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Apr 24, 2007 12:54:48 GMT 10
Post by Real Dream on Apr 24, 2007 12:54:48 GMT 10
I could add a few hundred more adjectives, but I'm too excited about the coming friday night date I love your fic!! pleaaase, update sooon
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Apr 24, 2007 14:17:40 GMT 10
Post by Melimelo on Apr 24, 2007 14:17:40 GMT 10
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Apr 25, 2007 2:30:32 GMT 10
Post by strizzy on Apr 25, 2007 2:30:32 GMT 10
Brilliant chapter!!!
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Hollow
Apr 25, 2007 5:21:57 GMT 10
Post by ERFanRach on Apr 25, 2007 5:21:57 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
Update Soon!!!!
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Apr 25, 2007 5:50:15 GMT 10
Post by Rach :) on Apr 25, 2007 5:50:15 GMT 10
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Apr 25, 2007 6:08:28 GMT 10
Post by zelda on Apr 25, 2007 6:08:28 GMT 10
Ahlala, Melimelo, Don't get me started about the mysterious connection between a croatian guy and an american gal!!! It is BEYOND WORDS, isn"t it??? Abby, I KNOW IN ADVANCE YOU'LL BE A LUCKY GIRL TONITE!
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Apr 25, 2007 6:29:31 GMT 10
Post by *Natalie* on Apr 25, 2007 6:29:31 GMT 10
Amazing update Can't wait to hear about their first date natalie x
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Apr 25, 2007 16:19:55 GMT 10
Post by rorygilmore on Apr 25, 2007 16:19:55 GMT 10
First Date huh?...That MUST bring us a very hottie, wet and...hyperventilating night ...
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Apr 26, 2007 18:44:02 GMT 10
Post by Melimelo on Apr 26, 2007 18:44:02 GMT 10
The Date part 1
Abby checks her hair in the mirror and then pulls out her ponytail....she sweeps it up in a clip and then pulls it back down again then growls at herself in the mirror..this was silly he wouldn't care how her hair looked. The smell of chinese takeout fills the room and the knock at the door comes at precisely the right time..she takes a deep breath and opens the door.
"Hi...come in..."
Luka smiles as he walks past and casually drapes his coat over the sofa...he is wearing jeans and a light wool sweater and the the white ribbed neck of a t-shirt can be seen at the top.....he looks nice and he smells divine.....his cologne is entrancing and she finds herself floating towards him.
"Are you hungry ...I didn't know what you liked so I ordered a bit of everything..."
Luka smiles nervously and giggles ...his mouth widens and for a split second she thought he was going to say something awful like.... I forgot to tell you I'm a vegetarian.. He nods towards the food.
"I pretty much eat anything.....and lots of it...so don't worry about leftovers..there won't be any...."
Abby starts opening the food containers up and hands a fork to Luka...he raises his eyebrows and starts searching around for something.
"Did you get chopsticks......I can use a fork... if you didn't..."
Abby's head sinks and as she fumbles through the bag they came in.
"Sometimes they put them in even when you don't ask..." She pulls out a pair of chopsticks and hands them to Luka
"Here you go ..show off..."
Luka nods sarcastically as he expertly manouvers them and picks up some food.
"You just need to practice a bit..."
Abby picks up some food with her fork and then aims it at him like a catapault....he slides down in the chair and tries to stay out of line of fire...she laughs.
"Luka ..I'm only kidding..I wouldn't start a food fight with you.."
Luka stares at her..her big brown eyes all shiny and exciting..she was definately enjoying this too much..she wasn't retreating at all and any minute he fully expects her to fire off a piece of food at his head...he tries to reason with her.
"Hey wait a minute..this is a new sweater and I don't want to get any stains on it....let me take it off first.."
Luka holds up his hand as if he has ordered a temporary truce and then peels off his sweater over his head...the t-shirt catches on it and rides up ....his naked torso is suddenly revealed and Abby's eyes flash with the light from the lamp and he catches her glaring at him.
"What ...you are suddenly all coy over seeing my belly button...you have already seen me naked you know..."
Abby is still holding her fork with the food ready for propulsion and all of a sudden she lets fly with the food and it lands right on the front of his t-shirt..her gaze is still lingering at his torso when she realises what she has done.
"Oh my god Luka...I'm so sorry ..it was a reflex reaction..I actually didn't mean for it to go off..."
Luka pull's his t-shirt all the way down and inspects the stain...he looks up at her slowly and emitts and an evil laugh..
"Abby if you wanted to undress me all you had to do was ask...."
Abby tries to close her mouth and her heart beats a million miles an hour as he moves towards her...he had something in mind and she guesses it has something to do with removing an item of her clothing now......she sits there silent like a deer in the headlights...he could practically suggest anything now and she would be totally under hs spell.
" Abby I think I would like to skip dinner and move straight on to dessert...."
Abby closes her eyes as his hot breath reaches her neck..she suddenly didn't feel that hungry either.....
to be continued......
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Apr 26, 2007 18:59:48 GMT 10
Post by maggie on Apr 26, 2007 18:59:48 GMT 10
Great. Now I'm craving sex and Chinese food.
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Apr 26, 2007 23:55:26 GMT 10
Post by smile90 on Apr 26, 2007 23:55:26 GMT 10
Great. Now I'm craving sex and Chinese food. me too!!! update soon!!!
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Apr 27, 2007 0:11:25 GMT 10
Post by ERFanRach on Apr 27, 2007 0:11:25 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
Update Soon!!!!
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Apr 27, 2007 1:10:47 GMT 10
Post by Rach :) on Apr 27, 2007 1:10:47 GMT 10
ooohhh i want to know what they are having for dessert??
ko
Update!!!
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Apr 27, 2007 1:26:45 GMT 10
Post by Ninolino on Apr 27, 2007 1:26:45 GMT 10
Great. Now I'm craving sex and Chinese food. I hope not in the same time?! I haven't been here yet, but I HAD TO READ IT! And it's great! NINA likes it! Heeheee, you have no idea how much i like luby's dates! It makes me have something to dream about during my boring history lessons. Geez, my life is boring.
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Apr 27, 2007 1:29:17 GMT 10
Post by lubbylover1 on Apr 27, 2007 1:29:17 GMT 10
Great
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