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Post by rorygilmore on May 28, 2006 14:57:24 GMT 10
oh, oh, I think I don't want know what happens next....hope the man doesn't kidnap sweet Milena..gulp
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Post by Noora on May 29, 2006 22:23:44 GMT 10
Oh damn.. He cannot kidnap her, can he? :/ Waiting for the next part!
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Post by Abbie on May 30, 2006 12:24:23 GMT 10
Hey everyone! I come with another update. Keep the great comments coming! I love to read them!!
Chapter 4: “Who are you?” Milena asked backing up. Abby watched him as if she was a bear ready to attack. “You know you remind me of my little girl.. She died just know.” He grabbed onto Milena and started to cry. “Mr. Robinson..” Abby said walking around and grabbed her daughter away from him. Milena clung to Abby’s leg watching the man sob. “I am sorry about your daughter, but I think your wife and other children need you right now.” Abby saw John walking toward them to help with the traumas. She stopped him and pushed Milena into his direction. “Take her away from him..” Abby whispered, and he didn’t need to hear more. John took Milena’s hand and took her back in the lounge. “Stay right here, and don’t move.” John said running back out of the room to help Abby. When he returned the oldest child a little boy was coding, and died. Then the middle girl, and soon after the wife. Mr. Robinson broke down and turned to Abby. He grabbed her arms again and began to shake her back and forth. “I cant live without them! You have to turn the monitor back on! Continue working on them! What are you waiting for!” Luka heard the yelling in the hall and was at Abby’s side pulling the man off of her. Luka was walking Mr. Robinson out of the trauma room when he turned back to Abby. “This is all your fault! You gave up! What kind of doctor do you think you are? What if that was your little girl! HUH? What would you do then? What happens if you lose the family you love?” When Luka pulled him out of the room Abby could only stand there and think.. What if that was Milena.. No she shook her head and turned to help clean up. “You’ll be sorry Dr. Kovac!” she heard him yell down the hall. She saw Luka let him go, and turned to another trauma that was being pushed in.
A few minutes later Abby was still thinking about what Mr. Robinson had said to her about Milena. She decided to go in and check on her. She walked into the lounge to see it a mess. Crayons all over the table, her glass of milk that John poured for her was spilt on the table spilling over the side. “Lena?” Abby called looking around the room. No answer… “Come on I am not kidding now… Come out here right now..” Still no answer. “MELINA!” Abby yelled in the room making it sound like she was frustrated so she would come out. Abby began to panic and walked back out of the lounge to find Luka. “Carter!” Abby yelled catching John about to walk outside. He turned to look at her. “Have you seen Milena?” “She’s in the lounge.” Carter said walking over to her. “No, no she’s not!” “ok well she likes to play around with you and Luka.. You go that way and I will circle this way, and we will meet back here.” Abby nodded and the two of them started the search.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on May 30, 2006 13:10:15 GMT 10
I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope nothing bad happens to her.
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Post by linda on May 30, 2006 20:31:15 GMT 10
nooooooooooooooooooo she can't have been taken! please!
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Post by Noora on May 30, 2006 23:30:00 GMT 10
Geez, you like to keep us in tenseness, do you? I loved it! And I love the name "Milena" also!
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Post by rorygilmore on May 31, 2006 0:19:22 GMT 10
I knew it! I saw it coming..! that guy kidnap her!!!........what is going to happen now?
