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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 2, 2006 22:41:20 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jun 2, 2006 22:51:51 GMT 10
Holy crap!!!! What's going to happen next?
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taija
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Post by taija on Jun 2, 2006 22:51:58 GMT 10
Great updates (: I forgot read them (i have no idea why), but now i did it.
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Post by rorygilmore on Jun 3, 2006 1:28:24 GMT 10
Ok everyone next updates ready!! Let me know what you think.“Don’t try and track this call because I have it blocked. You stood there, and let my family die, know it’s your turn.” Then the line went dead. “LUKA NO!!!” Abby screamed at the top of her lungs and fell to her knees hysterical. NOOO!!! hope that man doesn't hurt Milena!!!
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Post by Abbie on Jun 3, 2006 5:14:03 GMT 10
Ok I wasn't going to update until later tonight, but I'm not going to leave you hanging for that long. So here's another update!
Chapter 7:
Luka dropped at her side trying to be the strong one. It was hard for him because usually Abby was always the strong one. He looked down at her trembling body sobbing on the floor. He took a deep breath and tried to calm her down. “Luka she’s scared I know she is!” “Shh. We will get her back.” “How do you know?” “because she is a smart girl, and I know she is going to be ok.” Luka prayed what he just said was true. The phone rang, and Abby jumped up and grabbed it. “Hello? Milena?” “no. Sean.” “Sean? Sean who? Who the hell is this?” “Now is that the way you are going to talk to the man that is in control of your daughter’s life?” “You leave her alone you sick bast**d!” Abby screamed into the phone. Luka leaned over and took it from her. “Mr. Robinson what do you want with her? She’s an innocent child you giver her back to us, and we wont get the police involved.” Luka tried leveling with the man. “Can I do that with my family? I don’t think so.. Sorry not going to work.” Luka felt his patients run low as he talked with the man. “If you lay a hand on that child, I will find you, and I will kill you with my bare hands.” “Is that a threat Dr.?” “Yes that’s a threat.” Luka went to say something else when he heard crying. “Milena!” he yelled into the phone. He heard her small voice saying something to Sean, and heard the sound of a hand slapping skin, and a scream of pain. “Daddy! Daddy help me!” then the phone went dead.
Luka turned and chucked the phone across the room yelling. Which made Abby jump a little. “Luka…” She stood up to walk over to him. “He did it! He laid a hand on her! I’ll kill him! I will!” He looked over at Abby breathing heavily, she knew that look. She remembered that look the day he killed that man who went after her.
Abby walked over and picked up the phone. “Who are you calling?” Luka asked still angry. “The cops.” Luka watched her as she talked to them about the phone calls. When she hung up the phone she turned to look at Luka. “They are going to come and hook up the phone so if he calls again they can track the call. Luka could only nod because he was to angry to say anything.
A few minutes later the doorbell rang, and Luka, who was calmer than before, answered it and let the cops in. after they listened to the message, and Abby and Luka told them about the recent call they began hooking up machines to the phone line. “Now what?” Abby asked when they were finished. “We wait.” one of the cops said sitting down sipping his coffee. “We sit and wait?! My little girl is out there somewhere scared, and you tell me to sit and wait?! She is my life! I cant just sit and wait! The only time I sat and waited was when she was carrying that little girl for nine months!” Luka yelled pointing over at Abby. “I waited to hold that little girl in my arms! I am not going to sit and wait while some maniac has my daughter!” Abby walked over and placed her hand on his shoulder to calm him down. “I’m sorry Mr. Kovac, we are doing the best we can…” “Like hell you are! You are sitting here doing nothing!” “Ok Luka lets walk.” Abby pulled Luka out of the house and onto the front porch. Where Luka fell into Abby’s arms, and cried. Now it was Abby’s turn to be the strong one. “We will find her, and you can hold her in your arms again…” Abby said trying to sound confident in her words. Just then they both heard the phone ring, and ran back inside.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 3, 2006 11:57:18 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jun 3, 2006 12:03:10 GMT 10
Loved the update!
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Post by rorygilmore on Jun 3, 2006 16:43:05 GMT 10
“We will find her, and you can hold her in your arms again…” Abby said trying to sound confident in her words. Oh, poor Luka, this makes me want to cry
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Post by Noora on Jun 3, 2006 21:37:31 GMT 10
Exciting and good update! I want to know who's calling! Don't keep us waiting for so long..
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Post by lubyluver on Jun 3, 2006 22:47:06 GMT 10
I love this fic reply reply!!!!!! i'm going crazzy!
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Post by Abbie on Jun 4, 2006 4:43:10 GMT 10
Thanks for your great replies everyone!! I love reading what you have to say. Okay here's another update for you, so enjoy!!
