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Post by suzanne on Aug 30, 2009 8:27:54 GMT 10
So here's my new story!! It's set a few years after "Biggest Mistake". Let me know what you guys think, if I should continue the story etc!!
My Biggest Deception Summary: Set after "Biggest Mistake," Will Luka and Abby's family be torn apart when a big secret is revealed?
Disclaimer: I don't own ER or any of the characters. Chapter 1 “Abby,” Luka whispered in his wife’s ear as she slept soundly. He wrapped his arms around her and tried again, “Abby, are you awake?” Abby muttered something unrecognizable and shifted under his arms. “Ab,” Luka tried again. He began kissing her cheek. “Come on, Abby.” “Huh?” Abby asked as she kept her eyes shut. “What’s the matter?” She dug herself deeper into the mattress and under the covers. “Nothings the matter, come on, Abby, wake up,” he continued to kiss her, as his lips traced all over her face. “Okay,” she whispered, as she turned her face so that her lips met his. “So, why am I awake?” “Well, I was thinking….” Abby sat up and looked at her bedside clock. “Wait,” she said mid yawn. “You’re telling me that you woke me up at 6:30 in the morning, on a Saturday, when we don’t have to work, both kids are still in bed, and you woke me up because you were thinking?” Abby squinted her eyes as she waited for an explanation. Abby did not like to be woken up on her days off and especially not if the kids were still sleeping. These were precious sleeping hours. “Well,” Luka said as he pulled Abby back down on the bed. He began kissing her lightly down her neck. “I was thinking, you know the kids are sleeping…” “Yeah,” Abby replied weakly as she brought her hands under Luka’s shirt, pulling him closer to her. “And, they are getting older,” Luka continued, as he began unbuttoning Abby’s pyjama top. “Uh huh,” Abby agreed. She pulled Luka’s shirt off over his head and began kissing his shoulders. “Well,” Luka went on, as he pulled on the string of Abby’s pants, “I was thinking that we should have another baby.”
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marie
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Post by marie on Aug 30, 2009 18:18:38 GMT 10
that's a great start !!
I'm wondering how abby"s gonna react...
update ;-)
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Post by daniella on Aug 30, 2009 21:14:16 GMT 10
Great start... curious to know what happen next... PS: Where is the other story, Biggest Mistake... I look, but cound't finding it...
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Post by suzanne on Aug 30, 2009 21:27:35 GMT 10
Great start... curious to know what happen next... PS: Where is the other story, Biggest Mistake... I look, but cound't finding it... It's on page 2 of the fics!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Aug 30, 2009 21:53:55 GMT 10
I love it !
Keep going!
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Post by daniella on Aug 30, 2009 23:42:52 GMT 10
Thanks... I saw it and I remembered it... I'm looking foward to see how this storydelevops...
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Post by suzanne on Aug 31, 2009 3:14:58 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! Here's the next chapter!! Chapter 2 Abby stopped kissing Luka immediately and her eyes popped wide open as she pushed Luka off of her. “You what!?” Abby said in a hushed yell. “Are you kidding me? Seriously?!” “Well, yeah,” he told her sitting up. “Luke’s six and Lexy’s five. They are getting older and I think we’re ready for another baby,” he explained. Abby began to chuckle as if what he was saying was completely ridiculous. She shook her head in quick swift motions before finally speaking up, “Exactly!” she exclaimed. “We just figured everything out. We finally got everything how we wanted it. They both sleep through the night, there are no more diapers, we have the schedule figured out, and after it literally took us six years to get everything together, you want us to start all over again?” “But it’s a baby,” Luka said with a smile. “They’re small, and precious. Don’t you miss when Luke and Lexy were babies?” “Sometimes, but not all of the time. I am actually enjoying their independence. And aren’t you forgetting Lexy? Come on Luka. Lexy was the worst baby. She cried all of the time, and she always had to be held. Not to mention how long it took us to get her to sleep back in her own bed. No, no babies.” “Ab’s,” Luka said in defeat, realizing that he was losing this argument. “Okay, but will you think about it?” “I guess,” Abby said. She lay back down and pulled the covers over her head. “I’m going back to sleep.” Luka sighed and lay back down next to Abby. “Mommy! Daddy! Mommy! Daddy!” Abby and Luka jumped up at Lexy’s screams. Abby looked over at Luka. “Well, so much for more sleep,” she said before heading toward Lexy’s room. Lexy was sitting up in her bed with tears cascading down her face. Abby pulled her small daughter into her lap, and Luka took a seat next to them. Lexy was a tiny little girl, who was almost the exact replica of her mother other than her hair. Her hair was dark and extremely thick. People were always commenting on Lexy’s beautiful hair. “What happened baby?” Luka asked his little girl. Lexy sniffled and picked her head up off of her mother’s shoulder. “I had a bad dream,” she explained, as Abby rubbed her daughter’s back. “What was it about?” Abby asked her. “I dreamed that someone wanted to take Luke away from us. He said that he didn’t belong to us.”
