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Jan 15, 2010 21:42:28 GMT 10
Post by daniella on Jan 15, 2010 21:42:28 GMT 10
I thought very strongly before doing this stroy in english... it was an idea I had while reading an X - Files story...
It's going to take a while, but it's the story, so bare with me here... it's kind of different, but a luby story...
plot: Luka is very sick and not out of the woods...
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Chapter 1: Sick...
Luka’s apartment 8:58 AM
Luka walked slowly on the corridor of his apartment, feeling the walls to avoid falling… he had a very strong headache and couldn’t open his eyes right… his balance was compromised and his was tired of walking…
The only times he had headaches like this were when he drank and had hangovers afterwards… and he had drank one beer last night, but… it wasn’t enough to give him a hangover… this was somewhat different… his head was throbbing and his whole body ached too…
Arriving into the bathroom, after a few minutes, he turned on the lights, but regretted it right away… muttering something in Croatian, he closed his eyes… they were hurting, sensitive to light… even if he was a doctor, he couldn’t identify what it was… the pain was so strong that he couldn’t think…
Turning off the lights, he opened his eyes a little and walked carefully to the medicine cabinet, located over the sink… he rested there for a few seconds… he closed his eyes again and sighed… firming himself, he opened his eyes and the cabinet, looking through the medicines… finding some advil, he put three in his hand, taking it with a glass of water…
Deciding to go back to his room, Luka exited the bathroom and slowly, made the journey back to his room… it seemed that the medicine would have a quickly effect and his head got better a little when he got back…
In the bedroom, he laid down on the bed slowly and covered himself…
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Dani
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Djed
Jan 15, 2010 23:21:53 GMT 10
Post by suzanne on Jan 15, 2010 23:21:53 GMT 10
Nice start Dani!! Looking forward to reading more!! ;D
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Djed
Jan 16, 2010 6:07:48 GMT 10
Post by baboune51 on Jan 16, 2010 6:07:48 GMT 10
great star
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justcala
Countess of Luby
Penny for your thoughts...
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Djed
Jan 16, 2010 11:27:27 GMT 10
Post by justcala on Jan 16, 2010 11:27:27 GMT 10
;D Nice start I'm wondering what will happen next
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Djed
Jan 17, 2010 10:58:38 GMT 10
Post by daniella on Jan 17, 2010 10:58:38 GMT 10
Hey girls... I'm updating because I'm going to do a little trip tomorrow and goig to be back in a week, so... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 2: Worry 1... County Hospital 8:02 AM Abby sighed while exiting the lounge, going into the reception area… everyone was busy, so she just saw what they had in the board… ‘Abby?’ called Susan. She turned to the other doctor. ‘Did you see Luka?’ Abby furrowed her eyebrows. ‘Just last night... I met him at Ike's and I let him on his apartment…’ she said. ‘Why?’ Last night, she knew her boyfriend wasn’t feeling well, so she took him home… when they arrived at his apartment, she took him directly to bed… she wanted to take care of him, but he didn’t let and prohibited her of sleeping at his couch too… so, yesterday, she slept alone, in her apartment… ‘Kerry, him and I had a meeting before our shift, but he didn’t appear…’ said Susan, seriously, while approaching her with a few charts in hand… ‘He didn’t show?’ she asked, starting to get worried… she knew this meeting was important to Susan, because she needed to spent more time with her baby boy and she wasn’t standing so much work… Susan denied… ‘Well, he wasn’t feeling well last night... so I took him home quickly… do you think something happened?’ said Abby, approaching the phone in the reception. ‘I’m going to call him…’ ‘Do that, because he should be here at this hour…' said Susan, letting her side. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Djed
Jan 17, 2010 20:59:08 GMT 10
Post by suzanne on Jan 17, 2010 20:59:08 GMT 10
Hope Luka is ok!! Enjoy your trip, look forward to an update when you get back!! ;D ;D
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Djed
Jan 17, 2010 22:22:53 GMT 10
Post by baboune51 on Jan 17, 2010 22:22:53 GMT 10
I hope luka 's ok too nice uadapte
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Djed
Jan 24, 2010 4:02:39 GMT 10
Post by daniella on Jan 24, 2010 4:02:39 GMT 10
I'm back... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 3: Worry 2... Luka’s apartment Luka groaned and opened his eyes a little when he heard the telephone beside his bed ring… he didn’t know for how long he was laying there, on his bed, but his body and mainly his head and neck still hurt… he felt feverish and he was shivering… So, he let the answer machine in the living room pick it up… but soon, his cell phone rang… he knew it was Abby… ‘Luka? Pick up, please… I want to know if you’re ok…’ she said , over the phone, concerned. 'Luka?' X ~ X ~ X County General Same time: Abby hang up the phone, now more worried than never with Luka… what was going on? Luka always answered his phone or cell phone… She looked thoughtfully to the phone… she wanted to go over there, to see what was happening, but she needed to talk to Susan first… ‘Jerry, where’s Susan?’ she asked. ‘Outside, waiting for a trauma…’ he said, pointing to the sliding doors that separate the waiting room and the reception. As if reading her mind, Susan showed making CPR on a patient and the doors opened as they entered… but before Abby could say something, Susan called: ‘Abby, I need you…’ XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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kia
Duchess of Luby
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Djed
Jan 24, 2010 4:48:02 GMT 10
Post by kia on Jan 24, 2010 4:48:02 GMT 10
I'm reading your story end enjoying it. Abby has to go to see Luka now!
