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Post by jaana on Sept 30, 2006 16:50:43 GMT 10
Awesome update! Another really soon!
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Post by lubyfan on Sept 30, 2006 22:48:45 GMT 10
Oh no.... Can't wait to read what's going to happen! Update soon  |
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Post by starbuck on Sept 30, 2006 22:49:12 GMT 10
NOO!!!  Abby should dump Missy right away, ugh! She trespasses on private property, maybe she got a thing for Luka (Well who hasn't ?  ) Update soon! 
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Post by strausser on Oct 2, 2006 1:05:49 GMT 10
hello?  update soon!!! |
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Post by josefine on Oct 2, 2006 3:22:19 GMT 10
***
Missy silently followed Abby as they walked off the beach. Once they started and were far enough away from the rocks and that boy, Missy wrapped the sweatshirt around Abby's shoulders.
She started thinking about the entire ordeal and while Missy may be shorter than this stranger she had just caught groping her new best friend, Missy was confident that she could out take him, if it came down to that. She was an expert in talking people into things. She wondered a minute why she’d involved herself so much in this, obviously short summer romance. She quickly remembers why; Abby was her friend and she didn’t want her to start spending all her time with a collage boy. Missy had a hard time making friends while living at her father’s motel, and when she finally found someone to be with, she would not let them be taken away from her.
"Abby-" Missy started to say, buts she stopped when Abby shoved her away from her.
"What did you say to him?" Abby’s voice was low and dark, a tone that Missy had never heard in her friend, ever.
"Nothing."
Abby laughed harshly, her voice muffled by her crying. "Well at least you both got your stories straight."
"You're too young to be doing that kind of thing with a guy that old anyway, Abbs. So forget about it."
"What the hell did you say to him?" She repeated.
Missy lost her temper. "I told him how old his new little girlfriend was. Or should I say how young. Jesus, Abby, the guy was practically my age, maybe even older." Missy shuddered at the idea of a older guy necking with a fifteen-year old.
"It's a good thing I came when I did," Missy continued, her voice steadily rising.
It was also a good thing no one was out this late, listening to them rant at each other.
"He could of taken advantage of you. He might have wanted a lot more than kissing and how the hell were you going to stop him?"
"I don't need you to protect me," Abby yelled back right into Missy’s face.
She had never been intimidated by older boys because of their size, and she wasn't now either.
"I can take care of myself. It would be my decision, anyway Missy, mine if I wanted him to stop or not. It's not yours. So just butt out, and leave me alone!"
Abby couldn't stand it anymore. She bolted ahead of her friend and ran towards the motel. Missy sadly watched as Abby ran away from her. She felt bad for how her friend was feeling right now, but she didn't feel sorry. Missy would do anything to protect friends from older guys like that. When she had arrived at the beach to pick up Abby she became concerned when she wasn't in front of the lifeguard stand like she said she would be. When she saw a couple sitting rather intimately on the rocks on the other side of the beach, she never thought that it would be her friend and some creep. Missy had to fight the urge to grab Abby away from the stranger when she saw the two kissing. It made her sick that some guy would take advantage of a girl her age like that. Thank God she came when she did.
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Luka hadn't moved since the brown-headed girl and her older friend had left him. He felt so awful. Where did that spiteful comment come from? The moment he uttered that awful zinger, he immediately regretted it once he saw that beautiful face crumple in tears. He wanted to apologize immediately, throw himself down on the sand and beg forgiveness, but he didn't. Maybe it was better this way. He was so confused. He didn't know what to think of the beautiful stranger he had spent the evening with. They had talked and shared secrets and kisses that were so wonderful. He had thought she was younger than him, but not that young. God, he thought with a nauseous feeling in his stomach, she was just a little older than his best friend Lee’s sister in Croatia.
Luka glared up at the sky. I don't believe in you anymore, he said defiantly to the God who he had praised just ten minutes ago. What kind of God would bring him such a beautiful girl who seemed years more intelligent than he and then snatch her away with the horrible fact that she was barely a teenager?
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Post by megan on Oct 2, 2006 3:31:37 GMT 10
ah geez. i hope this ends happy. as in abby and luka hook up again. lol. great update and cant wait for more!
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 2, 2006 3:37:12 GMT 10
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Post by erfan228 on Oct 2, 2006 3:50:43 GMT 10
Great update! They better get together!!! Please update soon
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 2, 2006 5:29:26 GMT 10
Update soon
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Post by xbostonxbabyx on Oct 2, 2006 6:42:22 GMT 10
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Post by jadestar on Oct 2, 2006 11:04:50 GMT 10
wonderful update - please do write more!!!  |
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Post by jaana on Oct 2, 2006 21:23:17 GMT 10
Great update! Another soon. |
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Post by strausser on Oct 2, 2006 21:41:22 GMT 10
update soon but please promise me they will be together eventually!
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Julianna (juscully)
Duchess of Luby
"I don't want to be alone, I want to be left alone.? Audrey Hepburn
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Post by Julianna (juscully) on Oct 3, 2006 0:33:59 GMT 10
yay, there was a first (and second and third ) kiss... but shame on you for bringing Missy into it and ruining everything!!!! Please make it better!  |
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Post by charlieluby on Oct 3, 2006 1:58:30 GMT 10
I just read this from the beggining. It was such perfect lubyness and now Missy has gone and ruined it all! Please update soon and sort out all this mess! What does age matter anways! Love this fic it has me hooked! x
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update soon!!!