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marie
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Post by marie on Aug 31, 2009 3:36:25 GMT 10
oh oh !
Is this bad dream gonna come true ?
update soon !
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Post by lubyfan4ever on Aug 31, 2009 4:43:05 GMT 10
Oh, I didn't expect that You can't do that, no
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Post by Martine on Aug 31, 2009 6:40:11 GMT 10
You got me interested again
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Post by baboune51 on Aug 31, 2009 20:54:53 GMT 10
great start
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Post by suzanne on Aug 31, 2009 21:02:19 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! Here's the next chapter. The Italics are a dream or flashback!! Chapter 3 Jake could feel the rush of alcohol filling his system. He knew that what he was doing was wrong. He was married. But at the moment it didn’t matter, although in the back of the mind he knew it would tomorrow. As he kissed his best friend, all thoughts were erased from his mind. She helped him pull of her shirt before he helped her take off his. And before he knew it, they were entangled together. Sinning and not caring.
He passed out.
When he awoke, he saw her lying next to him. Completely nude. He rubbed his groggy eyes and noticed a picture sitting on the table next to the bed. He went to pick it up. In the frame was a picture of Luke. Then oddly, it morphed into a picture of him. Then back to Luke again. Jake dropped the picture and jerked up.“Jake?” Kelly asked as she looked at her husband who was sitting up in the bed breathing heavily. “Are you okay?” She pulled him into an embrace and set her chin on his shoulder. “Yeah,” he whispered, “I just had a weird dream is all.” “Do you want to talk about it?” “No, no,” he told her giving her a false smile. “I’m just fine.” He laid back down, remaining in his embrace. However, he couldn’t get the dream out of his head. It wasn’t the first time that he had had a dream similar to that one, but he hadn’t had that dream in years. It always seemed so familiar, and yet he didn’t know why. He wasn’t about to tell Kelly about these dreams, because she would tell him that he had underlying feelings for Abby. Which he didn’t. The only odd thing about his dream this time was the picture of Luke. Luke had never been apart of this dream before. He shrugged away his thoughts and turned to Kelly. “Well, I guess it’s time to get up for work now.” Back at the Kovac’s“Oh, sweetie, it was only a dream,” Abby told her small daughter as she rocked her back and forth and rubbed her back. Then Abby shot her eyes at Luka. “This is all your fault,” she informed him. He looked at her curiously for a reason. He couldn’t figure out how this could possibly be his fault. “You let her watch that movie about the little boy that was kidnapped. I told you that it would freak her out,” she stated in a hushed tone, as she continued to rock. “Oh,” Luka finally said. “Sorry. But it’s okay now, Tink. It was only a dream, baby.”
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Aug 31, 2009 22:47:33 GMT 10
Ohh I love it.
Don't let enything bad happen to enyone, ok ? ;D
Update soon
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marie
Countess of Luby
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Post by marie on Sept 1, 2009 19:50:25 GMT 10
jake's gonna figure everything out, isn't he ?! update soon !!
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Post by baboune51 on Sept 1, 2009 20:09:19 GMT 10
I hope , That Luke is going to stay with Abby and Luka ;D nice udapte !
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