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Post by Martine on Jan 26, 2010 7:08:39 GMT 10
This reminds me of the movie 'Ghost'. God I cried when I saw that Look forward to your next update !
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Post by baboune51 on Jan 26, 2010 7:59:34 GMT 10
I hope Abby is giong to wake up
nice udapte
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Post by suzanne on Jan 26, 2010 21:45:04 GMT 10
Hope Abby wakes up soon!! Looking forward to reading more! ;D
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Jan 26, 2010 21:58:09 GMT 10
Wake upppp!!!!!!
Let abby be ok
Luka and joe needs her !!
Love it
Update soon !!
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Jessica Kovac Andrade de Oliveira
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Post by jehkovac on Jan 27, 2010 3:22:48 GMT 10
I've never watched 'Ghost'. Is it good? I should watch it, it's a classic! Update coming soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on Jan 30, 2010 19:24:20 GMT 10
yeah it's good !
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Post by jehkovac on Feb 3, 2010 10:42:46 GMT 10
Hi! Well I'm going to travel this weekend and be back tuesday. I`m sorry I still don't have an update, I got stuck, but I'll try to update when I come back. Hopefully my mind will be more relaxed and I'll continue writing. Sorry again, and thanks for the reviews!
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 4, 2010 21:13:02 GMT 10
ok good Travel jehkovac
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Post by jehkovac on Feb 25, 2010 9:30:43 GMT 10
Hi! My travel was a little longer than I imagined!! hehe I'll have an update ready tonight or tomorrow!! ^^
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Post by jehkovac on Feb 26, 2010 10:48:40 GMT 10
hello ;D A little bit more!! ------------
“Hi Luka.” As soon as he got out of the elevator Dubenko went to talk to him. “Is there something wrong, Lucian?” “No, I just wanted to tell you that David Kollwitz called and said that he would be able to come here earlier.” Lucian gives a little smile. “How earlier?” “2 days from now.” Luka frowns. It’s too soon. “Luka, I really hope that I’m wrong this time, but I don’t think he will give a different prognostic. I love Abby and I hate not being able to help her.” Luka looks at Dubenko e put his hand on Lucian shoulders. “I just need more time. Maybe she just needs more time to heal.” He smiles sadly and starts walking again. Luka look at his side, but Abby isn’t there anymore. He sees her going in direction of her body’s room, she looked like an angel floating in front of his eyes.
“Abby?” “Oh my god, that’s me.” She looks her body up and down without believing. How could this have happened? “What are we going to do?” Abby looks at Luka and see the love in his eyes. “I don’t really know. Why don’t you try to get back in your body?” Abby nod and lie on her body. For a second Luka thought it had worked, that body and soul were together again, but then her ghost hand passed trough it. “This isn’t working… It’s like I’m not connected to it anymore.” Abby get up beating her lower lip and Luka remembers all the times she did it nervously. “I have one idea, close your eyes.” She was going to argue, but she sees the kindness in his eyes. With her eyes closed she waits for something to happen, until she feels something. Something was touching her lips. The feeling she dreamed about filled her; A feeling of love, of being complete. When the sensation was gone she open her eyes and sees Luka backing off her body and trying to adjust Joe on his arms and not wake him. “Did you feel that?” He asks looking at her. “Yeah.” She says almost out of air, feeling her heart beat fast on her chest. “That means you and your body are still connected.” He smiles and so does she. The problem wasn’t solved yet, but this gave then hope. “Mommy.” Joe wakes and put his arms to his mother’s body on the bed. “Yeah that’s mommy.” Luka puts his little baby on the bed beside his mother. “Mommy is sleeping.” Joe put his hand on Abby’s saying. “Wake mommy.” Abby’s eyes started to fill with tears and so does Luka’s. Their son start to cry and Luka picks him up, talking to him in Croatian trying to make him stop crying. He looks at Abby and sees her looking down, trying to hide her tears. “Don’t cry Abby, please, we are going to solve this.” She looks up at him and the hurt on her face breaks Luka’s heart in pieces. In a impulse luka tries to clean her tears, but his hands passes through her. “I’m sorry.” “Don’t worry, I think I’m going to have to get used to it anyway.” She cleans her own tears and laugh sadly. “Don’t say that. We’ll figure something out.” He smiles trying to pass to her some confidence, even if he was as afraid as her. “I have to go to work, do you want me to take you home before I go?” “I think I want to stay here, with my body. I’ll meet you later.”
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Post by suzanne on Feb 26, 2010 21:21:15 GMT 10
Nice update!! ;D Looking forward to what happens next!!
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Post by niknik on Feb 28, 2010 3:11:43 GMT 10
glad you updated =)
Abby ('s body) needa wake up...
