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Post by *Natalie* on Sept 11, 2006 5:45:08 GMT 10
Hey debs!
I'd love to read something new from you but this is still a great fic... so im sitting on the fence lol
natalie xx
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Sept 11, 2006 23:29:57 GMT 10
Skin to Skin
Luka.
Opening my eyes only to close them quickly I feel around the bed but find only air was last night a dream did I make it all up in my head. “Morning.” Oh no there she is standing in the doorway of the bedroom holding two mugs of steaming coffee and the morning paper tucked under her arm she’s in my shirt it’s long enough to hide her naked body from the cold but it still looks stunning her naked brown legs stretch out as she walks towards the bed. “You ok?” I shake my head I’m picturing her standing in front of me only without the shirt “morning sunshine and yes” I reach out my hand and take a mug from her. “I had a few things to do hope you don’t mind I used your phone?” I put the mug on the bedside table “sure” I turn towards her wrapping my arms around her waist pull her across the bed she so is sat between my legs with her head on my chest reading the paper “what you looking for” I look over her shoulder she has red circles around a few boxes. “Somewhere to live then I need to look for a job!” I tilt my head I just thought she would get her old apartment back and she would work at country again “what about the hospital” she looks up pulling a weird face before she answers. “I quick Luka it’s not that easy and I’m sure you already got a replacement.” Oh crap we do but she isn’t Abby she is nothing like her “yeah” I bet I look as disappointed as I sound “she has nothing on you though” I kiss her cheek I’d much rather stair as Abby all day and her ass looks great in scrubs too.
Abby.
“She has nothing on you though.” He leans in and kisses my cheek “thanks but you have to say that” I kiss his cheek back “but it’s sweet” it kind of weird it’s like I haven’t been gone but really I have and I don’t have a job or any where to live. “You can I want you to stay here with me if you want?” I turn around and put the paper down “that’s sweet Luka” I don’t need his pity “ I can” I feel him slid his finger over my lip. “Its not pity it’s not because I was a thingy to you it’s just because I love you.” Oh wow these three little still send shivers though my body “I love you too” I feel so crap I mean we were apart for so long “I will but only ill I get myself sorted” I jump into his arms “I love you” I always feel my safest when I’m with him now more so since the night with the gun. “I love you more.” I wrap my arms around his neck and kiss him passionately on the mouth sliding my tongue inside his mouth. “I didn’t mean any of the nasty things I said I was just angry.” I nod my head and kiss him again I don’t need nor do I want to think about that I just want him.
Oh Natalie i charge £10 a day for sitting on my fence.
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Post by jadestar on Sept 12, 2006 2:56:11 GMT 10
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Post by *Natalie* on Sept 12, 2006 6:04:46 GMT 10
Great update! And great thing i get paid at midnight... i'll be round with the rent natalie x
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Sept 12, 2006 20:20:32 GMT 10
Skin to Skin.
Abby.
“Hey honey.” I turn around and see Luka walk towards me and it’s about time I have been waiting at the front desk for over an hour he wanted me to meet him after work so we can go out but he got dragged into a trauma. “Luka!” I’m about to open my mouth when Greg shouts him for help I pout my lips and tilt my head downwards towards the floor. “I’m sorry!” He says just a little louder then a whisper “go” I mouth and fake a smile to make him feel better. “Abby…hello…work…tomorrow…9 am.” I spin around as Kerry walks past me “I don’t work here anymore Kerry” she stops in her tracks and turns around to face me. “I don’t think I was asking I was telling!” She says before spinning around and storming off shouting at Morris as she goes I think I just got my job back “did you hear that Jerry?” I turn around and face him to see him smiling. “I think I did.”
Luka.
“Did you hear that Jerry?” I have finally finished and when I’m walking back to the front desk that’s where Abby is talking to Jerry I can just about hear them I wonder what she heard? “I think I did.” I’m only inches away from her so I decide to sneak up on her wrapping my arms tightly around her waist giving her a little squeeze “hear what?” I ask resting my head on her shoulder. “Hi stranger!” She kisses my cheek quickly sliding her fingers lightly across my face rubbing my cheek letting her fingers linger. “Kerry just gave me my job back how cool right?” She spins around in my arms “really?” oh wow I can’t believe it don’t look too happy though Luka you will scare her away “that’s wow amazing” I kiss her cheek “the hospital needs you” I kiss her other cheek. “Yeah and you need to watch her ass!” Jerry pipes up from behind us “yeah and it’s my ass too look at” I give him my best angry look right before I slap her ass “so eyes off” I warn grabbing her tightly by the hand. “Where we going?” She asks as I pull her out the hospital doors “food come on” I drag her out and across the road tonight we celebrate.
