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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Nov 8, 2009 3:47:04 GMT 10
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Post by LindsayMonroe on Nov 9, 2009 0:54:03 GMT 10
Thanks for all your comments this is a short one I will post a longer one tomorrow
Chapter 4:
Luka slowly opened his eyes. He couldn’t remember where he was but suddenly images came back. He and Abby had talked until 6 in the morning then she fell asleep in his lap.
He remembered how he carried her to the bedroom and then went back to the living room to sleep on the couch.
Now it was 11 but he couldn’t hear any sound form Abby’s room. He stood up and went to the kitchen to make some fresh coffee.. He poured some coffee into a mug when he heard the bedroom door being opened.
He turned around and saw Abby with her long brown curls tied in a ponytail and a blanket wrapped around her. ‘I smell coffee’ she said with a smile ‘I thought I’d make some before I leave.’ He gave her a mug.
‘Thanks. Wanna eat something?’ ‘I can’t I’m on in tow hours and I have to go home before my shift starts.’ Oh sure’ ‘But you could come over during my break and we could grab something to eat.’
‘I don’t think I’m ready to go there yet.’ ‘Ok then I’ll call you when my shift is over. Pherhaps we can go out for dinner.’ ‘I’d like that.’ ‘Well then see you later.’ ‘Bye Luka and thank you for coming over again.’ ‘Anytime’ with this words he went out of the door.
As Luka reached his apartment he thought about the night he spent with Abby. He hadn’t had so much fun in weeks and he totally forgot about his problems with Sam. He opened the door and went in.
‘Were you at Abby’s?’he heard a well known voice saying. He sighed and turned around to see Sam sitting in the living room ‘Hey Sam’ ‘I asked you something’ ‘Yes I was...’
‘And what did you both do?’ she yelled ‘We talked’ ‘Yeah sure Luka I’m not blind you still love her I can see it the way you look at her.’
‘You’re just jealous. She’s my best friend and I can talk with her better than with you. You know what Sam I’m tired of your jealousy and your attitude. I don’t want this anymore.’ He shouted
‘So that’s it you want me to move out.’ ‘Yes I want you to move out.’ ‘Ok we’ll be out of here by tonight.’ With this words she stormed out of the apartment. Luka sat down and felt relief washing over him...
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Post by suzanne on Nov 9, 2009 3:41:47 GMT 10
Yay Sam's moving out!! Can't wait for the next update!! ;D
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Post by baboune51 on Nov 9, 2009 6:59:53 GMT 10
wow , I love this new story
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Nov 9, 2009 16:01:35 GMT 10
Yes
Hihihih
Love it , update soon again !! ;D ;D
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Post by LindsayMonroe on Nov 9, 2009 22:06:51 GMT 10
Chapter 5:
Luka went out of the ER. He was tired and had a hard shift. Sam was angry at him and refused to work with him. Every now and then he saw her glancing angrily at him.
Luka had called Abby during his break and they decided to order something from the chinese. When he arrived at Abby’s apartment she opened the door for him and smiled.
‘Hey’ ‘Hey. You look tired’ ‘It’s been a hard shift I think I treated like 20 people the same time and then Sam didn’t want to work with me.’ ‘She didn’t want to work with you?’ Abby asked as she got two plates from the kitchen.
‘Yeah we broke up this morning and I threw her out of my apartment.’ ‘Oh Luka I’m sorry’ ‘You don’t have to be. I’m kinda reliefed.’
They talked for hours about Sam, the hospital and Neela driving Abby mad. As they washed the dishes Luka looked at Abby. Sam was right he still had feelings for her but was it love?
‘What’ Abby asked as she saw Luka staring at her. ‘Nothing I just thought how beautiful you are.’ Abby’s cheeks turned red and she contiued to wash the dishes pretending she didn’t hear what Luka just said.
They stayed silent for a few minutes when Abby said ‘Do you sometimes think how life would be if we didn’t break up? I mean would we be mariied, where would we live?’
‘I think we would be married, live in a house with a garden and a white fence and we’d have four chidren.’
‘Four?’ Abby asked disbeliefing ‘Yes two boys and two girls.’ ‘There’s no way I’m gonna pop four children out of me.’ ‘Why not?’ ‘Because that would mean four times I’d be big as a whale and four times I’d have incredible pain during pushing them out...’
Abby contiued complainig about the troubles pregnant women have. Suddenly Luka felt the desire to kiss her. ‘Abby’ he said as she still complained about pregnancies. ‘Yeah?’ ‘Could you just shut up for a moment.’ ‘Why’ ‘So I can kiss you’
With this words he leant towards her and crushed his lips against hers. They were lost in a sweet but passionate kiss for something that seemed like eternity.