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Post by jehkovac on Mar 3, 2010 13:50:34 GMT 10
;D Another update! -------------------------
What must she wait for life? Be a transparent soul walking beyond the living and watching life go by? Watch herself in a hospital bed lifeless while her son grow without its mother until her husband move on? Luka, how could she feel her heart skip a beat when thinking about him? Or when remembering the feeling of his lips on hers feel the hair behind her neck stand up? How could she love this almost unknown man to her? She didn’t remember her life before the coma, just pieces of it. She felt like a complete stranger while looking down at her body, Who was she? How was her life? She tried hard to remember. Even if it was bad, even remember her darkest moments. She wanted to end this silent in her mind. When searching for a familiar sound, a moment, it felt like walking into a cave. The further she went the darkest it would get. And in this deep cave she would find nothing, only silence and darkness. She couldn’t remember anything , but somehow this endless search in her head made the feeling she felt for these strangers have a meaning. It was hope. She felt connected to them, not because she shared a life with them, but because in her heart she felt them, even if they were not in her memory anymore, even if she wasn’t there anymore.
The sound of the door opening took her out of her thoughts. A women entered the room. She was in front of Abby, but she only saw past her, through her. Why was he the only one that could see her? She kept asking herself that, but I knew it was not my duty to answer, she had to find out on her own. The woman walked to a chair beside the bed and sat there staring at Abby’s body. She felt that so familiar feeling, but couldn’t really recognize it. She stared at this woman trying to discover who she was, from where she knew her. And the situation stayed like this for some minutes. The only sounds in the room were the beeps of the monitors and their breathing sound. A tear went down the strangers face and between sobs she started her monologue. “Oh Abby, I wish I was in your place. A mother should never see her child go before her.”
The realization that she was her mother hit Abby hard. Suddenly she wasn’t in that room anymore; She was in a store running in the direction of her mother smiling. “Mommy, can you buy me an ice cream??” Maggie looked down to her little girl and smiling answered: “Of course sweet. Eddie can you get Abby an ice cream.” “My little Abigail wants some ice cream, huh?” Eddie picked her up tickling her. “HAHAHA. Stop daddy, stop it!”
“Daddy don’t go, where is daddy going?” “We don’t need him. That prick.” “I didn’t choose to be sick.” ‘”You never tried to get better.” “I can’t make things different.” “That’s right, you can‘t. So now just go home.”
“Something happened in that ICU room, I realized… I don’t wanna die… and more than that, I don’t want my little girl watch me die, I can’t do that to you not ever. That’s what I wanted to tell you today.”
“Abby! You have a lot of great qualities, but optimism is not one of them.” “Whose fault is that?” “Yeah. Alright. I did not create a good environment for a child to grow up believing things would work out. But you're not a child any longer. You're the mother now. And that baby down there needs you to believe he's going to be okay.” “I'm trying! I am really, really trying! I'm trying!”
“You don’t have to go today, you know.” “You’ll be fine.” “Mom…” “I love you.”
Memories started to fill her mind and she felt dizzy for a second. Her mother was in front of her, holding her hand and crying. She felt her heart ache. For the good and bad moments she was her mother and seeing her there crying hurt. “I know I wasn’t the best mother, but I love you sweet. I love more than anything.” I love you too mom. How much she wanted to say these words one more time to her. They had been through so much their entire life, but they always loved each other. Everything they overcame lead them to this life, to who they were, for good or bad. And this love they shared was stronger than anything, even if they denied. “Listen I talked to doctor Dubenko and he said what you wanted, if in this situation.” Her cries got harder, but she breathed deeply so she could continue. “I don’t agr..agree with your decision, but being you last request… I…I…will do it. Luka was against, but after a while he accepted. We are all so sad, but we are going to let you rest in piece.” She continued to cry hard. “Wait, what do you mean let me rest? I’m here mom. Are you going to turn off the machines? You can’t do that Maggie, you can’t. I don’t want it, I want to live. I…” I felt sorry for her. Watching her try to talk to her mother, but she couldn’t hear or see it. I didn’t follow her going out of the room, she need to think a little. I would meet her later, when the time comes. She would know me eventually, we would go to a ride without coming back. Why didn’t I take her already? Because her feelings were still warming my heart. Seeing through her eyes and feeling through her heart made feel like a human. The love she felt for that man made something that was asleep inside of me wake. And that beat I could still hear, made me deaf to the sound of my darkness.
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Post by Martine on Mar 3, 2010 20:00:46 GMT 10
Love the 'memories'. Great update !
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 3, 2010 21:16:35 GMT 10
I hope Abby is going to re-turn in her body end be happy with Luka and Joe
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