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Post by jadestar on Sept 12, 2006 20:50:15 GMT 10
yeah Abby back at County
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Sept 13, 2006 0:43:35 GMT 10
Hi guys
I'm thinking of doing a new fanfiction and i would love it if you would tell me what you think ? Which sounds better?
Fanfiction 1 *Luka is a doctor but has alot of money (his dad left it to him) he pretends he doesn't. *Abby starts working at county *Abby has a boyfriend (nasty) but stays with him. *Luka is engaged (bitch)
Fanfiction 2 *Luka and Abby have a daughter 5/6 but are not together. *Luka thinks he loves Abby but still pissed she left him. *Abby hears Luka is leaving and feel guilty.
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Post by XxXnicoleXxX on Sept 13, 2006 0:59:24 GMT 10
it sounds good go for it just wondered are u still continuing with "When you need me just call out my name" ?
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Sept 13, 2006 2:48:26 GMT 10
Hi guys This is the last part I don’t think I can go anywhere with it so here it is.
Skin to Skin.
Abby.
“Wake up gorgeous.” I open my eyes to see Luka standing in front of me with a cup of coffee “what time is it” it doesn’t want to be early for his own safety. “It’s almost 7 you don’t want to be late.” I close my eyes and roll over tucking the cover under me “you better go away and I hope I think I’m dreaming” I yell at him trying to get comfortable again. “Oh I love it when you talk nasty.” I hear him put the coffee down beside me before I feel a sudden rush of cold air hit my naked body “Luka!” I scream trying to pull the cover back. “Time to shine.” I look up and see him throw the cover on the fall near the bathroom as he enters to do his morning routine “I hate you!” I yell hiding my head under the pillow. “I love you too princess.” I kick the bed I know he is right and I hate that he is because I dislike mornings so much “ahh” I throw the pillow and sit up for a few seconds before jumping off the bed to make my way into the bathroom. “I’m happy your coming back.” I’m washing my face when I see him open the shower curtain in the mirror “me too” I really am my life is so perfect now I mean a year ago I was happy don’t get me wrong but everything that has happen to me has made me the person I am today. “You make me want to work.” He carries on talking as I think about my life the night I was took by them boys was scary and I wouldn’t wish that on anymore but some how I’m a better person for it I mean hell I think Luka and I wouldn’t be back together and I feel in control of my life for once I can do anything hell I could “marry me Luka” I hear him drop the shower gel before jumping out the tub to spin me around to face him. “What?” I feel happy and I’m whole finally complete “I love you so much and I finally feel like I’m ready” I wrap my arms around his neck as water drips from his soaking body “you make me happy” I lean in and rest against his wet chest. “I love you so much too and I’m marry you right now if I could!” I tilt my head before looking down at his naked body “right now? Naked and all?” I look back up to his eye line smiling. “Naked and all!” I watch him lean in closing the distance between us were chest to chest skin to skin “I love you Luka” I whisper before he kisses me our body’s join and are souls finally open wide enough to let the other crawl inside and hide if need be were happy were skin to skin from now on. “I love you too Abby.”
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Sept 13, 2006 2:54:23 GMT 10
I would forget my head if it wasn't screwed on.
I don't know NIX I'm not sure enough people want me to keep it going i did alot of chapters.
I am thinking about starting a new one but don't have any idea's ....brain dead....
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Post by jadestar on Sept 13, 2006 3:44:06 GMT 10
uuh I really like the ending... thanks for it with a new fanfic idea: I think I like the first idea a little more... so I hope you can get creative again - I look forward to it
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Post by strizzy on Sept 13, 2006 5:57:36 GMT 10
Love the ending!
Both of your ideas are good! I don't know if I could pick between the two of them, sorry!
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Post by *Natalie* on Sept 13, 2006 5:57:50 GMT 10
Great update and ending! I like the 1st one... would Abby and Luka get back together in it natalie x
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Tails
Duchess of Luby
^ Thanks Nina for the avatar
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Post by Tails on Oct 18, 2007 7:59:49 GMT 10
Another amazing fic down couple more to go! Debz once again i would like to say you are an amazing writer and i loved this fic!
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Post by baboune51 on Oct 14, 2008 5:04:03 GMT 10
Lubby forever !!!!!!!!!!!
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