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Post by karo on Aug 27, 2007 10:30:22 GMT 10
yeayyy!!! they met!!! update soon!!
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Post by rangooner on Aug 28, 2007 0:18:06 GMT 10
haha... i did like the way carter 'promoted' Abby to Luka.. come back and update soon!
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Post by candya6446 on Aug 28, 2007 1:08:47 GMT 10
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Post by Rach :) on Aug 28, 2007 2:08:59 GMT 10
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Post by britneyluby on Aug 28, 2007 5:15:58 GMT 10
I like this story... update
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Post by daniella on Aug 29, 2007 10:17:58 GMT 10
Update... sorry, but it's a BIG chapter...
Hope you'll like it...
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Chapter 2: Arriving at Kisangani
It was evening when they arrived in Kisangani... Abby was the first to exit the car, even before her African friend turned off the motor...
Luka looked to her being circled by some children, then at the little hospital... it would be there that he would live for the next few months...
' Hope you didn't change your mind... ' said John. ' It's better than it looks, trust me.... '
John got out of the car, then Luka exited too, finally... a woman approached him...
' Hey, you must be Dr. Kovac... ' she said, as she extend her hand. ' I'm Jillian... '
Luka looked at her, then shook her hand...
' Nice to meet you... ' said Luka. ' Please, call me Luka... '
' Hey, Kovac... ' said John and Luka turned to him. ' Help us here, will you ? '
Luka turned back to Jillian and she nodded. He followed her, but sometimes he looked at Abby... it's appeared that she had transformed herself, from a serious, but kind doctor to a free woman, playing with the village kids...
' Hey, Luka... ' Jillian called and he entered the hospital... she waited to him and began a small tour with him... the hospital was little, but it had almost everything... even a trauma room and enfermary... when they were finished, Jillian said she would show her the doctors quarters...
Luka picked his bag and followed her, but at the same time he was exiting the hospital, Abby was coming by the same door... they almost hit each other...
' Sorry... ' he said, quickly.
' It's ok... ' she said, smiling.
They looked at each other, but then looked away... both were embarassed...
' Well, I see you later... ' said Abby, after a few seconds and Luka nodded, smilling...
' Sure... ' he said.
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Abby entered the hospital and saw John...
' Carter... ' she called and he looked up.
Abby motioned for him to follow her... he stopped and talked to his friend, who nodded... John got up and followed her to a different room, where the two of them could talk...
' The children look happy... ' he said.
Abby nodded...they certainly do... the conflict was far from there, thank God...
' What ? ' asked John.
' You said it was a woman that was coming here... ' Abby said, with her arms crossed over her chest...
She was in front of a gurney... John looked at her, at her closed form...
' The doctor who was about to come had an emergency in her family and since we were in need , the organization send us another...' explained John. ' Why is this such... '
He stopped in mid sentence and smiled at her.
' Oh, I get it... ' he said. ' Are you liking him ? Already ?'
' No... ' said Abby, but she could feel that it was a lie...
John knew that... he approached her and put a hand on her shoulder, as Abby looked down, feeling guilty...
' Abby, Richard would want you to be happy... ' he said. ' I know that his death was difficult to you, but you need to let go of the past and move on...'
' It's easy for you to say... ' Abby said, looking back at him...
' I'm not saying it will be easy, but I think it's time for you to live a little... ' said John.
With that, he exit the room, leaving Abby to think about what he said...
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Dani
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Post by rangooner on Aug 29, 2007 23:24:25 GMT 10
nice! can't wait for more update soon!
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Post by britneyluby on Aug 29, 2007 23:51:54 GMT 10
update update UPDATE!!!
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Post by charlie on Aug 30, 2007 1:46:22 GMT 10
Update Soon!!!!
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Post by lubbylover1 on Aug 30, 2007 9:09:03 GMT 10
Great update
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Post by karo on Aug 30, 2007 14:51:05 GMT 10
great update!!! update soon!!!
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Post by rorygilmore on Aug 30, 2007 17:31:46 GMT 10
Oooh, I must confess this trama is really interesting Dani. Very interesting, I think using Congo as background for a love Luby story is PERFECT. Can't wait to read what else you've got for us.
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Post by Rach :) on Aug 31, 2007 3:18:34 GMT 10
i like this, weird to think of Abby feeling down after the death of Richard lol but the story and the way you describe it is great!
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Post by daniella on Aug 31, 2007 4:32:33 GMT 10
Hey, just a few notes: 1 - Racho: Well, if you see Abby and Richard's relationship on the series, yes, it strange... but I decided to put them as a happy couple... just to variate a little 2 - Viviana: Don't worry... I'll put some French on the next update... 3 - And finally, thanks girls... I'm glad you're liking it... Now, the update... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 3: The day after... The next day 07:23 AM Luka exit the one bathroom that they had on the hospitals and went to take some breakfast with the others doctors... there, he saw Abby, John and Jillian, sitting on a table... ' Luka... ' called Jillian, smiling... He nodded and went to sit on the table, after taking a plate... ' Good morning... ' he said as he sat down, between Abby and Jillian, who was on the side of the table. ' How was your night ? ' asked John. ' Well, it was rough...' Luka said, as he put the a piece of bread on his plate. He was still stiff because of the airplane ride yesterday. ' I have to habituate to the fuse... ' ' Two days and you will be accustomed to it... ' Abby said. Luka nodded and they ate their breakfast. ' What's on for today ? ' he asked, when they were finished. ' Well, me and John need to go to Yangambi, near here...' Abby said. ' Sorry, Abby... I can't go... ' said John. ' I have to stay here... ' Abby looked at him. ' You said you'd go... ' she said to John. ' Well, Kem will be here in an hour with a patient that needs to be operated... ' said John. ' I need to assist the surgery... ' All the table staid silent. Abby and John looked at each other. ' Luka, can you go with her ? ' John asked. ' Sure... ' Luka said. ' I need to see what I'm going to find here... ' ' Ok... I wait outside by the car... ' said Abby, getting up from her place. Luka looked at her as John mumbled something under her breath. ' Did I do something wrong ? ' asked Luka, turning to face the others. ' Don't worry, she's like this since Richard... ' said John. ' Now, go... you don't want to let her waiting... ' Luka sighed... it would be a long time... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by karo on Aug 31, 2007 6:28:21 GMT 10
great update!!!! want to know what happens!
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