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Post by Abbie on May 31, 2006 0:59:41 GMT 10
WOW! Thanks for the replies! You all are great!! Here's another update, and keep the great replies coming! Chapter 5: “well?” Abby said walking back to the admit desk and noticed Carter had nothing. “Sorry Abby.” John could only bow his head in shame. “Ugh.. When I get my hands on that kid! She knows better than this!” “Abby.. What if..” Abby shot her hand up in front of John to stop him from going any further. “No.. She’s just hiding somewhere.” “Who is hiding?” Luka said walking over to them. “Your daughter!” Abby yelled turning to keep looking. She walked back into the lounge. “Milena I am really not kidding now! Get you little butt out here!” Abby waited praying that she would come out of somewhere. Luka walked into the lounge. “Find her?” he asked placing a hand on her shoulder. Abby put her head down and turned around to face him. She couldn’t form the words, so she just shook her head no. In the corner of her eye Abby noticed something on the couch. She walked over to it, and noticed it was Milena’s teddy bear. “What is it?” Luka asked walking over to her. “It’s her bear.. Luka something happened to her! She would not leave her bear, she takes this thing everywhere!” Abby held the bear tightly to her, and began to cry. Luka held her, and pulled out his cell phone to call the cops. When the cops arrived Luka and Abby were questioned, and Luka pulled a picture of Milena out of his wallet so the cops had an accurate description of her. “Did you see anyone enter the room, or see her leave?” The officer asked the both of them. “No I was taking care of a man who just lost his…” Abby’s voice trailed off, and she jumped up. “I know who has her!” She spin around to look at Luka. “Dr. Kovac can you describe this person to us?” Abby thought for a minute, and told them the entire story, and described the best she could of what he looked like. “Was he violent to you?” The officer asked making sure he was not going to injure Milena. “Umm not really, but he was very interested in Milena… Oh my GOD how could I be so blind!” Abby sat back down and put her head in her hands. After a few more minutes of questioning other people who might have seen Milena, the officers closed their little black books. “Ok I think we have enough for now.. We will see what we can do.” They shook Luka and Abby’s hands and walked out of the hospital.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on May 31, 2006 1:38:54 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on May 31, 2006 6:04:11 GMT 10
WOW!
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Post by Noora on May 31, 2006 22:46:04 GMT 10
Great again!
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Post by rorygilmore on Jun 1, 2006 1:50:22 GMT 10
Luka pulled a picture of Milena out of his wallet so the cops had an accurate description of her. Aww... that is so sweet, he's got her pic in his wallet...(that's so Luka)
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Post by Abbie on Jun 2, 2006 12:58:31 GMT 10
Ok everyone next updates ready!! Let me know what you think.
Chapter 6:
“This is all my fault! I should’ve told her to leave when he was…” “Abby it’s not your fault he’s just a man who lost his family. I think he’s just trying to prove a point to you. His family died and you were their doctor. Abby pulled out of Luka’s arms. “Do you think that’s why he took her?” “Well we don’t really know if he has her or not…” Luka said praying that she would pop out of hiding like she always does. “Why don’t you guys go home incase she shows up there.” Pratt said. Luka looked down at Abby. “No what if she’s here somewhere?” Abby said shaking her head. “We will keep looking here, and we will call you if anything happens.” Luka nodded his head and put his arms around Abby, and walked her outside. “Luka I cant go home. Not when she’s out here somewhere..” They decided to walk around town a little to see if they can find anything. It was getting dark, and they decided to go back to the house.
Luka unlocked the door, and immediately felt tears in his eyes when he saw Milena’s little shoes laying by the door like she had just taken them off. He turned to face Abby who looked like she was thinking the same thing. “Luka I’m scared!” Abby began to cry. “I know me to, but we are going to find her.” He pulled her in for a hug, and when she turned her head she noticed the answering machine was blinking. She walked over to it and pushed play. “Don’t try and track this call because I have it blocked. You stood there, and let my family die, know it’s your turn.” Then the line went dead. “LUKA NO!!!” Abby screamed at the top of her lungs and fell to her knees hysterical.
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Post by megan on Jun 2, 2006 17:59:40 GMT 10
ohhh geez! no!!! gosh! update soon please! before i lose my mind!
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Post by Noora on Jun 2, 2006 21:31:09 GMT 10
Oh man this is getting really exciting! I can see all the scenes in my mind when I read this fic.. I can only imagine how sad and terrified Abby must feel.
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