriend was the one who fired me, after I found her cheating. I just can’t go back and live with my mother, she’s way too controlling. Can you imagine being a man with a curfew, sleeping on juvenile sheet sets? Dude I just can’t do it.” “I think that’s something we call all understand.” She looks at both Eric and Mark as she says it. “Why do you always bring that up? You know that her and I are done.” Eric says. “And I didn’t move back in with my parents, I moved in with your parents and it was only for a couple of months.” Mark says. “All I’m saying is that we’ve all been where Luka is and so we should give him a break, besides I am a big girl Eric. I can take care of myself.” “I know Abby, I’m just worried. I’m your brother, I’m supposed to worry.” “You’re my half brother and I know. I do love you for it.” “I’m worried too.” Mark says. “Thank you. I appreciate it but I should be worried about you two. Eric my friend tells me that you didn’t show up for the blind date I set you up on.” “He’s afraid there is something wrong with her.” Mark says. “I’m not, I just don’t know about a blind date. I’m not ready for that.” Eric admits. “There is nothing wrong with her Eric, she’s a very nice girl.” “That’s code for ugly.” Mark says. “I can’t believe you just said that!” Abby yells. “Uh, I think I’m going to get back to work. Dude, sorry about the nose.”
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 28, 2009 8:18:35 GMT 10
so cute ! great udapte !
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Post by shelby on Mar 1, 2009 0:53:41 GMT 10
Very cute update! Update again soon when you get back!
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Post by suzanne on Mar 2, 2009 6:52:44 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! Chapter 6 Luka walked out of the office and left Mark and Eric alone with Abby. “We’re going to get back to the hospital so Mark can fix my nose. Call me if you need me.” “I will, I promise.” Eric wraps his arms around her, hugging her tightly. He then heads back to the truck. “I’ll be right there Eric.” Mark says. “Is he really okay since she moved in with that Pete guy?” “Yeah, he will be alright. I wanted to ask you something Abby.” “What is it Mark?” “I think we should go out to dinner Friday night….you know like a double date. Eric is never gonna go out with your friend on his own and I thought if we went too, it might make it easier for him. I would understand if you didn’t want to….” “No, I just thought that you were asking me out for a second.” “Me? No! You’re my best friends little sister, he would kill me for even thinking about it. I meant we could both take dates, unless you are not ready for that. We could always go together, you know just because you can trust me. I would be safe. I have known you practically your whole life.” “I think it’s a great Idea.” “You do?” “Yes, Eric needs our help. He’s really missing out on a great girl.” “So did you want to go together or…?” “Mark you don’t have to give me a pity date. I wouldn’t want you to waste a Friday night babysitting me. I‘ll see what I can come up with.” “Oh well let me know. It’s really no problem if you want me to take you.” “Thanks, if I can’t find anyone I’ll call you.” “Oh, okay.” She hugs him and he walks back to the truck.
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Post by shelby on Mar 2, 2009 7:15:25 GMT 10
Luka should go with her! Great update! Glad your back!
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 2, 2009 21:08:41 GMT 10
Why not Luka ! nice udapte !
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Post by littlegirl on Mar 2, 2009 22:45:22 GMT 10
Hope Mark isn't actually in love with her . Nice update and welcome back!!!
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Post by suzanne on Mar 3, 2009 7:17:08 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! Chapter 7 As Mark climbs in the driver’s seat of the truck he sighs. “Did you ask her out?” “Yes, No….kinda….No.” “Oh my god, you’re in love with my sister!” “No I‘m not. I just thought it would be good to get her out.” “So did it work? You know I don‘t want to go on this blind date so it better work!” “Yeah, she’s going to bring a date.” “Then we should be happy she’s getting out, right?” “She’s probably going to go out with some jerk who will only want to take advantage of the fact she has been left by her husband. If that’s what happens, I’m going to have to kill a guy.” Eric laughs. “Don’t laugh; you’re helping me get rid of the body.” Mark says. “I can’t believe you talked me into this. Okay so she’s going to bring a date and I have to meet this friend of hers, so who are you going to bring?” Eric asks. “I’ll find someone. Too bad you didn‘t have another sister.” He smirks “My mother is probably free Friday night…..Or better yet my grandmother’s boyfriend just died and she would just love to get out of the nursing home for a night on the town, she does have an early curfew though so you’d have to skip desert…..” Eric laughs hysterically. “This isn’t funny Eric.” He scowls. “Nope, not funny at all.” He tries to hold the laughter, but eventually starts laughing all over again as they drive down the road towards the hospital.
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Post by shelby on Mar 3, 2009 12:05:31 GMT 10
Haha that was really funny! Great update!! BTW.....I love your new banner and icon!
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 3, 2009 21:17:15 GMT 10
yeah it's very funny ! Mark is in love with Abby ! but not her really nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on Mar 4, 2009 21:15:41 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! Chapter 8 That night when Luka came to the kitchen to collect his meal, he found that Abby had not cooked a meal. Instead she was covered in flour. Several muffin tins had cluttered the countertops and batches of muffins covered the kitchen table. She was frantically mixing the ingredients in the clear glass mixing bowl that sat on the island in front of her. Her hair was pulled back into a loose ponytail. The black t-shirt she wore was partially covered by an apron that read ‘Kiss the Cook’. Her shorts fit her snugly; they were what he guessed to be her pyjamas. Red with little black hearts on them. In the week he had been there he suspected that she was not at all modest. He had seen her in as little as a sleeveless top and her panties when she walked around her home at night. Maybe she just wasn’t used to having someone else around. If you asked him, she should never wear clothes with a body like that. He tried not to notice, he needed to keep this job for a while at least until he could get his foot in the door somewhere that his ex had not threatened to have anyone that hired him, thrown out on their ass. He leaned against the door frame as he watched her pour the batter. He didn’t want to frighten her so he cleared his throat to let her know she was not alone. “Oh, hey Luka. Do you like muffins?” “Yeah, but I don’t think I can eat all these by myself.” He joked. She dropped the mixing bowl down to the countertop with a loud thud. “Oh my god…..I’m sorry, I didn’t make anything for dinner!” She began to sob. “It’s okay, I love muffins.” He hoped it would calm her down but she only cried harder. Sorry it's so short, will have more later, got interrupted!!
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 4, 2009 22:37:01 GMT 10
it's really funny I love it , your 're really good writer
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Post by shelby on Mar 5, 2009 11:04:03 GMT 10
Hahaaa...very funny! Why was Abby crying though? Nice update!
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