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Post by Bah on Feb 23, 2007 2:14:24 GMT 10
great update
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Post by strizzy on Feb 23, 2007 2:17:35 GMT 10
Nice update!
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 23, 2007 6:30:26 GMT 10
I don't think it's the right thing to do... p.s. great update! Na i don't think it's the right thing to do either Great update natalie x
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Post by erfan228 on Feb 23, 2007 7:39:12 GMT 10
Great update!! Can't wait for more!!!
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Post by zelda on Feb 23, 2007 8:06:59 GMT 10
Melinda, I'm hopeless.....As much as I love your fic, I'm counting the days before they CHRISTEN the bed !!!!! Have wild images of clown feet and naked Abby! Sorry, I'm too enthousiastic! But be sure I'll check everyday! This roommate thing is delicious!
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Post by Melimelo on Feb 24, 2007 10:42:34 GMT 10
The nightshift had been gruelling and Abby was beat....she hadn't seen so many patients with food poisoning at once... even when she was a nurse ! The Star trek convention should definately rethink their Vulcan meatballs for next year...the thought of that many freaks throwing up will stick in Abby's mind for a while.... and now all she wanted to do was to crawl into bed.
The apartment was quiet and Luka was nowhere to be seen..he must have gone to the shops...Abby stares at the coffee maker closes her eyes and then heads to the fridge and picks up the orange juice carton and drinks straight from it....coffee would keep her up and she needed to sleep.
The door to Luka's bedroom was open and his bed looked terribly inviting..the big expanse of it was so appealing..the cushions looked snuggly and she couldn't help herself...... Abby threw off her shoes and carefully crawled up on to the bed...she put her head on his pillow and the scent of his cologne gently hinted of musk..she closes her eyes and runs her hand over the silky smooth feel of the covers and floats off into blissfull sleep.
Luka puts the bags on the counter...he sees Abby's keys on the table and guesses she is already asleep..his plans to cook her breakfast will have to wait. The sight of Abby sleeping in his bed...was almost a shock. what is she doing in here he wondered.
Abby's hair falls across her face a little..he leans over and gently moves it back onto the pillow ..she stirs. "Luka...what are you doing....?" she rolls a little and curls up into a fetal postion and still not realising she is in his bed. Luka laughs a little and scratches his head.
"If i knew I was living with Goldilocks...I would have bought home porridge...." Abby doesn't stir this time and he shrugs as he smiles.
'Well Goldilocks....I am very tired too..so if you don't mind rolling over...I am hopping into bed too..." Luka waits for a minute and then sighs. "I guess you aren't going to move then huh..?"
Carefully he picks her up in his arms and carries her to her own room....he lays her on the bed and gently places a blanket over her and hesitates..she looks so beautiful...he leans over and gently kisses her on the cheek and then goes back to his room and climbs into his own bed....he wonders if she will remember any of this when she wakes up.
To be continued.....
(Yes zelda I'm a tease)
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Post by zelda on Feb 24, 2007 10:53:02 GMT 10
Of course, you are a sadistic tease, Melinda! But the first step is done: She did the right thing, the bed was " so appealing" and sleeping with Luka's smell in the sheets....don't get me there! And Luka is so smart: take your time, all your time, Luka boy, she'll probably make the first move! This was funny, light, and pretty hot without hot scenes!!!! YOU KNOW HOW TO HOOK YOUR READERS, baby! Karma for you, asap!
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Post by Melimelo on Feb 24, 2007 12:22:35 GMT 10
Karma for Zelda ...I love her comments
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kcabrasil
Countess of Luby
Could I be more mess up?
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Post by kcabrasil on Feb 24, 2007 22:10:04 GMT 10
great! pity luka is a gentleman... he should've sleep with her...
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Post by Bah on Feb 24, 2007 22:50:29 GMT 10
Luka was so sweet carryng Abby to her bed; but I think next time he should let Abby sleep with him. =]
great update!!
do it again soon!
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Post by ERFanRach on Feb 24, 2007 23:24:19 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by erfan228 on Feb 25, 2007 7:46:10 GMT 10
Great update!!! Can't wait for more!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 25, 2007 8:31:51 GMT 10
Great update more soon please natalie x
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Post by Melimelo on Feb 25, 2007 12:54:56 GMT 10
Sleeping beauty awakes Contains Slightly naughty contents for mature readers only please
Abby rolls onto her back and stretches..she glances at the clock and sees it is almost 2pm...her eyelids close momentarily and then they open with a flash and she sits up in bed... 'Oh my god..' she gasps. Suddenly memories of Luka's bed come flooding back to her and her stomach turns as she vaguely remembers falling asleep on his bed caressing the silky covers. "Oh god..." she can't stop shaking her head....how did she end up in her own bed.....did he move her? stupidly she checks her appearance making sure he didn't attempt to undress her and then slowly tiptoes to the door.
Abby peeks her out and listens for any noise...she can't hear anything and gathers Luka is still asleep as well so she sneaks back to his room to look for her shoes...hoping she can spirit them out without waking him. Luka is sprawled out in bed and the covers only come half way up and his naked chest is clearly visible...Abby bites her lip and holds her breath..the shoes are almost under the bed and Luka's arm dangles precariously over the side and is extremely close to where the shoes are...it was almost mission impossible.
Abby gets down on all fours and slowly crawls towards the shoes....her fingertips edge closer to the shoes when suddenly Luka stirs..Abby lets out a shriek and his eyes open and like a reflex he reaches out and grabs her arm...their eyes lock and for a minute Abby is scared and begins to tremble. Luka releases his grip and surveys the mark on her arm...
'Sorry you startled me..I'm not used to women stalking me..."
Abby sits up on all fours and lets out a breath "I'm not stalking you...I was just trying to get my shoes back without disturbing you..."
Luka laughs as he swings his legs out of bed and offers her a hand up on his way..she reaches out to his hand and he pulls her up so she is standing...he notices her eyes are focused on something below his waist...he looks down at his boxer shorts. "Oh he always gets up before me....."
Abby quickly looks away as her face blushes a nice crimson shade. 'I guess these living arrangements have a few teething problems and I promise I won't fall asleep in your bed anymore.." Luka raises his eyebrows. "What never...." he feigns disappointment. Abby smacks his arm lightly as she walks off.
"That's the little Kovac talking I presume..."
Luka laughs as he wonders if she remembers he kissed her while she slept...
To be continued...........
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kcabrasil
Countess of Luby
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Post by kcabrasil on Feb 25, 2007 14:03:09 GMT 10
she's going to remember... nobody forget a luka's kiss!
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