justcala
Countess of Luby
Penny for your thoughts...
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Post by justcala on Jun 10, 2009 20:39:09 GMT 10
Yeyyyy... you're updating!! The songs is great too, btw
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Post by suzanne on Jun 10, 2009 22:00:29 GMT 10
WOOHOO an update!! So glad you decided to continue this story, loving Abby and Susan's girl talk!! Wonder how Luka will react to what Abby has to tell him?? Update again soon, looking foeward to more!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Jun 10, 2009 22:56:06 GMT 10
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Taylor
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Post by Taylor on Jun 11, 2009 10:44:07 GMT 10
yes keep going!!!! I just read all that you have so far and I cant wait for an update!!!!!
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er02
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Post by er02 on Jun 12, 2009 16:24:53 GMT 10
Thx for all the comments. Here's the next update:
Chapter 5 (Can I Walk With You- India Arie)- At The Park Part 1
Walking in a comfortable silence they decided to take a seat on a bench by the water (yall know the one I’m talking about, it's the one where they decide to keep the baby in season 12 ). “So are we just gonna sit and look at the water or are you gonna tell me what’s going on?” “Well its not that easy to say Luka.” “Why isn’t it, we talk about everything. I told you about Danijela and Sam. You told me about Richard. I’m sure we can deal with whatever it is.” “Ok but let me say everything I need to before you say anything deal?” “Ok it’s a deal.”
“Luka this past year has been hard for me. Losing everything and having to move and start over was rough. When I got divorced from Richard it was different because the only thing that changed was that he was out of my life. I came up here only knowing Susan and Chuck. Then I met you and we had this instant connection. I never felt that with anyone not even Richard. I wasn’t seeking a relationship cause of everything that had happened with Richard, then you told me about Sam and the way you opened up to me I knew right then and there that I wanted you in my life in any way, shape, or form. I needed you. No matter what I’m about to tell you I still want you in my life even if you don’t feel the same way. Luka this past year my feelings for you have changed but in a good way. Luka I’m in love with you and it’s the best feeling ever. When we are out I always pray that one day it will be as a real couple and not just as friends. I want to kiss you and not just think about it. I want to hold your hand and not just look at it. I want to one day be your wife and not just dream about it. I want you Luka. I want you. I love you Luka Kovac. That is what Susan and I were talking about. She told me to admit my feelings for you.” Once Abby finished she put her head down just bracing herself for whatever Luka might say. Whatever he said she knew it would change their relationship in one way or another. She just hoped it was in a way that would take their relationship to another level.
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Post by suzanne on Jun 12, 2009 21:03:32 GMT 10
Go Abby for telling Luka how she feels!! Wonder what Luka will say??!! Update again soon!!
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CharmedOne
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The definition of insanity is doing something over again and expecting a different outcome
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Post by CharmedOne on Jun 12, 2009 21:41:38 GMT 10
Go, Abby, go!!! Wanna know what Luka is going to tell her
Please update soon!!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Jun 13, 2009 4:58:38 GMT 10
:DI can't wait to see what Luka is gone say. Create update
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er02
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Post by er02 on Jun 13, 2009 16:34:16 GMT 10
Thx for the comments. I will post an update either Sunday or Monday
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er02
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Post by er02 on Jun 15, 2009 14:30:14 GMT 10
Ok so here another update. There is actually a slight change for this chapter. This chapter is actually based on 2 songs. So enjoy!!