Chapter 8:
“Hold on… ok answer it.” one of the cops said to Abby who was standing by the phone. She took a deep breath and reached for the phone. “Hello?” “Mommy?” A little shaky voice gave Abby chills through her body. “Hi baby are you ok?” Abby noticed the cop motioning for her to keep Milena on the phone so they can track it. “I’m scared mommy..” Milena began to cry, and Abby choked back tears trying to be strong for her daughter. “Were not going to let anything happen to you. Are you alone right now?” “I don’t know where he went, he yelled at me for crying, and hit me. Then I heard the door close. I think he left.” “Do you know where you are?” Abby asked sitting on the couch. “In a house, I think it’s his…” “What did I tell you would happen if I caught you on that phone?” Abby heard Sean’s voice yelling at Milena. She could do nothing but listen to what was going on. “Leave me alone! I wanna go home! I want my mommy!” “Shut up you are never going home! And you disobeyed me! You know what happens when you do that!” “No please don’t! I’m sorry! Mommy!!” Abby felt helpless as she heard her little girl cry out for her. Then the line went dead. “Did you get anything?” Luka asked turning to the cops as he walked over to comfort Abby.
“No we only needed another minute or so.” The cop said to Luka. “Do you think he’ll call back?” Luka asked holding Abby in his arms who was sobbing clenching the phone in her hands. “We have to wait, that’s all we can do.” “Wait?? You are telling me to wait while my kid is hurt somewhere scared to death?!” Abby lost control of her emotions, and body and lunged across the room grabbing one of the cops by his shirt. “Mrs. Kovac, there is nothing else we can do right know. I understand…” “Don’t you dare finish that sentence! You don’t understand how I am feeling right now! Unless you have had a child taken from you! A child that means the world to you, she had brought me out of many bad thing that I was going through. When I found out I was pregnant for her everything changed. That little girl changed my life, and someone took her from me! You have no idea how I feel!” Luka stood there, and let Abby get her emotions out. When she was done screaming she walked out of the living room. “Leave her alone.” Luka whispered to the cop that went to follow her down the hall. He stopped and turned to look at Luka. “Just let her be by herself for a while.” He finished as the cop sat back down in his chair. Everyone sat in silence waiting for another phone call.
Abby stopped at a white door that had small purple flowers painted on it. And MILENA diagonally painted in pink in the middle. She traced the name with her finger, and let it land down on the doorknob. She took a deep breath and turned the knob so the door opened. Abby stood in the doorway starring into a room fitted for a princess. The room was done in pink and purple because they were Milena’s favorite colors. Against the far wall was a Pink canopy bed with purple cover’s and stuffed animals neatly sat on top. Across the room laid tons of dolls, and doll beds for them. Bins of doll clothes, and Barbie’s were neatly stacked against the wall. Shelves were covered with books, and little fairy trinkets.
Abby took a deep breath and walked over to the bed and sat down. She looked over on the nightstand that had a picture of Abby and Milena at the beach. Milena was sitting between Abby’s legs and they were making a sand castle together. On the picture frame it read WORLDS BEST MOM. Abby smiled back remembering when the picture was taken. She put it down and picked up one of Milena and Luka. It was taken at one of the ER softball games, and Milena had on one of Luka’s t-shirts and a baseball cap on backwards. She was smiling sitting on Luka’s shoulders. That frame read I LOVE MY DADDY. Abby leaned over onto the pillow and cried.
A few minutes Luka stood there watching Abby. “Hey, how are you doing?” he asked sitting next to her taking the pictures out of her hands, and looking at them. “I remember this! This was my first homerun!” Luka smiled at the picture of Milena and him.” Abby couldn’t help but smile. “Yea I remember that. She was so proud of you.” Abby said looking into Milena’s closet, and noticed her baby book. She walked over to it and took it off the shelf. There were plenty of pictures Luka took when Abby was in labor, and many more right when Milena was delivered. They sat and talked about their daughter when the phone rang once more. They both bolted to the phone.
They waited for the cop to give them the signal to pick up the phone. This time Luka was the one who answered. “Ok I am getting sick of playing your little games..” “Know Know Dr.” “Don’t give me anymore crap. You tell me where my daughter is right now..” “Or what you’ll do something bad to me? Go ahead I already lost everything that I care about! That wife of yours didn’t even bother to try and save them!” “They had too many injuries to be saved, Sean, I’m sorry for your loss, but that doesn’t mean you have to put a innocent child in harm.” Luka calmly talked with him. He could hear him beginning to cry. “I’m sorry….. She looks so sweet and innocent when she sleeps.. She cried to much man how could you deal with that?” “She never cries unless she’s hurt or scared. What did you do to her?!” “I’m sorry.” Sean said and sighed before hanging up the phone. “NO you son ova bi*ch!” Luka yelled turning to grab onto Abby who went pale.
“Mr. and Mrs. Kovac we got it we got the address!” The cop said standing up and running out the door talking on his radio.
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Post by megan on Jun 4, 2006 5:00:08 GMT 10
AHHHH! update soon please!!!!! oh geez!
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Post by lubyluver on Jun 4, 2006 5:30:01 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300][/glow]I love this fic. It's so awesome. Please update soon!!!!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 4, 2006 11:56:26 GMT 10
Oh my God! Update soon!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jun 4, 2006 11:59:02 GMT 10
Thank God! They better get here back! Plz update soon.
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