As they parted Abby looked into Luka’s eyes and asked ‘Do you really think we should be doing this?’ ‘I do’ and with this words he picked her up and carried her towards the bedroom.
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Post by suzanne on Nov 9, 2009 22:30:28 GMT 10
Nice update!! So glad he finally kissed her!! Looking forward to the next update!! ;D
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Nov 10, 2009 0:09:01 GMT 10
Yes!!! yes!!! yes!!!
They kissed !!!!!!'
Update again soonnn!!!
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Post by Martine on Nov 10, 2009 3:29:46 GMT 10
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Post by baboune51 on Nov 10, 2009 20:58:35 GMT 10
yeah they kissed !!! nice udapte
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Post by LindsayMonroe on Nov 11, 2009 5:05:47 GMT 10
Here's a long one enjoy it
Chapter 6:
Abby slowly opened her eyes. The sun shone through the window and an arm was wrapped around her body. She turned around and was surprised to see a naked man lying next to her.
But then images came back. She remembered how she made love with Luka and had to smile at that memory. She could still feel where Luka’s lips touched her skin.
As she looked at him again she saw that he was now awake too. ‘good morning’ he said and kissed her on the lips softly. ‘Hey’ Abby said as they parted. Luka stood up and put on his shorts.
‘I’ll go, make some coffee’ ‘I’ll be right there I think we need to talk.’ Abby put on some clothes and followed Luka into the kitchen. ‘Thanks’ she said as he gave her a mug with her favourite black liquid.
‘Well...’she started but Luka interrupted her ‘Listen Abby I know what you are going to say but I want you to know that I don’t regret anything and I’m glad that this happened.’ ‘I was about to say the same.’ Abby said smiling
‘So you think we should continue doing what we did last night? ‘Yeah I think so. I do like you very much but I want this to be a secret at least for while. I don’t want to be the ER’s slut or the reason why Sam and you broke up.’ ‘So this means we could go to the bedroom now and have some fun?’ he said with an irresistable smile
‘I guess so’ Abby said and took his hand. They kissed each other passionately and moved towards the bedroom. Abby was about to pull of Luka’s shirt when she heard the front door being opened.
‘Oh shit’ she whispered ‘It’s Neela. If she kows it the whole hospital will know it in less than 24 hours.’ ‘And what shall we do now?’ Luka asked with an unbuttoned shirt distracting Abby with his bare chest
‘You have to hide yourslef’ ‘Where’ he asked disbelieving ‘Under the bed’ ‘You are kidding, right?’ ‘No I’m not get down there now.’ Abby said threatingly. Luka tried to get himself under the bed. ‘You have to make youreslef thin’ she said as she pushed him under the bed.’ ‘I’m trying’
‘I’ll go out and distract Neela you make yourself invisible’ Abby said and went out of the room. She saw Neela standing in the kitchen making some tea for herself. ‘Hey’ Abby said ‘Hey Ithought you’d still sleep ‘No I couldn’t sleep’ Abby lied ‘You look tired’
‘Yeah that jerk Morris drove me crazy all night long. I think I’ll just take a quick shower and then go to bed’ ‘Yeah do that.I think I’ll take a walk get some fresh air, you know’ Abby said as she pushed her towards the bathroom
‘Ok so I’ll see you later’ Neela said surprised ad shut ther door behind her. Abby ran to her bed and looked under it but there was no Luka.
‘Luka’ she whispered ‘I’m in here she heard his voice coming from her closet. Abby surpressed a smile and opened the doors for hom. ‘Put you clothes on we need to get out of here before Neela is finished.’
Luka and Abby walked out of her apartment and giggled like teenagers. ‘You really have to vacuum under your bed.’ Abby gave him a light slap ‘You were the horny one’ ‘That’s not true but I thought we could finsh what we started in my apartment.’ He said smiling mischievous...
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Post by suus on Nov 11, 2009 7:14:54 GMT 10
Wow you're updating fast, I like that. Thanks again for the update, I really like your story!
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Post by suzanne on Nov 11, 2009 8:48:51 GMT 10
Nice update!! Glad there going to keep seeing each other!! Update again soon!! ;D
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Post by baboune51 on Nov 11, 2009 20:58:24 GMT 10
Luka it is to hide in the cupboard great udapte
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Post by Martine on Nov 11, 2009 22:12:40 GMT 10
I wish there would have been a scene like this on ER
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