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Post by suzanne on Jan 23, 2010 7:54:28 GMT 10
WOOHOO 2 updates!! ;D ;D Loving it so far and can't wait for more!! Hope you update again soon!! ;D
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Post by LiLM on Jan 24, 2010 17:42:19 GMT 10
Next update guys!!!...
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Chapter Twelve: Take my hand....
"What are you doing here?" Abby asked still looking surprised "Well I said I'd call you but then a thought of asking you out to dinner, but I assumed you'd be tired so I brought dinner" Luka said putting the bag of Chinese on the table and started to get the food out of the bag. "Well thank you for dinner, but I thing you bought a little to much" She said laughing "I thought Julie would be here too" "Well she's out with her boyfriend" Abby said getting two plates out of the cupboard "It's just us then" he said grinning "Yes...just us"Abby said smiling "So, tell me how was work"Luka said "It was good...except one thing...Carter keeps following me like a puppy. I swear if he keeps on doing it I will kill him" "So, he's stalking you?" Damn Carter, he thought "I guess...but I'm sick of it...he asked me today why had I go out with you instead of him" "What?" "Yeah...remember when I started working at County that we walked out of the hospital and went to get coffee?" "Yeah" "Well that same day he had asked me out and I said no...so he asked me today why had I go out with you if I had said no to him" "What did you tell him?" "Well that we didn't really go out and that I didn't have to explained anything, especially to him"
After their delicious dinner they decided to watch TV, she showed him the way to the living room and they sat on the couch. They were both nervous but happy to be there. "So what do you want to watch?" "I don't care...anything" she said giving him the remote. It was strange for both to feel so comfortable giving that they didn't know each other that long. But it was nice for both to feel like that again. They needed that...after Abby's husband died she never felt that good around any man...and even though Luka was with Sophie he hadn't felt that connected to someone since his wife died. "Hey that's a good movie" Luka said leaving the remote on the coffee table. "I'm not watching that" "C'mon it's a classic" "It's a horror movie" "So..." "Fine but if I get scare you'll be sorry because I wont be able to sleep and I will call you when you're home and keep you awake until dawn OK?" "OK...deal" They continued to watch the movie...every other moment they would move closer to each other. Abby was really scare. She had never liked to watch horror movies, she couldn't sleep at night. After half hour they were next to each other, their shoulders almost touching. Suddenly Abby got really scare and screamed, at the same time she took Luka's hand and squeezed it a little. "I told you I'd get scared" she said but didn't let Luka's hand go He was a little surprised but didn't let go either. "Ok...I'll change it" He took the remote and started playing with the channels...Abby's hand still in his. They were both aware of that but wouldn't let go. After an hour they heard a set of keys opening the door and Abby got up quickly. "I think I should go" Luka said "Yeah...it's getting late" she said looking right in to his eyes In that moment Julie walked in to the living room surprised to see Luka there. "Hey mom I'm home" Julie said looking at Abby "Hi" "Hi Julie" Luka said "Hi" They didn't really know what to do "OK then...I'll go" Luka said walking to the door "I'll walk you out" Abby said Julie turned around to look at Abby who at the same time was looking at her. Julie gave her a thumbs up and Abby just smiled "I'll see you later" Luka said "Yeah...thank you for dinner" Abby said taking his hand again "Anytime" with that he kiss her cheek and walked to the elevator... Abby hoped that he kissed her on the lips but on the cheek was enough for now....
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So there it is guys....see ya.....
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Jan 24, 2010 23:13:09 GMT 10
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Post by suzanne on Jan 25, 2010 1:37:38 GMT 10
Awww such a sweet update!! ;D ;D Hope you update again soon!!
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Post by juniormauraTfan on Jan 25, 2010 3:49:16 GMT 10
very cute
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Post by LiLM on Jan 26, 2010 13:06:18 GMT 10
Here's the next update...enjoy!! ;D
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Chapter Thirteen: WHAT?
After Luka left Abby got back to the living room where Julie was expecting her with a huge smile on her face. "So...how was the movie?" Abby asked trying to avoid the question she knew Julie was going to ask. She walked to the kitchen "Oh C'mon...mom..what was Luka doing here I thought you weren't going to see him today" "Well he brought me dinner" Abby said pointing at the food on the table. "How much food did he buy...there's enough for like ten" Julie said sitting in one of the table chairs. "He thought you'd be here" "Oh...so..what happened?" "Nothing we just had dinner and watch a movie, that's all" "Really just that?" "Yes...how was your night?" Abby said trying to change the subject. It wasn't that she didn't wanted to tell Julie, it was just that she wanted to be sure it was something more serious with Luka before telling Julie something that she didn't even know for sure. "It was fine..we saw a boring movie" "Well...you want to eat something?" "Nah...we went to get dinner after the movies" Abby started to clean everything off the table. "Ok.." "I'm going to bed...have school early tomorrow" Julie said getting up the table and walking to the stairs. "Good night" Abby said "Night mom"
The next day Abby was already at work...it was just 7am and to her bad luck Carter was on too... She was getting sick of him trying to talk to her all the time...if it wasn't just that he was her student she would try to stop talking to him for good. She was in the lounge changing in to her lab coat when Carter came in and immediately walk to the coffee machine. He didn't say anything to her...not one word. He took his coffee and left...living Abby surprised but thankful for not having to talk to him. She walked out of the lounge and grabbed a chart.
Later that day Luka came in for his shift...