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Djed
Jan 24, 2010 6:50:08 GMT 10
Post by suzanne on Jan 24, 2010 6:50:08 GMT 10
Totally agree, Abby has to go make sure he's ok!! Update soon! ;D
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Djed
Jan 25, 2010 21:44:36 GMT 10
Post by daniella on Jan 25, 2010 21:44:36 GMT 10
Hey... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 4: Worry 3 ‘The pressure has dropped…’ said the nurse, reading the monitors to Susan. ‘Sh@t… ‘Susan said, starting CPR again. ‘We’re losing him… let’s entubate…’ This situation made Abby more worried… she knew she had to go to find what’s happening to Luka… ‘Abby, tube now…’ said Susan. ‘I – I have to go…’ said Abby, taking off her latex gloves. ‘Abby…’ said Susan when Abby left the trauma room in a hurry. ‘D@mn...’ Abby ran through the corridor, taking off her lab coat and throwing it in a gurney… going quickly to the lounge, not caring about the looks she was receiving… once there, she walked quickly to her locker and opened it to pick her purse, but it fell to the floor, making the things inside spread to the grond… ‘Sh@t…’ she murmured, kneeling down to pick up her stuff. The lounge door opened, but she didn´t look to see who was it… ‘Abby?’ asked Carter. ‘Is everything all right?’ ‘I need to go to Luka’s apartment…’ she said, finishing pick her things and getting up afterwards. ‘Now?’ asked John. ‘Why?’ Abby just looked at him and he saw that she was distressed and frightened and John knew it was urgent… After their fantastic history, Luka, she and him became friends… so, John just walked to his locker, hung his lab coat and picked the keys for his jeep… ‘Ok…’ he said. ‘I’ll take you…’ XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Jan 25, 2010 22:27:04 GMT 10
Post by suzanne on Jan 25, 2010 22:27:04 GMT 10
Hope Luka is going to be ok and they get there before something happens to him!! Update again soon!! ;D ;D
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kia
Duchess of Luby
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Djed
Jan 26, 2010 5:35:36 GMT 10
Post by kia on Jan 26, 2010 5:35:36 GMT 10
I know Abby's moving as fast as she can, but she seems so slow! RUN, ABBY RUN! Good update, Dani.
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Djed
Jan 26, 2010 7:52:50 GMT 10
Post by baboune51 on Jan 26, 2010 7:52:50 GMT 10
I hope , Luka is giong better
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Djed
Jan 27, 2010 10:57:26 GMT 10
Post by daniella on Jan 27, 2010 10:57:26 GMT 10
Hey... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 5: Found... Twenty minutes later: Abby made her way up to Luka’s apartment, climbing the steps two by two… John was behind her, climbing slowly… he could see how she was nervous… Looking and finding the key of the apartment on her purse, she looked at him as she opened the door quickly… ‘Luka?’ she called, without receiving any answer. She entered first and looked around the empty first floor. John closed the door as Abby went upstairs quickly… X ~ X ~ X Arriving on the second floor, Abby went directly to the bedroom… slowly, she sighed and opened the door… she saw Luka laid on the bed, bellow the covers… ‘Luka?’ she called again… Her only answer was a small whimper… She quickly walked to the bed and saw that his eyes were closed and his body was stiff, as if he was in pain… she sat on the bed and put her hand on his forehead… he was burning from the fever and his hair was soaked from sweat… ‘Luka, can you her me?’ she asked, realizing the symptoms. ‘Luka?’ He just whimpered again… ‘John…’ she yelled, still passing her hand on Luka’s face… Seconds later, Carter appeared at the bedroom door to find Abby pulling the covers from Luka… ‘What?’ he asked. ‘Call 911…’ she said, desperation clear in her voice. ‘Now…’ Carter knew what Luka had was very serious… he quickly picked his phone and dialed to the emergency, while approaching the bed… Abby went to the bathroom… she had to lower Luka’s fever… ‘My name is John Carter and I’m a doctor on County…. I need an ambulance ASAP at…’ he was saying, but stopped and put his hand over the mouthpiece. ‘What’s the address?’ ‘Uh… 295, St Edward street…’ said Abby, returning with a wet towel… ‘295, St Edward street…’ Carter repeated… he was talking about Luka’s state and hearing the instruction of the attending over the phone, as Abby put the wet towel on Luka’s forehead… John hangs up his cell phone. ‘The ambulance will be here in three minutes… how is he?’ Abby shook her head negatively… ‘Not good… he is very sick…’ she said. ‘And we need to take medicine quickly…’ ‘Abby?’ Luka sighed, calling the attentions of both Abby and Carter… Luka didn’t know if he was dreaming or if she was really there… ‘I’m here, babe…’ she said, with tears appearing in her eyes. ‘Hang on, honey… help is under way…’ Luka opened and closed his eyes… ‘It hurts…’ he said weakly. ‘I know, babe…’ she said, feeling powerless to help him. ‘The ambulance is coming, Luka…’ said John. Luka tried to focus on the owner of the voice… ‘Car – ter?’ he asked. ‘Hey, buddy…’ said John. ‘Hang on, help is coming…’ Luka nodded, but closed his eyes as the pain appeared… Abby was more and more nervous, because she couldn’t do anything… XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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