Chapter 6 (All My Life- K-Ci and Jo-Jo and We Belong Together- Gavin Degraw)- At The Park Part 2
Looking intently at Luka waiting for him to say something, anything Abby starts to something else but is cut off. Luka stops her and says “you wanted me to let you finish before I said anything now you let me finish before you say anything else.” “Ok.” “For me these past couple years have been unimaginable. Two years ago I thought I was marrying Sam and when I found out she was cheating on me it broke my heart. The following year I met you and we became best friends and my heart started to become whole again. I began to realize that as much as I thought I loved Sam I didn’t because I never had her whole heart but, she had mine and she crushed it. This past year you have been my rock. I have trusted you with things that I never told anyone not even Sam. I didn’t and still don’t want to ruin our friendship either. You see Abby I can’t give you my heart cause you already have it. I have loved you since day one. I want the same thing you do. I have thought and dreamed about holding you hand, about kissing you, and about marrying you. I want you to be the mother of my children. I want you to Abby. I want you. I love you Abby Lockhart." As Luka finished he looked down at Abby with his hands on both sides of her face and gave her the most passionate kiss she had ever experienced. After the long kiss Abby looked at Luka and said, “I’m so glad you feel the same way. I really thought you were gonna turn me down.” “I could never do that to you. Truth be told I was gonna take you out for a nice dinner tomorrow and then bring you to this same bench to tell you how I felt.” “Well that sounded like a good plan. Are you off tomorrow?” “Yea, I am why?” “Well how about this, we spend the whole day together and then we can still go to the dinner you planned.” “That’s a great idea. How about we get an early start to celebrating our new found happiness.” “I like the way you think Dr. Kovac. So what do you have in mind?” “Well your place is closer how about we go there.” “ Ok let’s go.” Walking hand in hand back to Abby’s apartment Luka starts thinking about how he really wants to marry Abby. Coincidently Abby is thinking about the same thing. They both realize that this is true love and they don’t want to waste another minute apart.
At the same time they start to speak “Luka” “Abby” They both start laughing. “Ladies first.” “Luka are we officially together?” “Yea I would like to think we are.” “What were you going to say?” “Well the same thing but more like this, Abby I do want to marry you but, I don’t want to wait long. I think we know each other pretty well and we both have been married before. Although they both ended in different ways I think we are both ready to move ahead. I don’t mean we should get married tomorrow or even next month but I don’t want to wait.” “Oh Luka you have no idea how glad I am to hear you say that. This year I have gotten to know you better then I know myself. You are my best friend and I want you to be my husband.” “ What’s today date?” “July, 1st, why?” “I say on November 1st you and me along with Susan and Chuck as our witnesses get married.” “November 1st huh, I think I’m going to have to check my calendar”, Abby says starting to laugh. “Very funny Abby very funny.” “I try but seriously Luka there’s nothing better that I would want to do then to marry you. Pulling Abby in for a hug Luka tells her, “I love you Abby Lockhart.” “I love you to Luka Kovac but do you think we’re crazy?” “No I think we’re in love.”
Finally reaching the apartment Abby reaches in her pocket for the keys and as she looks up she sees the one person that could ruin her good mood. Little did she know that this person could ruin Luka’s good mood as well.
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Post by suzanne on Jun 15, 2009 18:43:26 GMT 10
No no no don't ruin the good mood!! Wonder who it is?? Glad they have talked and feel the same!! Update soon!!
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Post by lubylover09 on Jul 27, 2009 20:43:00 GMT 10
just started reading in the fourm again are you going to finish this story?
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er02
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Post by er02 on Jul 28, 2009 15:27:04 GMT 10
Had a lot of things goin on, will post soon as I get a chance.
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marie
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Post by marie on Jul 31, 2009 19:17:37 GMT 10
that's great ! I've juste read it all ! :-)
Hope you'll update soon !
I wonder who's that person ?
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er02
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Post by er02 on Aug 7, 2009 15:25:05 GMT 10
Ok so heres an update. Oh and the wedding is Dec not Nov.
Chapter 7 (Goodbye- Kristinia DeBarge)- Outside Abby’s Apartment
“Richard?” “Hey Abby.” “Richard what the hell are you doing here?” “Whoa hold up you mean to tell me that this is Richard”, Luka asks finally speaking up. “Yea Luka this is Richard my ex-husband.” “Well Abby this is the son of a b**** that I caught Sam with.” Richard finally started to realize who Luka was and wondered what he was doing with Abby. “Wait a minute let me get this straight Richard you would come all the way back to Chicago to cheat on me? You really are a son of a b****”, Abby said getting very pissed off. “So tell me how it happened Richard, you at least owe me that much.” “Yea I want to know to”, said Luka. “Well it started a year before we got divorced, when I came to see my mom when she first got sick. Sam was a nurse at the hospital where my mom was. It started out as flirting and then became a full fledge affair. It continued until he (pointing at Luka) caught us.” “Back in New Orleans was Sam the girl I caught with or was that someone else?” “That was someone else. Sam and I broke up not long after we got caught. She left Chicago with somebody else she met.” “Well Richard I don’t know what you came here expecting but knowing you it was probably to try and get me back. But you see Richard I have moved on and I want to introduce you to my new fiancé”, Abby says grabbing Luka’s hand. He treats me with respect and loves me unconditionally. I’ve never felt this way about anyone before including you. So if you don’t mind I would like to cap off my night on a good note. Goodbye Richard and if you ever come here again I won’t stop Luka from kicking your ass cause I know he wanted to.” Abby says pulling Luka into her apartment leaving a stunned Richard in the hallway.