"Hey Frank...where are we?" he asked looking at the pile of charts...there was like five. "Well it's slow today" "Yeah I can tell... I'll be in the lounge call me if you need me" He walked in to the lounge and saw Carter sitting on the coffee table, reading a medical book. Carter just look at Luka quickly and continued to read. Luka knew why Carter had look at him like that...he knew Carter was mad because Abby was going out with Luka and not him...but Luka didn't really care after all Abby was dating him. He got out of the lounge and went to work. Like Frank had said, it was a slow day although he hadn't seen Abby yet. After a good two hours of working he got out of the Hospital and crossed the street to get a decent cup of coffee. To his surprised Abby was there, buying coffee too. He walked to the counter where she was getting the coffee. "A large coffee and the lady's bill" "Hey...it's OK I got it" she said getting money from her pocket. "Please...let me" He said grabbing his coffee and giving the guy behind the counter the money "Thanks" she said waiting for him "I haven't see you all day" Luka said holding the door open "Yeah I've been busy with a patient" "Well I've missed you" Abby blushed a little "How's Julie" he asked. They were walking to the Hospital. "She's good...she asked what were you doing at the house yesterday" "Really...what did you said?" "That you brought me dinner and we watch a movie, that's all we did isn't it?" she said but it sounded a little cold. "Yeah...I have to get back to work..see you later" he said and walked faster to the hospital entrance... Abby just stood there not knowing what had just happened...
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There it is..for now...thanks for your comments girls....see ya!! qeeniie
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Post by suzanne on Jan 26, 2010 21:49:18 GMT 10
Nice update!! Hope they don't have a fight over STUPID Carter!! Update again soon! ;D ;D
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Jan 26, 2010 21:54:14 GMT 10
omg!!!! So cute!! ;D ;D Can't you make them kiss hihihiih:) Love it!! uPdate soon !
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Post by LiLM on Jan 27, 2010 16:35:54 GMT 10
Here's the next update....enjoy.....
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Chapter Fourteen: First Kiss!
The day passed by with Luka not really talking to Abby. He would refer to her for hospital and patients stuff but other than that...nothing...Abby was starting to get mad....what had she done for him to be like that? After a long day of working she was finishing with one of Carter's patients. He had made a mistake and the patient had died. She was signing the chart when she saw him in the suture room. She walked in to try to calm him down. Even though he had been so annoying to her she was still his attending. "Hey" she said closing the door "Hi" Carter said not really looking at her "What happened was not your fault, this things happen" "I could've been here when it happened...I let the nurse alone" "Well they say you're not really a doctor until you kill a patient" "That doesn't make me feel any better" "Just think about it" she said putting her hand on his shoulder...little did she know Luka was passing by and saw her. Abby walked out of the suture room and to the lounge to get her stuff. It was late and all she wanted to do was go home. Luka on the other hand didn't really know what he was feeling...Abby and Carter weren't doing anything but Abby had told him she was dating him not Carter but even though he felt bad. When Abby walked in she saw Luka sitting on the couch...he was about to get up. "Hey...you're still here...your shift ended hours ago didn't it?" she said taking her lab coat off. "Yeah it did" "You ok?..I mean it was a tough shift" "Yeah...actually I'm feeling pretty stupid right now" "Why?" she asked concerned "I don't look like a mysterious man do I? "What?" "I think I've been very clear with my intentions" "Your...?" "I mean the date....the dinner at your house..." "Luka" "You knew what I was doing" "Well you haven't said anything official" "What was I supposed to say..I did things I let my actions speak...that's the romantic way to do this" "OK yeah but..." "And you went along with all of it so I assumed we were on the same page and then you said that you told Julie all we did was watch a movie...and yeah I mean that's all we did but....and then I see you with you're hand on Carters shoulder...you told me you were dating me" "Wait..wait...Carter?" "Yeah..." "I was just talking to him" Abby said but Luka didn't really listen "And then I thought what the hell am I doing?" Luka said and started to get his things together "Just calm down" Abby said taking is arm and turning him to see her "No...I don't want to calm down...I did everything right...I thought we where on track and now you're looking at me like am crazy..." "I'm not looking at you like you're crazy..." "And the when I took your hand there was a moment...I thought there was a moment" he said taking a step closer to her "There was...there was a moment..." Abby answered. He sigh and look at her... Luka took a step closer but Abby back down a bit... "What are you doing?" she asked "Would you just stand still?" with that Luka leaned in and kiss her sweetly on the lips.... She put her hands around his neck but almost immediately steeped back...it hadn't passed even seconds when she steeped forward but Luka took a step back... "What are you doing?" he asked just like she had done. "Would you just stand still?" This time she kissed him...but it was more passionate and sweet...he put his arms around her waist bringing her closer and she put her arms around his neck...
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There it is guys....I took this from Gilmore Girls...I loved that episode with Luke and Lorelai's first kiss and always imagined Luka and Abby is a situation like that....ok let me know what you think ok??......see ya guys!!! qeeniie
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Post by suzanne on Jan 27, 2010 22:32:37 GMT 10
I always liked that episode to!! ;D Great first kiss!! Love this story, you have to update again soon!! ;D ;D
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Jan 28, 2010 0:59:27 GMT 10
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
Update soon again !!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Feb 3, 2010 0:52:22 GMT 10
Hihih update!! can't wait to read more !! ;D ;D ;D I love this story!
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Post by LiLM on Feb 5, 2010 11:21:12 GMT 10
Hi girls....sorry I haven't updated it's just college is stressfull...but I'm working on the next update....probably will be up later tonight or tomorrow okay?
see you guys..... qeeniie
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Post by suzanne on Feb 5, 2010 22:46:05 GMT 10
Glad to hear you are gonna update!
Looking forward to it!! ;D
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Feb 7, 2010 7:09:36 GMT 10
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