(Angel of Mine- Monica)- Inside Abby’s Apartment “I can’t believe that jerk came here and thought I would take him back. To find out he was cheating on me with Sam was a shock but I always had a feeling he wasn’t coming just to see his mom. It makes me sick that he was using her as an excuse to come here and cheat on me.” Abby lets not think about either of them now. That is not why we’re here. . We came to celebrate us. Now can we do that?” “I’m sorry Luka you’re right. Its just that he always brings that side of me out.” With a devilish smile Luka says “Well I hope I can bring out a different in you too.” “Well come and see what happens”, Abby says bringing Luka toward her.
The next morning Luka and Abby wake up to the phone ringing. “Make it stop”, Luka says with his head under the pillow. “This better be important”, Abby says answering the phone. “Grouchy this morning aren’t we”, says the voice on the phone. “Susan?” “Yea it’s me.” Why are you calling me this early especially since I have the day off.” “Well I was anxious to see how things went last night with Luka.” “Hold on let me go in the other room”, Abby says getting out of the bed so Luka can sleep. “You still there?” “Yea I’m here. So what happened and why do you have to go to another room? Wait Luka is there isn’t he?” “Yes Susan he is here. Anyway last night after you and Chuck left we went to Ike’s and he wanted to know why I was acting strange and what you and I were talked about it. He had a feeling that it some how involved him. I told him I didn’t want to talk about it there so we went to the park by my place. Finally working up the nerve I told him everything. How I felt about him, about the fact that I didn’t want to ruin our friendship, and about you convincing me to tell him.” “So what did he say although I have a pretty good idea of what it was?” “He said that he felt the same way. That he thought he loved Sam but he realized that she never had his whole heart. He said that he’s loved me since the day we became friends. Then we decided to get married in December.” “Whoa whoa did you just say you two are getting married in December? Abby that’s 4 months away. Are you two sure about this?” “Yes Susan I’ve never been this sure about something since the day I decided to divorce Richard. Speaking of that jackass you know he showed up here last night trying to get me back. But get this he was the one that Luka caught Sam with.” “How the hell did that happen?” “Apparently she was a nurse at the hospital his mom was in. Who would have thought that could happen?” “Yea who would have thought that? So what did he say when he saw Luka?” “I don’t think he recognized Luka until Luka told me Richard was the one he caught with Sam. He looked like he could pissed in his pants when Luka said that.” “I bet he did.” “I decided to add to his shock and introduce Luka as my fiancé.” “Guess he didn’t take that too well huh?” “I didn’t give him a chance to react cause then I told him how good Luka was to me and also if he ever showed up at my place again I would let Luka kick his ass. Then I grabbed Luka’s hand and pulled him into the apartment.” “Wow Sounds like you had an eventful night.” “Yea it was great despite Richard showing up.” “Well I’m glad it worked out.” “Me too, Luka is really an amazing guy.” “Yea he is.” “Hey Suze I need to ask you something but I’ll do it at work tomorrow. I need more sleep. I had a long night.” “I bet. I guess you and Luka had a lot of celebrating to do”, Susan says laughing. “And it was a good celebration. Bye Susan.” Bye Abby, call me later.” “Ok I will”, Abby, says hanging up the phone.
Abby then walks back into the bedroom and see Luka with his head still under the pillow. So she just climbs back into bed. “So I take it that was Susan wanting to know what happened last night”, Luka says with the pillow still on his head. “Yea how did you know?” “Cause Chuck called me on my cell” Luka says laughing. “Him and Susan are two peas in a pod.” “Yes they are. Now lets get some sleep cause someone kept me up all night.” “Is that right? I recall it being the other way around”, Abby says turning over to face Luka. “I don’t know what you’re talking about”, Luka says already starting going back to sleep. Abby just looks at him until she falls asleep as well.
Sorry it took so long but alot of things have been goin on so it might be a little while before the next update.
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